Do You Know That It Starts with the Legitimate Son of the Gu Family?

When I read the book, I didn't realize it, but when I listened to the dialogue, the characters kept talking about who they were. . . . . It's very annoying and needs to be changed. It would be better for the author to listen to a few chapters with a lot of dialogue between characters. .

It's understandable not to mention Minglan as the heroine, but why the character Minglan was deleted? I've rarely seen people write film and television fan fiction that deletes all the important characters in the original drama. If you write a novel that mentions Minglan as the heroine, it's okay if you don't include her. If you leave it there, you can just mention the plot of the Sheng family in a few strokes. What's the point of deleting it?

If the heroine Minglan is not written, the book will be useless.

Dear gentlemen, let me introduce myself. My surname is Zhang, so I don't know if I am from the Zhang family in the last book. I don't have the habit of cheating on myself, so I won't write Minglan 😅

Several of your books are like this, full of dialogues and very little narration.

The novel about the big heroine, has the heroine been deleted? So why don't you write one yourself. . . . .

Do You Know is a good story, at least much better than that of Siheyuan. I can't understand why it's so little written. It's hard to find a good one to read. This one is awesome. I wrote 3 books in a row and deleted the heroine directly. It's amazing. Writing 3 books in a row, do you know that the author probably likes this story, right? Probably so? Well, I really can't understand the evil protagonist's operation of deleting the heroine, so what are you going to let everyone see? Without Minglan, it can be said that there is basically no need to write the story of the Sheng family. The original drama is still a semi-imaginary world view, and historical classification is not included. The protagonist has superior military strength, and then he becomes an official, burns a cold stove, watches the emperor's excitement, and fights, and then what? Why did you write this book? A roasted whole lamb using rat meat pretending to be lamb is outrageous.

With the layout and punctuation, it's hard to imagine that you actually wrote a million words and finished it.

It doesn't matter who it is, what's important is that you have to write about the Machiavellian War in a wonderful way so that people can read it.

Please accept it

This heroine is well chosen and has new ideas.

Small monthly ticket, come on

Wouldn't it be enough if you didn't write Minglan as the protagonist? If you deleted Minglan, OK, this book is completely useless. I didn't ask you to delete the protagonist when I asked you to be a fan.

Come on, support me

I feel that there are too many loopholes. Prices should also be divided into households. All four and five bedrooms should be divided. Unless there are elders above, and the one who is Gu Tingye's personal maid, it should be in Gu Tingye's yard. Then no one will see other small companies and so on? Even the matron cannot make the decision when someone breaks into Gu Tingye's yard. Do you understand that ancient times were a patriarchal society after all?

You should post it to a female channel. Changing the protagonist's identity to a twin brother and a boy is not inconsistent at all.

Come on

The throne of Ta Ma has attracted several emperors, and it can be regarded as a trick, although it is very childish.

The first part of this book is average, but the part where Zhao Zongquan gets into trouble and the protagonist gets into the palace is really wonderful. It's a pity that few people can read it.

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