Creating Fengling Yueying Starts from Lingtai Fangcun Mountain

It's interesting, but the plot is a bit bland. It doesn't show the domineering style of Fengling Yueying. Judging from the speed, it's just a meter-level unit when it's modified to 999. The martial arts world of 100 meters in one step is awesome, but the mythical world of cultivating immortals is too rubbish. Wuchang Shen, a little hot chick, follows the same process as a martial arts detective, detecting anomalies - lurking - searching for clues - climbing over the wall at night - alerting the snake - following - finally discovering an anomaly - beating the boss to death with a stick. It feels like it might be fun if it were in the world of martial arts, but this is the world of cultivating immortals, dear

It's too fragmented, and the starting point is too high. When the official plot appears, it's a traditional battle of wits and courage, such as conspiracy and planning. The level changes directly from mythology and fantasy to the weird kind of world.

Don't learn, don't learn, I, the old grandson, am here to learn the art of immortality.

A bit of a unique skill, but not much, and the highlights are the same

It's all in vain that Feng Chime and Moon Shadow cheated, and they also had a battle of wits with a group of mortals. After reading more than ten chapters, they were basically all about fighting wits and courage with mortals and warriors in the mortal world. It was really in vain that such a big mistake was made.

Okay, you monkey head doesn't want to learn this or that. I will teach you the "Zengzi Jue" as a teacher. This technique is the core of our sect. The instant kill is just to increase the value, the blood lock is just to replenish the health bar, and the life span is just to increase instead of decreasing. The numerical value can be increased, the negative numerical value can be increased, the soul can be increased, the Tao fruit can be increased, the cultivation level can be increased, and the Dao can also be increased.

When you meet the king, you start with a 0-frame nuclear explosion. You still have to go through the process.

It's very interesting. I preached in a serious manner, but the result was that Brother Gua was selling Gua.

Feng Da said that your Wind Spirit Moon Shadow is the 3DM version.

I can't stand the protagonist's name when I see it. They don't all have the same style of painting. I'm so happy.

Even though I was playing Invincible, I failed, and the writing was so boring 😅

It's too bland. The book's title, resume, and previous chapters drew it in, but the result is that the writing is the same as martial arts, and the description of the scenes and characters is not even as good as martial arts. . .

The subject matter is good but the writing is not good enough

This writing style feels like reading an old book, which is incompatible with the current new era of immortality and fantasy novels. Moreover, playing games is a bit like martial arts novels. The most important thing is that what you write is not martial arts.

Although I have used Fengling Yueying to play games, I know that playing games with Fengling Yueying is for fun, but there are levels of enjoyment, such as small, medium, and large.

The timeline is a mystery, and the plot is very disconnected from Journey to the West. It's not like a fan, just like a low-level fantasy novel that borrows the names of the original characters.

Ding~

Does every heavenly soldier have to cut off the mortal bond 🤔 Can the population be refreshed with one click 🤫

This plot is a bit like eating sugar cane without sweetness

The sense of expectation is not enough, this golden finger feels difficult to write, and the crisis creates conflicts and contradictions. There is too much foreshadowing here. The problem of solving the crisis, Fengling Yueying, is too big. How to write an upgrade ? Even if the protagonist's strength is improved by recruiting a disciple, the protagonist's identity and this plug-in will make the protagonist's purpose unclear. I feel like this article is just too easy to write. I also read it because I wanted to write a novel. I found it on the New Book Signing List.

What a big deal. In this state, he still dares to accept the protagonist of Destiny. Everyone is watching Sun Wukong. Dare to step in. I thought you were a saint of heaven and a saint of the great road. It's detached. It turns out that the foundation was just built

Ding, invincible. The manifestation of the body is the sanctification of the body, and the golden light fills the sky. Ding, instant kill. The appearance of the main body is that a thought covers the sky and a big hand falls from the sky. The enemy is instantly turned into powder and his soul is scattered, and his true spirit is extinguished. (This is just an example and does not limit the flash sale form) This is the Fengling Yueying I want to see. No matter what your plots and tricks, I will play with you when I am happy. If I am not happy, you can die with just one thought, the kind that will completely destroy the true soul.

How dare you put more than sixty chapters on the shelves?

Okay, okay, you don't want to learn this or that. I'll try to taste the roasted whole monkey tonight.

What is the background of the world like? Everyone says this is Journey to the West, but it doesn't match up everywhere.

As a short Journey to the West fan novel, the author has written a rare depth, and also achieved an organic combination of setting and imagination, selectively unifying the imagination on the Internet. As a refreshing article on setting, the author did not go through the common cheating setting process to suppress the rhythm, but maintained a normal rhythm while maintaining the exploration of the plot's profound meaning. He chose to update slowly, and slowly accumulated materials and quality over time. After the completion of the story, there will be no more problems.

The beginning is great, but the middle is not good, and later on it becomes ok after some changes.

It's too bland, not exciting enough, and not domineering enough. I want to see blood flowing like a river! ! Mouth and teeth! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

The road is long and far away, I will search up and down😁

It's a waste of time to sell the sheep's head as dog meat.