Emperor of Heaven, Starting from the Prince of Qi Luck Immortal Dynasty

It looks good, but I personally think that the punishment for the brother at the beginning is a little low. This kind of fratricide should be severely punished. No one would want such a person to be in power. This kind of behavior should be very taboo and not so easy to happen. Maybe it would be better to write that one of the important subordinates of the elder brother privately advocated using other methods to deceive the family elders.

It looks good, but I feel like there is too much introduction. Let's talk more about the plot. Some things have been briefly mentioned. This kind of subject requires 1,000 chapters to be readable. Too many introductions are too watery

It's not bad, but it's a bit vicious that the male protagonist wants to take over the power of his mother's clan. Their mother was killed by them, which also caused the male protagonist to be born prematurely. If they want to block his way, will they kill them in the future?

I don't know why, but when I first read the introduction, I thought the main character was called Yi Shu. 🙂

Some people say why you never choose someone who can improve your foundation and make your heels better. I don't know what the author is thinking. He is just looking for difficulties.

Where did it come from the Dragon Clan? Yours is the only one I have nailed. You're a bit unfinished. It's also difficult to comment on the realm of writing.

Is there any connection with your first book?

The status of the 36 magical powers among serious Taoists is quite high. I hope I can write them with style. Come on.

Come on, duck, it looks pretty good to me.

Speechless. Just make a statue out of clay? At least replace it with spiritual materials or something like that.