Douluo: My System Is Too Impressive.

I hope the author won't lose half of what he wrote.

This book has a single female protagonist. How about multiple female protagonists?

At this start, I feel like I might as well just forget about Tang Wulinniang. This way you can write more and interact more.

With or without Shen Nong, how is this book?

It doesn't matter if Gu Yue (Na) wants it or not, she just wants to see something different. Author, what do you think of Xu Xiaoyan/Ye Xinglan

The Golden Dragon King is the origin of a god king. Even if you directly turn it into a golden dragon, it is impossible to turn it into a martial spirit and then disappear.

After reading the list of heroines, I wanted to say: "I have accepted so many, I hope the author can also accept Feng Baboon. He was so lucky when he first appeared in Dou 2 😭😭😭😭😭😭".

Tang Luochuan's White Moonlight Ancient Moon

It's Dou San again. The original work of Dou San is so rubbish that almost no one will read it unless the harem is reorganized.

Brother, Wu Siduo didn't know Dai Yun'er at all in the original work. As for what you said, it's impossible that they didn't know each other in Star Luo City, so is it possible that you misunderstood... The original work said very clearly that Wu Siduo was in the old Star Luo City, which is the original Xing Luo City. Dai Yuner is in Xinxing Luocheng. There is a continent between them, okay?

Starry Sky First Control

It's a pity that Tang Wulin didn't lose Niuniu. What a pity.

As title

Netherworld White Tiger

Halfway through the movie, I felt like I didn't see many of the protagonist's abilities being used. Even the protagonist's soul ability was only remembered for one level.

Although, the Dragon King was killed by the Dragon God going crazy, and soul beasts cannot become gods. This is also a rule set by the Dragon God. Until a new Dragon God appears, soul beasts cannot become gods.

If the Silver Dragon King knew that the protagonist had the blood of the Golden Dragon King, he would directly devour the protagonist and transform into a dragon god.

After a brief taste of it, the writing is more daily. There are a few characters whose personalities deviate from the original work, which made me feel a little uncomfortable while watching it. Some of the timelines are advanced. Overall, it's okay. At least it seems to be finished. There are only a few completed books by the fan, which is already very good.

After reading more than 100 chapters, this book Gu Yue is a failure. The more I read, the more uncomfortable and frustrated I feel. I like to be jealous every day. When I see a woman talking to the protagonist or even looking at her, I will ask the protagonist if there is any relationship. The protagonist still has a look of helplessness and comforts me. It is so frustrating. I feel annoyed when I read it 😡😡. Jealousy is not the way to be jealous! If that doesn't work, go ahead and kill all the women on the mainland!

I feel that except for Gu Yue, all the other female protagonists are exactly the same except for their names, behavior, language, attitude, etc. They are completely the same person. For example, Wu Siduo, how a proud person should talk at the beginning. It is impossible for Yuan En's character to trust someone very much from the beginning. Yuan En's character is also destined that she will not talk like that. There is also how a princess should talk, etc. They give me the impression that she is Na'er who has changed her name. The feeling of doing things is exactly the same, which is not what it should be. However, considering that the author's writing skills are still lacking, this is not a criticism. It is just a point that can be improved. If it is really difficult to write, at the beginning, spend more words to explain the love luck given by the system, and give a setting that will make the female character speak better to the protagonist. Because I think the traditional so-called love luck is just that the girl will be attracted to you, rather than losing her original character.

It feels as bland as water, with too much daily plot, and the author is not very good at writing battles.

A good fanfic about the Legend of the Dragon King, worth reading (don't read this one, no need to read it, just read the chapter "Statement 2", see the way to read the sequel, the chapter "Statement 2" is available, just read the sequel)

There is one thing I have to say, there are too many things like a faint smile, a faint smile, it seems that everyone only has this kind of expression...

After reading more than ten chapters, I found a problem. The author likes to divide consecutive words spoken by the same person into several paragraphs and separate them with "". This is not very friendly to readers. When there are many people, it is difficult to tell who is talking. For example, when 50 and Zhou Changxi had a conflict, Zhou Changxi and another roommate quarreled. I couldn't tell who said which sentence. There was also a thank you after the fight. A sentence should be divided into three paragraphs, which can be separated by a comma. It seems uncomfortable to divide it into two paragraphs.

I took this month's monthly ticket and dedicated it to MVP.