I Am a Fairy Tale Devil

The deconstruction of the world view of magical girls is a new thing. It's a good idea. If it can be written down logically and logically, at least it will be enough. If you can use small insights to bring out some grand narratives (you need to exercise restraint, just a little bit), you can reach the peak of food and grass. Half a step forward. Come on.

Cool! This is the smell of Tama! I like it! In other genres like this, the protagonists are completely male in body and female in mind, and the empress screams and screams in disgust. This wave must be severely punished!

The main character swears a lot, which affects the perception too much.

(1) The first is the protagonist's swearing part. I admit this, I apologize, and I have changed my mind. I can only say that my personal condition was not very good when I submitted the article, so I brought in my personal emotions when writing. So I am very sorry for the controversy and dissatisfaction this part has caused among readers. So after receiving feedback from readers, I also made adjustments to this, using more swear words for emotional outbursts. The readers who read later should have a clear understanding of this point. (2) Regarding the problem that the protagonist is obviously a doomsday guy but is not strict about it There is no reason why he has to be stubborn when he returns from the apocalypse. People who have experienced the baptism of the end of the world, suffered hardships and countless life and death crises, should not go against their own hearts and wills and choose to cater to the world just for the sake of their own lives. The author was somewhat unlucky as a child, so he had several near-death experiences. For the first time, you will indeed feel that it is good to be alive, but after that, you will no longer feel this way. Instead, you will think about dying and die. No matter how much you love, you can only control one life. So based on this experience, I gave the protagonist this setting, which can be regarded as a reflection of my personal experience. Of course, there is also the idea that I have seen too many characters like Lao Yincoin and Asasi, so I wanted to have some crazy characters. (3) The issue of the character's past experience and world view This point needs to be discussed as the events and subsequent characters appear. After all, the time in the story, as of when I wrote this paragraph, is only one day. And this book only has about 100,000 words, and it also has to take into account the fairy tale copy. If I want to explain the world view, it is really difficult for a useless author like me. Above. Thank you very much to the readers who are watching, thank you for your support. ——Cat with a magic wand, on January 6, 2025

The male protagonist has the air of a high school kid who smoked and burned his head. Swearing can be a special feature, but don't act like a gorilla.

A bit... Too... Rough

It's all right, at least it doesn't sound good when listening to novels. It doesn't matter if you use swear words when expressing your emotions in key parts. If the character is a social outcast, then I don't have any idea.

It feels like there are no explosive points. After 58 chapters, I still know nothing about the protagonist's power system. Even those daily magical girl novels give detailed magic systems and progression routes in the early stages, as well as the specifics of the protagonist's power. The only thing I know about this book is that it has an awkward name, and it talks about me being a drama, having exaggerated past life experiences, turning into red hair, having very strong magic power, and being able to turn into a tank grenade. There is no reference at all, no sense of reality. How strong is the protagonist? The previous life of the Doomsday Commander is too outrageous. It's like playing house in real life, and the fairy tale copy is not as difficult as hell. There is no opponent worthy of this setting, and the protagonist cannot express this setting. Being a leader at least has goals and ambitions. As for the protagonist, I don't know what the protagonist is doing, what he wants, and what he likes. The protagonist likes to use foul language in settings, usually with punches to the flesh, bloody battles, killing and killing, or using simple and crude methods to rewrite the story of the slimy mother-in-law who is angry with the family. Just like the current popular novels, the male channel brother travels into the female channel and uses direct and rough methods to slap the female channel in the face and reduce her intelligence. Not very suitable for daily use. Author, there are too few comments in the novel. Write some hot memes to make the cat talk more flirtatiously, or use AI to run some pictures, maybe you can retain more people. I have no impression of the characters other than the protagonist. The protagonist has almost no sense of gain from clearing the dungeon. If you use the wish to become stronger or create skills and equipment, you can still feel something. Even if you say you can make wishes and you can do anything if you have enough wish, there is still no real sense. You won't upgrade when you fight monsters, and you won't explode equipment when you fight the dungeon. I just talk about it every day. I hope the author can set up an interesting power system. I am only interested in this right now.

Come and have a gun angel, a tank demon, a bomb savior, a nuclear bomb demon, a drone sword fairy, a missile sniper and the like, so that the fairy tale world can feel the smoke of modern war 😏

Strong mouth! ! Ba Kou Ya! !

😰Can this pass the review?

Let's put it this way, veterans don't die, they just curse

It's best not to write curse words after them. The protagonist emphasizes that he is a man too deliberately. The subject matter is good, but the breakdown of the power system is a bit problematic. It looks like a drama.

How should I put it? At least it's not on the shelves, so there's no loss.

I thought the protagonist was too into the fairy tale world

The plot of this book is excellent and the viewing experience is good. The biggest barrier to entry is whether you can accept the protagonist talking dirty words. If you really can't accept it, don't force yourself. Here I analyze the rationality of the protagonist's language: First of all, the protagonist is a reborn person. In his previous life, he climbed to the position of commander in an apocalyptic environment of orphans and nuclear war. In this environment, foul language is more useful than politeness, so vulgar language is completely consistent with the character; secondly, in terms of character image, the protagonist Kokaku has a more beautiful appearance than a woman. If she has a gentle personality, she will feel like a tomboy, but if her language is vulgar, she will still be more like a man and not too girly. Finally, I personally think that judging a person depends more on his behavior than his language, and the protagonist does not behave randomly even though his language is vulgar. What the protagonist does shows his bold and careful character, soft inside and tough on the outside. While he is decisive in killing, he also has a sense of justice and humanistic care deep in his heart.

It's okay. You at least let me understand the world in the story you wrote and gave me a certain emotional value. It's amazing👍

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~