Simulating Crime, Who Asked You to Act the Perfect Crime?

1. The issue of corpses, real corpses or fake corpses? What do you want your police dog to smell? 2. The hair of peripheral female Liu Yue (who was caught before) was left in the car (found after being fished out of the water more than a week later). May I ask, the actor who played the deceased drove the show crew's car to visit prostitutes a week before the filming of this episode? Do you think it's appropriate? 3. You have to introduce a missing sister, a lost memory, and a mysterious organization. If the writing is insufficient, introduce these plots that are very unfavorable for this subject. I personally feel that if you can't grasp it, it is better not to write these messy things; 4. While the male guests remain unchanged (2 episodes of the program were recorded previously), new female guests are added. The setting is two very popular and beautiful female stars (top-level). Although the crime-solving team is not allowed to access the Internet during the program, everyone knows that this case is a variety show, so the murderer is among these three people. But the author's description is as if the crime-solving team no longer recognizes them, and they feel that "a good person has been wronged" because they can't find any evidence, and "my intuition tells me that there is something wrong with these three people." There are many such descriptions. 5. I didn't know the significance of the appearance of the character "Misery Woman", so I knelt down for five hours, and no one stopped me while the show crew watched. The program team has confirmed that it is true, and the female guests and the program team can completely buy some hot searches to raise funds. After all, the setting of this "misfortunate girl" is indeed miserable, and the author's arrangement is a bit too forceful. 6. The author's writing style is very fragmented. "This bitch", "Why are you", "Why am I", "These days", "What's the matter", "Come here quickly", "How many times have you come here", these are all part of what he said 🤔. The author has seen the paragraph comment and will not change it. 7. When a policewoman ate braised chicken and met two yellow men, it would be outrageous not to bite them to death and not have prostitutes before. Still arguing about whoring on Wednesday and Thursday is too deliberate. 8. Arrest warrants and search warrants do not matter; 9. How can a female police officer call a young woman "this young woman"? This policewoman still wears leather pants and black stockings every day 🙏, and sleeps in the freezer. Bro, the urban variety show you wrote is not fantasy. After looking through other comments, the author has no intention of explaining or correcting it. I have written a lot if I don't want to complain, and I am happy. Feel free to delete comments

It doesn't feel like a variety show at all. It's just using the gimmick of a variety show to copy crime cases and comment on live broadcasts. Many places are very far-fetched, especially when it is written later that the character Liu Huaqiang played by Sun Honglei died. How could the director team not know about this? If it was not the plot arranged by the director team, then how did Sun Honglei know that his character died? Sun Honglei didn't think the character deserved to die. He himself did not die, and the director team didn't make any arrangements. Why did his character die? Just because Andy Lau made him feel like he really wanted to commit suicide, he said his character was dead?

Cheng Xiaoxiao

Didn't anyone find the first plot awkward?

Mu Zhiyu

Meng Ziyu

This Q organization is really unpopular. There are bugs in the original logic. Adding this Q organization will directly fill up the bugs. You are making a variety show, and there is a script and context. In the first case, you can forcefully explain that the protagonist does not have a camera and the body crew faked it. The second case is just letting yourself go. In the plot of Q, there was no pre-arrangement for Liu Huaqiang's death. How did the criminal police conduct an autopsy to determine suicide? Andy Lau used hints to kill Liu Huaqiang. How could you commit the crime perfectly without the cooperation of the script? Originally, it was already disgusting to have a Q nail in the crew that couldn't be pulled out, but it ended up getting bigger and bigger, completely ignoring logic and completely letting go. How come it feels so similar to the crappy reality movie made by Cat?

Andy Lau was a good person before, but after his appearance, the plot and world view turned into shit 🙂

The author's book is ideally designed to help people kneel down and march to collect medical expenses. Don't forget that the audience in the book is indignant and generally moral. In reality, under the influence of all kinds of bad things, morality has plummeted. In this case, drinking poison to quench thirst is absolutely impossible. Doing this is like a wolf coming, and there is really no way to save it if it slips.

The protagonist feels very conflicted and cheap. In the previous chapter, he said that it would be enough to spend enough money, but then he joined the show crew. Obviously I don't want to deal with Uncle Hat, but I still keep trying to get together online. Moreover, Uncle Hat asked you to write as if you can't afford it. If you can't afford it, don't play it. Now it's like a big villain.

It's understandable to create a virtual world, which can reduce the sense of dissonance, but it's a bit boring to create a virtual world without memory. What's the point of using the protagonist's time traveler advantage and the acting skills rewarded by the system in this way?

It's similar to an escape novel, but the rest is a simulation. You can't tell whether it's true or false, and it's full of contradictions. First of all, the protagonist travels through a parallel world, and the setting is basically the same for all the stars. Even though many movies and TV series have not been made, why do they have to appear like characters in the movie world? It's like the protagonist traveling through the movie's comprehensive world. The last point is whether the corpse is real or fake. Why did Detective Tang and the other two want to vomit when they saw the corpse?

I could still take a look at the front, but I stopped looking at the part about forgetting the memory holographic projection. It feels like the author is a little unsure of his position. The settings are changing all the time. Hard to bear. I wish the author finished writing. Waiting for the next one.

In fact, I feel that it would be better to use a virtual world view. The director opens a virtual world when filming starts and gives the actors the characters they need. The actors do not enter the real memory and enter the virtual world to act. They only remember the script memory given by the director and exit the virtual world when they are offline!

The background of the protagonist's sister's disappearance is given, but it is rarely mentioned in the article. Doesn't it mean that you join the variety show to find someone to help find your sister? The protagonist is so busy signing contracts, making money, and eating soft food that he has forgotten his original intention?

I've seen this stuff written by others. It's all this routine. But there is a small bug. What is the so-called [corpse]? According to this routine, how can an actor play a murderer and use a mechanism to kill people? How does an autopsy perform after death?

The relationship between variety shows and real crimes is very confusing. Variety shows are always variety shows. It would be fine if the positive side wins in the ending. If the negative side wins, how can such a mystery remain and just ignore it? We abide by the agreement during the filming. It would be wrong not to ask clearly about the situation after the filming. It can be said that the method is not disclosed online for the purpose of the show to prevent simulated crimes. But knowing a perfect crime method, the real police department has no measures at all and it is very brainless.

If this kind of "criminal master" type plot was completely written in Wenzhaogong, there would be nothing to watch, and the protagonist would not be able to be shaped at all under a fixed plot direction.

Starting from Chapter 83, in the virtual space, you can control the protagonist's memory technology and you can exit.

To put it simply, this is a crime infinite flow covered in a variety show. To put it simply, it is to sew those crime movies into parallel universes in another form, just like the reborn domestic entertainment super movie. It mainly tests the author's writing skills, but after watching it for a long time, it feels ordinary. It is completely an alternative movie commentary. There are manslaughter, Suspect

This book looks awesome but is actually very weak, the kind that is neither high nor low! It does not reflect the essence of high-intelligence crime and solving crimes.

There are so many flaws that I don't know where to start. There must be a problem with the setting. There is a director but no script. Everyone follows the settings and cooperates perfectly. Even the director doesn't know what happened. Andy Lau killed his brother through the air in prison. You can say psychological suggestion or something, but the director doesn't know what the situation is or how to kill him. Please, you are killing a plot character. It needs to be faked. The director didn't know it. He also let the two of them face off. I'm still scared. I'm so scared.

Warning, author, you have violated the unforgivable sins (greed, hatred, and obsession) in the Galaxy Law of Justice. I, the Xingtian Armor, declare to deprive you of all rights and seal and arrest you. Just go ahead and arrest you!

Brothers. It is the first time for a newcomer to come to Qidian to write a book. Nowadays, the number of words is small and it seems normal that it is not satisfying. However, it is very important to read the new book issue. It is about recommendation. I ask for your support.

It feels like it was written by AI, very bad

I've had this feeling vaguely since the so-called perfect driving of always keeping a distance of five meters. What's going on?

What I wrote before was okay, but later on the author's positioning of the work was very problematic, and he borrowed it from short plays, 😅😅😅. It's really difficult to write a work like this that wants to portray a high-IQ duel. If you haven't thought about it clearly, you should not touch this kind of subject. Otherwise, you have to consider the author's own psychological endurance. It is inevitable that the majority of book friends will complain and abandon the book, and it will be difficult to stick to it until the end.

It would probably be better without the mystery aspect. I stopped watching it if it was added.

Astonishing! ! ! I saw this book at 23 o'clock Stayed up until 2 o'clock It's so good This book deserves a better score It's not even as good as this in the rankings The starting point is crazy now We need to discover good books

Why are there so many typos lately!