Love in Horror Games

By Chapter 29, the author is almost constantly foreshadowing, which also leads to the first dozens of chapters that have a nagging feeling. The flavor of the genre is too heavy. Those who like to read light novels do not like to read it, those who like to read Cthulhu cannot understand it, those who like to watch romance find it incomprehensible, and those who like to read suspense can not piece together the clues at all. I can say that the reason for this kind of perception is definitely the author's too much foreshadowing and the problem of narrative rhythm. The love story between the protagonist and Naoko was inexplicable, and the appearance of the God of Fate was also very strange, and the protagonist's cognition was also very strange. Later, the heavy rain told us that the protagonist was so strange because his cognition was modified and time was regressed. It was not even the first time that the protagonist experienced this situation. The result is a non-linear narrative rhythm. I have a hunch that the author is going to write a time retrospective, similar to the shadow of the eclipse. How to deal with the horror game, how to deal with the previously buried Naoko, the yandere girlfriend, the evil eldest lady, and the god of Juli, and how to round up the heavy rain. If someone like Uncle Luan wrote such a platinum book, I think there might be a chance for it to be rounded off. But as the author is a newcomer and writes a book that tortures readers and himself, I can only say that everyone will kick me after it is rounded up. New writers are advised to write short stories, such as wild foreshadowing, backtracking in time through heavy rain, cognitive modification of Cthulhu, the reasons for the system failure of the Circle Horror game, and the emotional lines of several female protagonists (Naoko seems to be the most difficult to write at the moment). Platinum masters may not be able to write it well.

You're on my radio wave, but I don't really agree with you when you write about Japan in a Japanese setting and don't include some Aoi Oni, Weird Syndrome, Fuck, Crazy Father, and Witch House.

As of Chapter 29, if the previous ten chapters are still comprehensible, it starts to take off after the BBQ restaurant. It's like it's just a thread, but it's not a bundle of yarn but a messy ball of yarn, messy and messy.

You can still read it It doesn't feel light or boring to read, and it doesn't feel very exciting, nor does it have the mindless romance of the Tokyo novel. The biggest feeling is that the following ten chapters are not at all normal development. The content and plot are very compact, but after reading it, when you think back, you will sigh: What did you just watch?

I came to visit with my work "These Big Shots Are Myself" and thank you! Added to favorites, great ideas, and the author's writing is very good!