Wei Xiaobao Travels Through You Tanzhi

Wei Xiaobao is written as an SB who cannot see the situation clearly. When Wei Xiaobao talks to others, it is always when he has the advantage of his status, and he can quickly understand his own position and the other person's behavior style, and talk to others when he sees them.

The first chapter was wrongly written. How could Qiao Feng accept a guy who would not hesitate to insult his parents just to save his life? It is also said that the Eighteen Palms for Subduing the Dragon; with Wei Xiaobao's emotional intelligence, how can he not see that Qiao Feng is a heroic person. Even if he wants to join him, he will say some clichés such as preferring death to bearing humiliation and bear the burden to win the other party's basic favor.

Wei Xiaobao is supposed to be a strategist, but the author ended up writing him as the protagonist of a hot-blooded and brainless teenage comic.

Is it the same studio as the one next door dressed as Qiao Feng?

Please revise the first chapter. What you want to see is that Wei Xiaobao's intelligence can be like a fish in water in Tian Long Ba Bu. What you write now is just a clown. Stereotypes are for fun. The role of Lu Bu is his unparalleled strength, not his brainlessness. The role of Wei Xiaobao is his cleverness, not his cleverness.

Alas, the ban is so severe now that you should write about Wei Xiaobao? His biggest shining point is not that he has many wives, has a bottom line, is flexible in situations, and is afraid of death. How can this be translated into a martial arts novel about palace battles? 🤔

Aren't only the Beggar Clan leaders capable of learning the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms? Just pass it on?

Watched Shi Potianliu and watched Wei Xiaobao's Time Travel

Is Ah Zi the heroine here? I feel that Wei Xiaobao and Ah Zi are perfect for each other.

The writing is not bad, the writing style seems not attractive enough, the story is not bad

Why write about martial arts and martial arts? There is one next door. Can you watch it?

Can you practice Beiming Shen Gong? Beiming Shen Gong is actually the most powerful. Its advantage is that it can be integrated with other skills. It accepts the bug that all rivers and yin and yang advance together. With Beiming Shen Gong, you can practice other skills without conflict. It is the strongest adhesive, such as (Swordsman Jianghu) Star Absorbing Shen Kung (No. 1 In the world) Absorbing Gong Dafa and absorbing all the people. There is no characteristic of accommodating different internal forces. As long as you practice Bei Ming Shen Gong, you can practice Jiu Yin Zhen Jing, Jiu Yang Sheng Gong, Tai Xuan Sutra, Shen Zhao Jing, Yi Jin Jing, Shen Zu Jing, Xiao Wu Xiang Gong, Bahuang Liuhe I Sovereign Kung Fu, Tian Silk Kung, War God Illustration, Immortality Technique, Ming Jade Kung Fu, Wedding Clothes Magic Kung Fu, Vajra Indestructible Magic Kung, I feel. I feel that with Bei Ming, I don't even need the evil sword manual. Wong Bei Ming can control the meridians. I am learning some moves: One Yang Finger, Six Meridians Divine Sword, Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms, Tianshan Six Yang Palm, which has its own life and death talisman, Tianshan Plum Blossom Hand, which has a winning move, Dugu Nine Swords, Star Shift, Great Shift, and some Qing Kung Fu (Xia Ke Xing) Flying across the sky in The Legend of Bodhidharma, crossing the river with a reed of Bodhidharma, Wei Yixiao's flying catkins in (The Legend of Heaven and Dragons), the perpetual motion machine with its own inner power to restore internal power, and flying across the air and spiraling nine shadows directly with the left foot and right foot without using any force, all these martial arts can be added together to directly cultivate immortality.

Author, how many QQ groups do you have? 😌