I Summon an Army of Ancient Monks in the Supernatural World

，， But the problem with the current forty chapters, as many people have said, is that the pace is slow. In fact, there is no problem with the slow pace, but the main problem is the exposition of the worldview with a stick here and there a hammer, which is an extremely big problem! ! ! Because the reader is from God's perspective and in the third person, it is very uncomfortable to watch. Moreover, the protagonist is a bit aggrieved at the moment, and the changes in beliefs within the official body are also a bit blunt and a bit harshly emphasized. (Looking at a lot of things is very confusing. Although the reality is also a grass-roots team, at least the program with bugs can operate normally.) The settings are thrown, and they are ordinary, with pieces here and there. It's a bit like the outline is too short, and then you add it wherever you think of it, and then you add it as the plot goes. If the problems seen in the more than forty chapters so far are solved, this book can be regarded as an excellent book (if it is not unfinished and there are no big problems in the later period) (only counting the total of more than forty chapters so far).

The main problem is that the pace is too slow, I don't have the mood to continue watching, and the plot twists are a bit blunt.

Depending on the settings, the preparation before putting it on the shelves is not good. Can the author continue writing? Order everything once it's available.

Is it too watery? The pace is too slow, it's all about chatting

What did you write about earlier? The inexplicable plot.

There are always people who can endure it and read it. Author, don't be impatient and write at your own pace.

The settings are messy and not pleasant to watch.

The opening is different. Although it is a bit long-winded, the overall story is very story-telling. I like it, please update.

If you think it's okay, why don't you insist on becoming a eunuch? Even if you just practice writing by yourself! After all, if you don't have experience writing long novels, you won't be able to seize the opportunity in the future! ! ! I know that there are three or four books, all of which are very creative and average in writing. They are food and grass, not fairy grass, but they can't control the outline and collapse.