Fox Fairy Matchmaker: Senior Brother Is Very Good at Playing Tricks

Nc flow, flying in this book actually requires pure Yang Yan. Doesn't flying just have mana or demon power? Is the author's second guess that even if the protagonist borrows fire, he doesn't have any mana himself? Fire only has the special effect of destroying demons, but it doesn't add cultivation, 📑

The writing is similar to that of AI 🙂

I've finished reading it, it's okay. The poisonous point mentioned in the comments is that I don't catch a cold when a clown offers marriage. It's okay to find a companion for my junior sister when I have a partner. This is not considered giving a girl to a man. If I have a wife, I will write it down to the end. The poisonous point for me is to change directions halfway, from a single female protagonist to a harem, and from a harem to a single female protagonist. Currently, there is no such thing, but is it because the male protagonist's combat power can no longer be suppressed? It's only so many chapters, and also, the creatures outside the circle are the same as those spawned from the monster spawner. They are encountered by the male protagonist and become popular. I know the author wants to write more original stories, but there are too many, and all of them can be mid-term bosses. This is also the reason why the male protagonist's combat power cannot be suppressed. I don't know how to write the original story later, crush them all the way? If the male protagonist continues to use creatures from outside the circle as monsters to gain experience, he can become a boss. This writing method is very cool, but this is a variety comic writing method. They can change the world and increase their combat power. Does the author have this plan?

It feels like the studio's follow-up AI account

The author insists. I recently watched the TV series "Fox Demon Matchmaker" and there was no male fanfic.

You just wrote it once for fun, but then you did it again, and you didn't want to marry me, and you had to make your protagonist a clown, so why didn't you write King Power and Hegemony as the protagonist.

The writing style is poor. The battle writing is a piece of cake. The plot is written in a disorganized way. In one sentence, it is worthless.

The heroine Cuiyu Xiaotan? What a rare cp

The storyline respects the original work, and I like the synopsis very much. But the narrative is blunt, and what I can't stand the most is that when I read this book, I felt like I was struck by the Crimson King. The story is very unclear. Obviously the chapters are purchased consecutively, but it seems like I skipped the subscription. And the character of the protagonist is not very clear. I still don't understand what the protagonist wants to do! Is he going to achieve enlightenment and ascend? Invincible? Happy family? Don't know at all. And the interaction with the Dongfang family is very strange. The two senior sisters are inexplicably hostile to the protagonist at first, and there is no description of the protagonist's views on the two sisters! If they are regarded as tools (the fire girl has been emphasized in the article), then they should be controlled in Shenhuo Manor instead of getting them married. If we treat them as sisters, but throw them out without caring about them at all, and there is no description of our feelings for them, I, the reader, have no idea what the protagonist is thinking, and I cannot empathize with them and become the protagonist. Finally, let's talk about the plot of the book that I couldn't help but post a review of. There are spoilers below: The old man himself was plotted and left a large amount of bad debt. The protagonist inexplicably did not explain it and got rid of it. ? ? Then the daughter of the Dongfang family also had an arrogant attitude when she returned to the Shenhuo Manor. She had no consciousness that the two of them had been eating together and waiting to die (one was in love, the other only knew how to eat and play)? ? ? Too licking the Dongfang family, this is not how a dog is written.

Is Jin Renfeng going to become Huode Xingjun?

Shit, this is actually the second time he has traveled through time The first time he traveled through time and became Fake Ye's experimental subject Because there was a successful experiment before, the second experiment Fake Liquid actually planned to inject the five elements' vitality and the five elements' spiritual power into his body, and it succeeded But because Without Zero's ferocity He was thrown into the Cave of Ten Thousand Snakes with the same fate as Zhan Chi Finally escaped from the Cave of Ten Thousand Snakes, and then experienced a series of plots, and finally traveled to the world of the Demon Fox Little Matchmaker Download the world of Xia Lan, the combat power is not bad, and he also has some of Qiongqi's power

Selling dog meat with a sheep's head, not recommended

The short story is okay, but the overall rhythm and the protagonist's behavior are very immature; The author is very delicate, but the plot design may be subject to experience, resulting in many plot plans that are unreasonable. For example, before the fight, you don't look at "can you fight" and "will you gain anything after the fight" ", Is this fight necessary?" Etc. The planning gives people a very immature feeling, and then when they find that the protagonist can't win, they will use "mechanical deity" and "villain deception" to muddle through the plot. In terms of fighting, once there is a team battle with more than 3 characters, you will not know. How is it written? When faced with an unknown enemy, the protagonist does not test it first, but instead pulls himself closer to put himself in danger. This directly exposes the author's ignorance of fighting; ? Reveal yourself before fighting. This is even more taboo in ambush battles! See what Master Xuan Gu does? Use magic to cover yourself and then start from the weakest point, so that the opponent can't figure it out; sneak attack on the foundation building state; reduce the number of people first and then attack. Confrontation, saving the most mana; Looking back at the protagonist's fight... It is obvious that the gap can be seen, and then the author does not use his strengths and avoid weaknesses to describe a large number of battle scenes, and deliberately chooses scenes with many people, and only describes the fighting skills of the protagonist... To practice team battles You can't write like this. Look at how the battle of Yitian Mountain is written. The heroes compete, from testing to ultimate moves, and the trump cards are slowly played; look at how the ghosts appear. First, a large formation surrounds Yitian Mountain, and the heroes are used as materials for refining, and then they fight. The door of life and death is opened and a big hand that covers the sky is stretched out to suppress the whole audience; the way of heaven appears to suppress the ghost, and the ghost resists and props open the door of life and death to come out, eating all the heroes and climbing up the stairs to overcome the catastrophe. In the confrontation and balance, it gradually moves towards calmness and exhaustion. All means are just right. Team battle. It's like you are fighting with several teammates, but you don't use your ultimate move and flash, and you don't do any damage, but you still fight for kills. Your teammates and the audience don't scold you. 🙂🙂🙂

Has the author finished writing or cut it?

Your writing style is so average, but it's just about the protagonist's character or the plot arrangement, it's so blunt.

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The content is generally pretty good! As a fox demon novel, it's pretty good! 🙂 It just skipped many plot points, and the plot that could have been written with a lot of writing was gone! 😥