Shrouding the Heavens: Reborn as the Carefree Heavenly Venerate, I Crush the Enemies of the World

Xiaoyao Tianzun's imperial weapon is the Xiaoyao Treasure Vase, which is made of the fairy gold Green Tears, one of the nine immortal golds. It appears in the original work when fighting against Ye Fan. In addition, Xiaoyao Tianzun is in the original work of the Age of Mythology. After fighting against the emperor, the Heavenly Court fell apart and went to the underworld. Then in the ancient times or the ancient times, he took away the body of a righteous person who was going through the tribulation and then entered the restricted area of ​​​​life, the Sea of ​​Reincarnation.

You don't think of the Fairy Bell as your main weapon. It's okay to comprehend the law, but it's meaningless to use it as your main weapon. Let's not talk about whether the Fairy Bell can be controlled. Even if you can control it, it's not completely unpleasant to refine it yourself. Each supreme weapon is the most suitable for you, and it is also a great point of enjoyment and selling point. You might as well engrave the Fairy Bell's rules on the green gold bottle of Fairy Tears and finally sublimate it into a fairy weapon. The existence of the Fairy Bell in the original work is just like that.

The writing is generally good, but there are two common sense errors. The first point is that there are no restricted areas in Beidou in the Mythical Age. The restricted areas are almost all on Feixianxing, which is the road to immortality that Emperor Zun took, and the place where the blood sacrifice snake and Nirvana Tianzun were opened in the second immortality road in the original work. The Beidou restricted area was moved by the Supreme in order to open the first immortality road in the original work and later generations moved there. This is the first point. The second point is that the article says many times that the protagonist is the second generation in his later years and still maintains a certain level of Tianzun's peak combat power. I want to say this is impossible, the protagonist must have killed himself. Even if the protagonist is a Heavenly Lord who has attained Dao before Emperor Zun, it is impossible for him to maintain the perfect Heavenly State, because if the protagonist does not commit suicide, Emperor Zun will not be able to attain Dao in his first life, unless Emperor Zun in his first life is like the original protagonist Ye Fan, breaking through the shackles of the Dao of enlightened people like the Golden Crow Emperor, breaking the ten thousand paths and overriding the mark of nature to defy heaven and attain Dao. If this is the case, it is impossible for the protagonist and other supreme beings not to know about this. The setting of the original work is that after the enlightened person has passed away for thousands of years, his greatness will disappear, and other people will have the opportunity to become enlightened, unless they are like Ye Fan. The essence of the supreme self-destruction is the same. Give yourself a knife so that your Tao fruit will no longer be perfect. He will take the initiative to fall down from the Imperial Tao fruit position and peel off the Tianxin mark. The Tianxin mark will automatically determine the death of the enlightened person. After ten thousand years, the Tao will dissipate and others can realize the Tao. Therefore, in the case of the Emperor's enlightenment, it is impossible for the protagonist to still have the perfect Tianzun realm unless the ultimate realm is sublimated. The reason why the immortals of the Immortal Lord remain intact is because of the Emperor's nine-turn elixir.

The protagonist didn't kill himself, but he didn't expect the author to give himself a knife🤦‍♂️

If you are in the early stage, you can study the method of transforming the Holy Spirit, keep the elixir but don't take it, and when your life span is almost over, kill yourself with a knife and use the divine source seal to last for millions of years. If it cannot survive, it will begin to turn into the Holy Spirit Stone Fetus (if it fails, just take the elixir). The Holy Spirit Stone Fetus will take millions of years to gestate, but it can last for millions of years. The birth of the Holy Spirit will directly lead to Dzogchen (the self-destructing immortal platform has also been restored). As long as you do not penetrate the path and fruit of the previous life, you can practice Dzogchen and perfect yourself, and there is no elixir, so you can just lie down and enter the immortal realm.

Why doesn't the author update it?

Get some female protagonists, even just write a chapter and mention a sentence or two at the end. It feels wrong to not have a female protagonist. Ye Fan has Ji Ziyue and several other beauties, such as No. 10 Liu Shen and Huo Ling'er. Chu Loli, Yaoyao and so on.

There is absolutely no need to write about Emperor Zun in such a dark way. I feel that there is something missing in the Zhetian fanfic compared to Emperor Zun and Immortal Emperor.

I remember that the Immortal Emperor secretly attacked Emperor Zun and proclaimed himself the Emperor of Ten Thousand Years. After all, he had to wait until Emperor Zun's traces of the Great Emperor Dao were dissipated before he could become the Emperor. Not everyone was the protagonist. Ye Fan destroyed all the Dao and became the Emperor.

Dear author, don't forget that the Fairyland requires three mortal fairies and coordinates to open it. It doesn't matter whether the restricted area is flat or not, just use it as a training ground. Just do yourself a favor and don't let the Forbidden Zone Supreme drag the Emperor to death, the Nine Holy Bodies and the Void. And don't write too much about people who are walking around the world. If they can really leave, there won't be only three people who go to Ye Fan's place. If his descendants could leave, they would not put the fairyland in the coffin.