Is It Difficult to Cultivate Immortality?

How to put it this way, the excitement appears too slowly, and the path taken by the protagonist is too dangerous. Others are indeed very realistic about the protagonist. This is an advantage. There is no need to change it. Just wait for the person who is suitable for this book. The problem is not big and the writing is good. Although I don't want to read anymore, I want to feel more comfortable, but the author writes well.

I came from Zhihu, and my favorite is the first chapter. I don't know why the wandering toad said that you wrote the first chapter well, but I really think the first chapter is very attractive to me. Especially the kind where the protagonist's plan was unexpectedly disrupted (especially when the superficial scenery actually turns out to be unexpected) and then it's very interesting to see how the protagonist breaks the situation. Because I don't read much online articles, I just read the first few chapters and guessed the follow-up: first, the protagonist rose to prominence all the way, but ended up being the faction that was rebelled three years later; second, he completely forged a relationship with the establishment, and then rebelled naturally.

I want to know if Chen Tianxing, the head of the family, will be killed or crippled if the protagonist becomes powerful. It would be too poisonous if he is let go for various reasons.

The writing is very messy, don't use your brain when reading. It will be tiring to follow.

I've read the first 17 chapters and it's really well written. I just don't like to abuse the main text. I'll wait for the right person.

It's well written, and the text is very comfortable to read. Come on!

I saw the wedding chapter in the second volume. The previous part about Chen Wantong and the protagonist was a little bit toxic, and there was a love-at-first-sight drama? If you can't write a good emotional drama, you don't have to write it. You can bear this point and just skip to read it. But in the second volume, it is written about the third level. The martial arts in this continent are all passed down from the same immortal. The third level in the front is the cultivation of the will. The emperor cultivates the emperor's will. It also writes that there are other continents. The previous one Wu Xuanxuan, a time traveler, met people from other continents. When they were communicating, they went to the third level and went to the realm of Qi refining. He said that this continent was more spiritual and complex, and even refining Qi was difficult. Later, he also wrote about the third level of Qi refining. It really made me dizzy 😅

It looks a bit frustrating

The first few chapters were very comfortable, and I was pleasantly surprised to find another good book. However, the subsequent plot was a bit messy, with twists and turns, which made it more frustrating than comfortable. Oh, what a pity.

The subject matter is good, but it is not suitable for the current trend. The pace is slow and not exciting enough.

It looks okay. But I haven't seen anything that fits the title and introduction of the book so far. Furthermore, there are many places that I personally feel are a bit abrupt, but if I think about it carefully, there seems to be no problem.

The dragon can emerge from the wilderness in the second chapter is indeed okay. You said that you wrote a portrait of a group. I am waiting for your description of heroes in troubled times.