Sanxing Han Dynasty Began with the Pavilion Chief

My grandfather had an old relationship with Dong Zhuo. Why not vote for it. You don't even have a reputation now. I'm also afraid of damaging my reputation. Like Aha. After the eunuch. He is suspicious and cruel. Bullying the emperor. Will it influence him to establish the foundation of Cao Wei? History is written by the victors. Moreover, the protagonist can quickly strengthen himself by joining Dong Zhuo. Just show your talent. Asking to marry Dong's daughter. Dong Zhuo entered Luoyang someday. How can one treat the protagonist badly? At that time, whether it is to go to a local place to serve as a prefect to cultivate the foundation. Or wait until Dong Zhuo's death to inherit the Xiliang army to counterattack Chang'an. They are all top choices. What a great way to start. Moreover, the Kansai scholars even dreamed of returning to their Western Han Dynasty political stage. At that time, the people from Kansai will be supported. There is nothing to fear in Guandong. So how can we avoid real benefits based on false reputation? And Hedong. There are many generals in Bingzhou. You can protect Dong Zhuo's subordinates and cultivate your own minions. Plus arrange it in advance. What's the difficulty in taking over the Xiliang army? Moreover, Grand Master Dong, who had not entered the capital, had a good reputation. He is a disciple of the Yuan family

The writing is okay, but I always feel that the lines are not quite right, the description of the protagonist's surroundings is not so clear, and the ideas are not so broad. And all the superiors of the protagonist are written as if they are brainless, which is not normal. The protagonist's family and the families with salt fields are attracted by the county magistrate. Is this deliberately forcing all the families with salt fields to join forces to kill him? Private salt dealers, there should be some in the protagonist's family, right? It's impossible that there weren't many rangers who killed officials at that time! To say that a county magistrate is a bit too cruel (dozens of concubines died) is a bit too stupid. There are no parents or brothers among these dozens? There are hundreds of people in the protagonist's family, or tens of thousands of people if you add one dollar, and they are all pretty. Don't these women have some suitors, or are they already married? Even if you play around, you'll get a lot of people killed. It feels so mindless

At the level of the protagonist, not to mention Gaozu's incompetence, he can't even kill as decisively as an ordinary poor family. It's better not to fight for hegemony and harm others. He is purely an ordinary person with good intentions but incomplete, and will be played to death by others.

It's boring. The main character is as brainless as there is no main plot. The most important thing is, at that time you knew that someone was going to harm you, so you needed evidence?

How many people will be left after conquering the entire Three Kingdoms? 50 Million people died and only a few million were left. What kind of heroes and civil servants are all butchers?

What kind of county magistrate and boss is this? He has been in office for a while. It is written that the county magistrate and boss robbed 50 local women and killed a dozen of them. None of you were prepared at all. You knew clearly that he came to check the heads, but you still didn't let the pretty villagers stay away. You put on some ugly makeup and was seen, and started to rob the script. The time traveler didn't have any plans at all? Are all the awesome tribesmen in my hometown stupid?

Just a little preparation in the early stage will be enough. For example, make friends with heroes. Make some more money. The plot advances a little faster. Then he will perform meritorious service and become a prefect to cultivate his minions. Yi Yuan Cong. Imperial clan. Relatives. The poor family is the basic market. You must have your own territory as early as possible. Even bribing eunuchs will do. Don't be afraid of tarnishing your reputation. The battle for hegemony is ultimately about the sword. History is also written by the victors. As cruel as Cao Cao. After being scolded for being a spoiler. It doesn't affect his ability to conquer the world at all. Xun Yu also took the eunuch's daughter. Don't miss the opportunity like Liu Bei. Resulting in displacement everywhere. It was only in his later years that he established his foundation. The protagonist was born in Hedong. You can consider establishing yourself in Bingzhou. Take the Li Tang route. Because there are two opportunities to enter Guanzhong. When the Grand Master died. Li Jue and Guo Si were in civil strife. Support the people of Kansai. There is hope for the world. Because Kansai only needs three points of vitality. At least it is Yuwentai's foundation. Because Kansai warriors can fight. Moreover, the noble clans and warriors in Kansai would like to return to the Western Han Dynasty even in their dreams. The protagonist only needs to show competence. There is no reason why they should not vote. But looking at the synopsis, it seems to be a story about falling grass and rising from the grass. Then you have to make more sworn vows. Accept more adopted children. Coerce the people to plunder the treasury. Attack Uburg. I made my first pot of gold. During this period, the team was executed. Use the population base to build a group of elite and capable direct troops. But we must prevent the warrior from backlash

I read it, and the author is very talented and has platinum status. . . The IQs of the county magistrate and the chief registrar are not bad, but the character descriptions are too simple or thin. For example, the part where the magistrate and the chief registrar control the protagonist is well written and has a sense of conspiracy. However, if the characters are well described, for example, the expressions of the county magistrate and other descriptions are added, it will be a superior work. In short, the plot is very good, with ups and downs, but the portrayal of the tasks is poor. For example, Guan Yu, such an important character, is just a nine-footer. The supporting characters should be surprised by his tallness and mightiness to reflect his tallness and mightiness. Disadvantages: The protagonist and supporting characters are too thin, but the plot strategy is okay and not very intellectual.

The protagonist's origin. Investing as a director is the best way out. At that time, Taishi Dong will be Principal Erzhu. The protagonist is King Gao. What's wrong with having Grand Master Dong serve as the king's pioneer?

I have already written about it, no matter how meritorious and favored Zhang Zang Zhao Zhong is, he will always be a slave and cannot influence the emperor's thoughts. Instead, he wants Emperor Bajie. Nowadays, there is a trend in novels that people like Bajie can accomplish anything. I didn't read it before because the previous protagonists lived too miserable, but I know that the court's control over the local area will definitely decline in the last years of the dynasty. And the imperial power does not go to the countryside, so there is no need to make the court so scary. What we really need to guard against are the local tyrants and the highest-ranking officials, such as prefects and county magistrates. After all, current officials are not as good as current managers. But then again, the protagonist's Hedong County is indeed a dangerous place, equivalent to the doorstep of the imperial court.

I can only say that Gao Shun's portrayal was a failure. He completely followed the description in the book. He was stern and did not drink. Don't forget that there is a prerequisite for these, which is to be in the army and attached to the protagonist's family. The protagonist toasted him with a drink, but he said that if he didn't drink, his emotional intelligence would be too low. Why not kill innocent women and children? This was someone who had been a soldier? Don't you know that Compassion does not control soldiers? Just based on this sentence, if the protagonist uses him in the future, I will look down on the protagonist.

A novice's way of writing is basically cool and thankless in today's fast food era.

After reading everyone's feedback, I generally felt that the pace was a bit slow and the start was a bit depressing and not satisfying enough. Well, 60,000 words have already been spent killing the county magistrate, is the pace still slow... As for the start that is not good enough, a normal person would definitely feel uncomfortable and unaccustomed to a dark and oppressive and cruel era like the end of Han Dynasty, when human life was like a piece of grass, right? It may be that the author is not strong enough and did not handle it well. But no matter what, the pace will speed up later. ...... In addition, if you have any questions, you can leave a message. As long as you don't curse, the author will not delete the comment.

The main character was born too young. The world will not be in chaos. A person who has no future. It is recommended that the author speed up the plot. It is best to let the grand master enter the capital before 200,000 words. And the protagonist maintains the plot. It won't matter if it's a rebellion then. Or you can appoint yourself as the prefect. History from ancient times to the present tells us. Son of Heaven. Those with strong soldiers and horses should do it. The four hundred years of Han Dynasty are actually not as deeply rooted in the hearts of the people as imagined. Because the Han Dynasty was just a plaque for the Guandong gentry to gain profits. Of course. There are definitely loyal ones. But most of it is for personal gain. Especially when the world is in chaos. Did the Han Dynasty really have so many loyal ministers? Not necessarily. They are all just fighting for power and gain under the pretext of excuses. If only there were so many loyal ministers. This world can't reach this point

Reading the title of the book, one would not think of the Three Revitalizations of the Han Dynasty. What is the Han Dynasty wearing a waistcoat? Any establishment of a country based on privileges is a continuation of decadence and stubbornness.

It's well written, but there are too few updates.

The writing is very good and has that flavor. I hope to continue my efforts and recreate a touching journey to the end of the Han Dynasty.

There are no other shortcomings except that it is too delayed, the progress is too slow, and it is endlessly verbose. People are here to see the Three Kingdoms fandom, not you. Your original original plot in the early stage is almost enough. Since you are so slow, I am curious about how many chapters you have to write?

It's too rough, there are too many flaws, Liu Heng's grandmother is the Liu family; the county prince is obviously the enemy, and perhaps the mastermind who framed the protagonist, and he also wants to send the murderer to prison. The logic is difficult to reconcile.

What you said in the comment section is right. The character of the male protagonist is very unlikable and twisted. He doesn't feel like he has entered the ancient times.

Your writing on paper is a bit too wishful thinking on such a large scale, and it is still blank paper. If you were in the Wei, Jin, Southern and Northern Dynasties, it would be reasonable, but at this time, you are using bamboo slips and cloth. Some of you are too detailed, and some are too unreasonable.

Brother, please slow down the update 😭

Bring the Mohist family out to engage in technology::: Massive steel smelting and popularization of steel tools::: Only then can we engage in large-scale production::::: All soldiers have steel armor and are level A::: Let's unify hard power::::: It would be great if the dissatisfied aristocratic families and tycoons are building roads and mining:::: No need for intrigues

It's so toxic. I've read a lot of historical articles, but I really can't stand this one.

Ordinary people don't know how to read:: It's not that fools can learn to read:: Don't write that ordinary people are: cannon fodder: farming: paying taxes: tools::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::