Rebirth in 1997, Starting from Court Internship

What is the title of your web article? Starting from the court internship, readers may preconceptions that the court line is the main line, making money is the secondary line, and the emotional line affects the court line. If you arrange for the protagonist to go into business, is it still a step-by-step journey from court internship to the pinnacle of life? No, your main line has changed. It is no longer the court as the main line, but the business line as the main line. It's really stupid that you collected 20,000 yuan for your first book. 😅😅😅

Is it written about a loser who is reborn and continues to be a waste? It's not a bit satisfying. It makes me sad to watch it.

I can read whatever you write 10 years from now! In 1997, I fucking played several of them! This kind of indecisive guy who talks about breaking up every now and then but never ends up with her is still a useless snack even if he is reborn ten times without cheating!

So blatantly having too many female leads? The protagonist you wrote is a public official, the author

Reincarnation back to 97 actually requires a dog

Except for the exaggeration in terms of making money in business, other aspects are quite well written!

Your transition is too fast. You have to space it out by at least one line, otherwise it will be uncomfortable to watch. Just forget about that wife who is 10 years younger than you. You will be really tortured when you are reborn.

Don't just write about Yi Hui, write more about prosperous wealth.

Write according to your own ideas and persevere. Sooner or later more people will like it.

Very good🙂

The writing is true and interesting. I will give you 17 votes.

Prosperous wealth, really prosperous wealth, the golden finger of the protagonist.