Breakthrough 1983

I want to write about the Qin Da fool who has the majesty of his father, but he writes about the incompetent, angry, arrogant and unreasonable middle-aged Qin. Qin Da has such a father, it is impossible to succeed, because his father just keeps holding him back.

The author said that the cruel ones were sentenced, so why don't you say that the cruel ones succeeded? Which of those bosses' first pot of gold was not dripping with blood? First black and then bleach, weren't there many people in those days? "Old man" is now a derogatory term, which means letting others bully

I hope this book sticks around

The writing is a bit too northeastern, so readers will have polarized opinions. Those who like it will find it interesting, but those who don't will not want to read it after reading two chapters. I personally think that online articles should add some local characteristics while taking into account the general public. Local characteristics should be highlights, not a tool to refine readers.

It's a bit confusing to read more than a dozen chapters, and it's only suitable for readers in the Northeast region. If it's for all readers, it has to be written in a way that everyone can understand. There are a lot of dialects, slang, catchphrases, slang, and the original interaction of regional local customs. There are many things that you can't understand or understand.

Come on, the writing is very down-to-earth, don't be too impatient! Also, you can still be more effective in this small fight. When the team is integrated, the situation is a bit bigger than before!

Everyone who has earned monthly votes has voted here. Hold on to this one.

I want to see Past Events in the Northeast. You can just go to the mountain for me. If you want to see the mountain, I won't go see those few.

Come on, I just want to see you write these twists and turns. I will give you all the monthly tickets and order all the books.

The older generation of Northeasterners don't open their mouths like this and can't speak without swearing.

Hahaha

He has strong writing skills and maintains quality and quantity.

It's so verbose! ! The plot of the story is advanced slowly and I don't talk about it. Some nonsense is said back and forth!

Does the author have no idea about money? Build with all your strength

What's going on? Very well written!

Even though it's not finished, I'll give you the monthly and recommended tickets.

Have you rested during the holidays? Suddenly there was no update and I felt panicked.

It's too wordy, can it be more concise?