I Ascend to the Highest Place in the End

Man, it's too light, the paragraphs are too long, and I'm a little tired from reading it. You can divide the paragraphs into more points, and squeeze the words together to feel less like reading a novel and more like reading a text. The plot can be a little more ups and downs, and there should be more conflicts like this. You feel like you are reading a short story, it is difficult to retain people. Come on, the idea is good. The fighting plot should be longer. It accounts for 80% of the daily life. It might as well be changed into an urban love story. 👍👍👍