Tokyo: Pokémon Master

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You can write it! And it's not like other behind-the-scenes stories about Tokyo that have superpowers and are limited to love between men and women. It seems to see the emerging hope behind the scenes in Tokyo.

The writing is very good, but one shortcoming is that the pace of progress is too fast With only more than 30 chapters, 3 or 4 extraordinary people appear. In just a few days, you wrote that society and the government are completely mobilized to deal with extraordinary people. Do you have any misunderstanding about the efficiency of government institutions? And you are the Protagonist and several of the supporting characters are too close, Doesn't it feel strange that a big Japanese suddenly "explodes" troops in one of the small urban markets ? Even if your protagonist wants to fabricate a lie to deceive the public and the government , it should comply with the laws of statistics. If the extraordinary person in your article appears randomly, wouldn't it be easier to deceive the government and make the Japanese government believe your rhetoric? I remember that this is how the old eunuch develops the story, but that ends here. The following are your advantages ① Your writing style I feel it is better than the old eunuch who does not bring a knife on a rainy night, and a little more delicate ② You are a newcomer (at least I haven't seen you before), younger and without psychological baggage, failure No one will bother you if you haven't finished writing yet. After all, you are a newcomer. The pressure is not that great (unlike the old eunuch who only finished one book. The eunuch has written more than a dozen books and has been beaten to death Now, everyone just wants to see his jokes. If he has the idea of ​​opening another book, the psychological pressure will be very > Big) ③ From such a big starting point, the topic of being otherworldly and unique has been badly written, and none of the books has been completed normally (except Rainy Night with a Knife), all of them have been thunder It is obviously a poorly written market, starting with Rainy Night with a Knife, I barely finished one book, but then opened 3 It's still bad. Although I'm painting a cake for you right now, if you write it well, all customers in this market will come to see you. Pokémon brings the extraordinary The setting is really good and promising, and I hope you can stick to it🐉👍

The familiar feeling must not be his. He has played in the resurrection match twice, and he pressed it again.

No character is written like a human being. From the protagonist to the supporting characters, they are all a collection of stereotypes and routine templates.

The speed at which the combat power collapsed reminded me of an old friend who wrote about behind-the-scenes stories about Tokyo.

Familiar writing style, very much like a certain eunuch

This naming style, this writing style and routine, it should be the person who lived the seventh life. The first six lives were all protected and died. In this life, I am afraid...🙂

This familiar style of writing... Bet on a pack of spicy strips, a certain father-in-law's trumpet~

It really doesn't make sense. His daughter is fine. Why can his wife also become research material? What does his wife's genes have to do with his genes?

Are the people who ask if he is the old eunuch serious? Let's not talk about the writing style. This type of protagonist is not written by an old eunuch. His protagonist is more like an ordinary person. Even if the protagonist is written as a god, he is more divine. This is not to criticize the author. But it is obvious that the old eunuch is more skillful and natural in portraying supporting roles.

My subscription plus the monthly ticket felt like it was wasted. I stopped updating for three days and sure enough, those with less than 300 new books cannot subscribe

The theme and Pokémon setting are okay together, but the writing is average

Chapter 43: Acting embarrasses me to death, why are you talking so much nonsense?

I don't quite understand why you have to be so pretentious and deceptive.

Back then, MacArthur turned the empire into rubbish with one move to get the emperor to pay his respects. Your move to get the emperor married is comparable to Kageyasuke fucking Aichi in Assassin's Creed. That's awesome.

I feel that a lot of Tokyo literature was inspired by my father-in-law. For example, I planted a sacred tree in Tokyo and cut down several of his books some time ago. No one reads his books anymore. Was the author also inspired to write this book?

Did the protagonist ask someone to rape Dongshan's mother? It would look great if so!

You can read the first forty chapters❌The rest has basically nothing to do with Pokémon🕳️

Like the previous Pokémon Resurrection and Reality Rebirth style, it seems that there is also some kind of spiritual world, astral world, etc., And it also incorporates sequences or something. The previous book had no Pokémon in the first few dozen chapters.

Although there are no distinctive characters, the pacing of your book is really awesome, marrying the emperor to Nan Dong plus destroying the country

Chapter 80 was shipped before it reached Japan.