Longevity: Mediocre Qualifications, so He Had No Choice but to Become an Immortal

There are few geniuses to begin with, and ordinary people are the norm. I support protagonists like Li Xianzhi who are diligent and can make up for their shortcomings.

Frog Qu, when I saw the protagonist taking out his storage bag and selling potential stocks, he was given one or two pieces of Bisui Chun as a gift. Yun Yu really has a good eye! I hope the protagonist buys the elixir and recovers quickly. I can't wait to watch the outer sect competition! !

It's a very down-to-earth book, step by step, down-to-earth and getting stronger all the time. So far it's quite well written, the writing is very good, keep up the good work!

The previous plot is not good. You can obviously rely on plug-ins, practice for a period of time, and then consider killing. This way it will not be too conflicting. You only need to fight for the outer gate competition. You have just traveled through time, why should you want the grand prize

Isn't it a joke that a family of three monks who are in the late stage of Qi training are bullying others in the Jindan Sect?

It's very interesting. The author will update more!

It felt okay at the beginning when the villain came, but then it was completely brainless. The training was also in a hurry, and there was no sense of freedom that should be achieved by cultivating immortals. Of course, I am talking about the early stage. Low level does not mean freedom. There is not much introduction to the background at the beginning. There is not even a big world or a framework. I know the author wants the protagonist to upgrade and then slowly expand, but I just feel like I am trapped in a small place. I know nothing about the world. The protagonist may know it, but the reader does not. If the world background, sphere of influence, etc. Are introduced at the beginning, just a little bit, I think the reading experience will be better.

You are suitable for a Gou Dao development flow protagonist, but in the end... You are still stiff.

Is there anything bad or bad about my plot? Or suggestions for the plot and subsequent arrangements for the protagonist. You can reply to your comments below.

Quite interesting! Just too little!

I seem to have read this book somewhere. It seems that the Ling family was wiped out after buying the Foundation Establishment Pill. In the end, the Foundation Establishment Pill fell into the protagonist's storage bag by chance.

Well, I haven't read it yet, but I saw the picture of a handsome AI posted in the comments. Is this a gay story? Oh, it should be a love letter about a boyfriend?

Updated!

There are too many typos. Sometimes my surname is Zhang and sometimes my surname is Su.

Borrowing precious treasures to push the book, "I will clean up the Tibetan Scripture Pavilion at the beginning, and I will complete the incomplete skills." Mortal flow, Gou Dao flow, IQ will not decrease if IQ is online, the protagonist's magical power refers to ancient magic: a wonderful pen creates a dragon, scattering beans to form an army, dividing the ground to form a river, etc. Interested Taoist friends can take a look. If you are bothering me, please contact me. [Asking mortals to recommend each other's authors]