Rebirth: Starting with Saving the Bai Fumei Twins

I don't understand why most of the current rebirth novels are about entrepreneurship? He was a mess before his rebirth, but can he beat others after his rebirth? Instead of doing good value investing, you choose to start a business in an industry that you are not good at. Speechless

I don't know why I read reborn novels. The author started his career by writing online articles, which makes me feel disgusting. He can repeat millions of words of novels. Copying songs is not reliable anymore. He has been reborn, and he is still coding. It's crazy...

I have finished reading them all. I want to say, can you stop writing about forced relatives. They are all borrowed money and deceived. They make readers angry when they read them. Look at your magnificent work and reflect the harshness of the world. Let readers enjoy reading. Isn't this the key? Just like the Spring Festival Gala, the sketches have to be sublimated. Except for those disgusting relatives, everything else is good so far. Come on.

I have read more than 20 chapters, and the protagonist has said that he does not do dog licking at least a dozen times. Just after telling his roommate that he will not do dog licking, he is immediately forced to meet the girl who is doing the licking. If you have a good relationship with your roommate, it is understandable to say that it is for the love of your roommate, but your roommate does not say that you have a good relationship, and is even a bit disgusting, so why do you have to get along with her. Moreover, the introduction mentioned writing online articles and starting a business, and I had initial capital from the beginning. But after more than 20 chapters, I am still writing a story about not being a dog-licker. What are I doing? The main plot is not written at all.

I was a scumbag in my previous life, and I won't be much stronger in this life 🤫😁

The former protagonist said not to lick, but the latter licked again. Can you please stop being a licking dog? Oh My God. . I originally read novels just to relax. Licking it back and forth, looking at the wool.

Don't just imitate this brother's cool moves. If you don't step on the thunder, you'll be fine.

If you don't update, why don't you update? If you don't update, I won't forgive you even if you update a hundred chapters. You are really pissing me off...

To be honest, have you changed your vest🙂

Damn it, can you write something more serious? . Why does it take so long to write about an ex-girlfriend? . Or write something pretentious, but at least it should be serious. No progress at all.

Especially the punctuation marks. Those inexplicable exclamation marks are really hard to stand. The author doesn't even know how to use basic punctuation marks.

I tend to like to talk things out of my habit, but the reasons I talk about have no depth and are very superficial. Those with some experience may think it is very childish. If the author is young or has no experience, he should avoid making excuses.

There seems to be no main thread, the writing is so complicated!

After reading Chapter 20, I repeatedly compared whether I should chase the twins and whether I should be a licker. . . Doesn't the author get tired of being crooked when he writes? . . . .

Why did the chat with Gu Shijiao suddenly disappear in the latest chapter and jump to the next day? It didn't feel smooth, as if there was something missing in the connection. Especially at this moment, followed by the next morning, it was too sudden.