In Conan, but My Golden Finger Is a Dating System

Let me know your thoughts after reading Chapter 5. First, the heroine of the Virgin is pure and poisonous. In the current environment, people generally hate the character Conan, and saving Conan is already very distasteful, without using any force. This is giving readers Akaashi. The key point is that many readers still can't tell the difference between the Holy Mother and the Holy Mother bitch, and they are asking for the scolding. Secondly, the male protagonist has an unpleasant personality. There is no shortage of good guys in Conan. If you write a protagonist with a good guy personality, it is easy for him to fall into a trap with the supporting characters. Moreover, the online literary circle is not very receptive to the character of a good old man. If it is a daily love story, forget it. The key point is that there is a winery in Conan, a murderous organization. Readers will only feel aggrieved and will not have the patience to read on. Third, change the character. The most taboo thing in fan fiction is to change the character. What has Belmod been changed to? Because strangers will fall in love with her just by showing concern. It's so funny. Fourth, laymen force themselves to write fan fiction. Memu's little brother voice is really a joke. Memu calling me brother is considered politically correct in Conan fan fiction. Although the plot is very cliché, it is a plus and makes readers feel more involved. On the contrary, it will leave the reader with the weird feeling that you have not read Conan and are not a member of our fan fiction circle, so you forcefully write fan fiction. Fifth, male readers in the Internet literature circle generally have mental mysophobia. It is true that Belmode is very charming, but she is not suitable to be a heroine, because in the manga, she has sex with Gin, and the relationship between Karasuma Renya and Karasuma Renya is unclear. This kind of woman should be prepared to be scolded🐢🐢 when she becomes a heroine.

First of all, the protagonist is not like a mature adult. To put it mildly, it is called naive. For example, there are many cases around him, but he still treats the world as a romantic comedy. To deal with the case, he needs to rely on detectives and is willing to trust the police. Also, Kudo's reaction to becoming a child is a bit excessive. In summary, the protagonist is like a Virgin, and is brainless and too intellectual.

It's a mess, the protagonist has no personal charm, and it doesn't change the plot at all. It's just a piece of writing that cuts leeks.

Qiuting Lianzi

I think my evaluation of this book is definitely high rather than low. It is a very pure novel, a bit poisonous, but it can be used as a flavoring agent during the book shortage. I have read a lot of Conan fans. The biggest problem with this book is that the plot advances too fast, the protagonist is too stupid, and the supporting characters are too intellectual. After reading it, I felt as if the protagonist was playing house, without the slightest sense of crisis or tension (or rather, there was, but it was not expressed in words). Speaking of the rapid advancement of the plot, it is almost a common problem among Conan fans. I have read several fan works one after another. So far, the one that has impressed me the most is She Jing Bing, but I gave up later because the author has finished the existing plot of Conan. To continue writing is to set up a set of four different worldviews with a low word count, which is useless. Returning to the homework book, the plot develops too fast, the connection between events is blunt, and the details are vague. Many of them are just a running account, which makes it feel like a primary school student writing a composition. I also say that the protagonist is stupid, but he is really stupid In terms of setting, he is a mature adult, but he handles things like a primary school student playing house, knowing what to say, and it is quite intelligent Paired with The character problem is the same as the protagonist. I don't want to type one more word But it's not bad for a newbie to write the homework like this. I'll give you a double monthly ticket at the end of the month. Who makes me so hungry for books? 🙂

With Belmode as the heroine, no wonder you jumped on the street. When old IP writes new ideas, it does not mean it is new and original, nor does it mean it is written without brains.

Two days ago, was it necessary to cut it? Tonic for mouth and teeth😭

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Can you win Yukiko 😍

After reading the first volume, I think it's good, it's already one of the best works on the same subject. But since the works I love to read and the ones I praise are either bad for their subject matter or bad for their performance, I'm really afraid that your book will also be a big hit. Keep writing, okay?