Immortality Begins with Relying on the Immortal Mansion to Make Elixirs

Read a few chapters and tell me what you think. Mortal flow with very old routines, rich themes, and old-fashioned Golden Finger. Under this premise, the core plot of mortal flow must be very prominent, and it must be matched with better writing style, and the characters must have a strong sense of substitution. It's a pity that the author's writing style is very average, almost like Wangfa. But this is good news. After all, writing is the best thing to improve. As for the sense of substitution, I personally think it is quite toxic. In order to attract attention, the author writes in a very vulgar way, always talking about things between men and women. Author, you are not writing about the theme of marrying a son-in-law and cultivating immortality, marrying a wife and living forever. Why are you always so cute? Also, the writing style has no ancient charm, that is, it doesn't have that fairy-like feel.

Another useless protagonist who can't cultivate the spiritual roots of the three flowers gathered at the top and the five qi heading towards the origin.

Your initial offer is 10 spirit stones and one pill. The plan he gives you for the protagonist is to change the size of the large, medium and small cups. The large cup is 8, the medium cup is 4, and the small cup is 2. Doesn't the protagonist lose 20 spirit stones? The correct one is not 10 for the large cup, 5 for the medium cup, and 2.5 For the small cup.

Downloading the dungeon is too tedious. It is not necessary to write about the situation of other teams. I wrote for several days without knowing anything. I didn't have any information to bring out when I went back. I want to end this dungeon as soon as possible.

The plot and writing are both good. I like the group destruction plot the most.

Farewell Eunuch