Immortality Starts from Evil Cultivators

Opening and closing your mouth is just a comment You talk when chatting with people You talk when you quarrel You are controlled by the enemy and want to kill you, but you still say it It's very dramatic I feel like the protagonist is the kind of person who has ruined his brain by reading Somewhat like Kong Yiji

Weird flow? Nowadays, eight out of ten books on fantasy and immortality are all in the weird genre. It's very routine and boring.

The writing is very rough and tasteless. Why do time travelers have no faith? If you can practice immortality, believe it or not, even if you have to eat your faith, all the nobles will do it.

The bottom bracket... Hey, are you Zhumeng Laobai?

You don't need to look at it twice. You can tell at a glance that this is ready to be taken away. I will finish the book normally.

Before the breakthrough, kill a strongman from the upper court Kill the enemy who is the deacon's subordinate Just break through and defeat the strongman This is not borrowed from the plot of Xianlu This weird Xianxia starts like this, really tired Relying on the same routine to promote the plot

The character of the protagonist is disgusting. There are powerful enemies in the evil sect and there are things that can enhance the strength. The protagonist is disgusting🤢

Why is this book actually worth 0 monthly tickets? I feel like it's okay at the beginning.

The writing is still good, and the writing style, logic, and plot have improved very quickly (you can feel it as you read on, although there are still a lot of illogical places in your brain). It feels like the author has no outline and no main body. The logic and the characters' brains need to be improved. The setting of the book is very novel, and the writing skills still need to be improved. You can write more to gain more experience. It is still difficult to take off directly with the first book.

The subject matter is novel, but the author's writing style is poor, his logical thinking is awkward, and his writing sequence is poor! You can watch it, but you don't have to use your brain to watch it. It's still very good👍

The book may not be very good, but the author's comment section is quite interesting.

Is my brother being criticized for being autistic? This is already on the new book list, so why is it discontinued? It's a pity

It's okay, please support me.

Book quality: Gray same old same old same old

"Alternative Mixed Martial Arts: I am a cultivator of immortality, but I am a servant of others"