My Deadline Is Approaching, but the System Says I Have a Bright Future

So far, I think the writing is pretty good and you can get into it, but the number of words is a bit short.

Judging from the current situation, it is well written and worth reading. I hope the author will continue to work hard and persevere, and the results will definitely improve. Come on

"The half-grown children were only two or three breaths behind her, and they fell to the bottom of the valley together. Then came the second, third, and even the first... Until the valley, which was more than ten feet deep, was filled with human flesh."

Yes, the plot is smooth and not boring. There is also a unified intelligence from the world. None of them are smart, but they are not stupid either, and their behavior is more reasonable

I read it in one sitting, a rare good book in recent times.

Let's break up, the author's account has been canceled 🙂🙂🙂

Why is your sect leader so smart?

I saw your masterpiece on the website and admired it so much that I came here to visit with a small piece of work. I hope you can attach it to show your magnanimity, charity and noble personality. Next, I will introduce this small work in brief language to show my enterprising spirit. The IQ is online, the writing is average, and the emotional line is quite desirable. It is a joy to read. There are both rigorous and accurate numerical values ​​and wild imagination. There are very few attempts to exalt before suppressing, very few bullying of the small by the big, no routines, no deep grudges, no common sense errors, no obvious logical loopholes, no weird main characters, no repetitive plots that change the soup without changing the dressing, and it does not promote any extreme or irritating ideas. Finally, please allow me to boast a bit and use my inelegant behavior to set off your noble virtue. The fantasy protagonists I have seen all seek wealth and murder, without exception, but to varying degrees and for different reasons. The "practitioners" I see are usually aloof and unconventional. When encountering problems, they do what ordinary people do, and they make whatever mistakes ordinary people make. They don't show any signs of practicing. The protagonists and spiritual practices in this book are different from them, and the most enjoyable part of this book is to see people of noble character chatting happily with like-minded friends.

Not bad, very pretty. Collected

I added system settings, but the system only has the function of adding attributes, which makes it a bit inconsistent.

What about updates? Just chapter 1 today?

As of Chapter 68, the writing is pretty good. This should not be the score. This book should have a better score.

Well written🙂🙂🙂Good grass