
Since Heroic Spirit Didn't Ship the Goods, I Had No Choice but to Get It Myself.
英灵不出货的我,只好自己上了
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- Completed
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- 773k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Superpowers
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Can you give me an introduction to Genshin Impact... I saw it was well written before and just added it to my bookshelf. You can take out a magic version of Genshin Impact later, so I can't guard against it.
If violence is only for killing and torture, there will be no country in this world, only hell
Organizing the situation of this book
Modified the world view of Genshin Impact + FGO system, but only the costumes and no heroic spirits. The protagonist acts as a god + trumpet behind the scenes, pulling outsiders into a special space, similar to the Lord of Mystery mode. One of the two people pulled into the space is an adult man who was an undercover gangster and then went undercover to another gangster, codenamed "Other Personality"; the other is a female student with both parents but a "fanatic believer" with a special organizational relationship, codenamed "The Hidden One". The initial map is Mogai Liyue, and the second map is Mogai Mondstadt. The Rock God has been confirmed to become the Mother Goddess, and the Abyss has also been confirmed to be described as a goddess. The Wind God is still unclear about the situation. I don't know whether it will be genderless, male-female, or completely effeminate. The protagonist is a time traveler who has "revolted" many times. He has a special concept of fairness. He has been discovered by officials as a transcendent and entered into the "wild transcendent" group.
Why are they all costumes? There are no characters in the pool, right?
I am Akashi Shennong
After tasting, this book is not considered shit. It's just that the author has done more sewing, and the author's writing ability is relatively strong "Are there any novels that have too many stitches and are not good at writing, and are completely supported by jokes?" "Yes, brothers, are you looking for the following book?" "I refresh a post bar with super powers every week" "There are nine books like this" "If you don't believe it, come to my book list to see the real shit."
Stitch novels, there are useless dogs and originals, and the world view stitches together various second games. Which stitch beast reincarnation/extraterrestrial demon are you? Come to Qidian to write novels. Stitch novels have a unique high lower limit and a low upper limit. The high lower limit means that there will be no mistakes in the plot and world view, and it can take care of some unpopular novel systems, such as Gundam, Kamen Rider, Three Kingdoms (Yu-Gi-Oh!), Etc. The low upper limit is because of pure stitching and plagiarism without any original content. Qidian will not push such novels
The setting is obviously very interesting, why does it have to follow the worldview of Genshin Impact? The plot of Genshin Impact is the same as the original story. You still want me to read this magically modified history again? The more I watch it, the more annoying it becomes, and the more I watch it, the more I feel that the main plot is purely a defense.
I thought I could use gifts to complete my life, but it turns out they are just simple additional attributes, which is a bit boring.
The book is a good book and worth reading. But behind the scenes, he is the most action-packed protagonist I have ever seen. Note that I have watched the behind-the-scenes stream. I'm not saying it doesn't look good, just for comparison.
The pace is slower
There are more than a hundred chapters, many of which are relatively boring. The reason is that the pace is slow. The so-called slow pace means that it needs to be changed. What I am currently writing is already very boring. The first script of "The Protagonist Appears before a Man" is usable, but the second script is broken in half. With more than 100 chapters, other content should have been added long ago, but it has not been added yet, such as the content of the five major countries set at the beginning. Of course, this part of the content is still too high. You can expand the content of giving gifts to others. In the first dungeon, the protagonist gave the battle gifts to NPCs. I believe it must be a content arrangement, but until now, even the use of gifts for NPCs in the Heroic Seat has not been expanded. As for the content of summoning heroic spirits, of course the content of summoning heroic spirits will over-expand the Heroic Spirit Seat, which may make the pace too fast and require trade-offs. The current problem is that there is not much content about the main protagonist's Heroic Seat. After the story of the first dungeon, there are a few more NPCs in the remaining dungeons. The only content is the part where the protagonist of Bull of the Sky plays the role of the emperor. The content is still not expanded and is only mentioned briefly. If this part of the content is detailed, it can actually be expanded to play the role of a heroic spirit before appearing as a saint. It is unexpected that the protagonist is still playing the role of Akuko after more than a hundred chapters. Let the NPCs in the Heroic Soul Seat understand the ranks. Kazuko is a member of Group A, and other members of Group A should also appear. At least one of them will appear, plus some speculations. From this, the NPCs' speculations about the Heroic Soul Seat, and the outside world's speculations are a few moderate ones. In total, there are more than one hundred chapters, many of which are depicted on the protagonist and many NPCs, knife catchers, various forces, etc. These are just foreshadowing and set off the Heroic Spirit Seat, but they are vaguely like the main course. The force represented by the behind-the-scenes stream, the Heroic Soul Seat, is not even halfway through the chapter. The Hero's Soul Seat is used only when the protagonist upgrades, solves problems, etc., Such as collecting equipment, using NPCs to understand world trends, etc. This is pure golden finger writing, and does not count behind-the-scenes streams. Even so, the content of these NPCs has not been expanded. As mentioned before, they have not even touched the costume part, let alone the entire Heroic Soul organizational structure and other contents. The reason why NPCs are in the Heroic Soul Seat is to use their reactions to bring out the core of the behind-the-scenes flow in the Heroic Soul Seat? Then through their strengthening, it affects the reaction of the outside world and so on. Generally speaking, the pace is a bit slower, but everything else is very good. It can be seen that the author wants to write a lot, but so far, there are so many chapters and none of them have been expanded. Forget about the free chapters, the paid chapters only expand the content of the cards to let people know that part of the space of the Seat of Heroes changes after the card is drawn, or that the props that appear are useful, but there is no specific expansion. It is inevitable that the NPCs use these props to solve problems flexibly. There is not much to watch casually. It is not as good as the protagonist playing the emperor directly, but it is still a slightly fresh content.
Good guy! Just reading the introduction, I thought the protagonist was in Warhammer 40K 😅😅
Some of the costumes have capable people who can learn real skills.
For example, as shown in the picture, Dacheng Rin has mastery of all five elements.
A few suggestions for the author
As a behind-the-scenes person, the portrayals of others are pretty good, but are the protagonist's dull-headed features a little too much? This can be regarded as a behind-the-scenes story in the last book, but the protagonist's control of the world is a little bit unclear. For example, the group of gangsters at the beginning did not want to kill him. His constant counterattacks made him die. After time traveling, let alone reflection, at least he should have restrained himself, but I don't see where he restrained himself.
Seeing the protagonist break through the Bronze Mirror, I felt that the author was a bit overpowering the protagonist's combat power. He practiced sparring with heroic spirits every day, but the result was that his skills were still inferior to others, and the artistic conception was also that no one was better than the protagonist, which was a bit frustrating.
I feel that the essence of behind-the-scenes novels is that the protagonist puts on a vest and appears as a saint in front of others.
But until now, Uncle B has only appeared once, and other heroic spirits have not appeared. I can only hope that it will be faster. And I hope that when the protagonist takes on the identity of a servant, the things he has to do must be consistent with what the servant himself would do.
I don't understand the latest paragraph. Why don't you deal with the borers inside first? Instead, you follow the bait named Zhou and move around like a cocked mouth.
It can be seen that the ideas and creativity in this book are quite good, but the writing power is insufficient to express my ideas well.
Are gods and gods two different types? ? ?
To be honest, the first thirty or forty pictures look really exciting. Still wondering why you haven't subscribed? As a result, seven gods came to me and coaxed humans like babies. Especially those seven gods were for humans to develop independently. When humans abandoned the gods and pointed their swords at the gods, they still secretly protected humans. You say he loves humans. What does he love? You could say that he likes the good side of human beings, and those in power are all bad guys, and those at the top stand on the heads of those below to shit and piss. You say he likes the evil in human nature, right? He also wants to be a serious and good person. Do you think these gods are out of their minds and have something wrong with them?
Demon changed Liyue? No, it's the magic modified Kanria
At first, I thought the protagonist had arrived in Mogai Liyue. But when I saw Liyue in the back, they broke the contract and refused to repent. Prince Yan was so angry that he immediately announced that I was sleeping. He also announced changes in his beliefs and engaged in scientific mechanization. This is clearly Kanria.
So did you draw the heroic spirit?
I've read Chapter 20 so far, which is pretty good.
Will the Heroic Spirits be summoned later? Or should I do it according to the incarnation? If I incarnate, it feels a little less exciting.
What happened? I haven't watched it for a few days. Is it over? Ha?
There are not many people who write monthly, and even fewer who write well. As long as there are monthly votes, vote for you. Don't give up! !
Some people say that this book is a remake of Genshin Impact, but I can only say that if you think Journey to the West is Journey to the West, this book is indeed it. On the other hand, I quite admire the protagonist's style of retribution when he says something.
What's going on with the Thousand-Character Curse?
There's something wrong with the logic, it's weird.
Let me first ask, no heroine or single heroine?