Lord of the Mysteries: The Path of Fire and the Fool

The author is not very good at designing plots. When the heroine is not short of money at all, she can't buy a Sequence Nine magic potion worth more than 200 pounds. She has to accept missions to exchange it. Moreover, it is too tough for ordinary people to run missions in other places, because it takes dozens of chapters to get started with Sequence Nine Hunters. Also, I don't know how to delete the plot, my writing is extremely verbose, my sentences don't make sense, and I often write about supporting characters' perspectives. And the heroine actually knelt down when she saw The Fool for the first time. Neither the original Tarot Club members nor the local aborigines knelt down, but a time traveler knelt down.

A male-to-female fanfic written by a female channel author. The protagonist is Gu Jue. Her parents are dead and she has a cold and doting uncle who protects her. My monthly pocket money is 1,500 pounds, but I cut 20 pounds to buy materials, and I went to Tingen to catch a fraudster for a person I didn't know at all. I want to laugh when I think of the protagonist lingering and having an affair with Klein later.

Who is the audience???

As long as I could read it, I was already able to accept the change of text. However, in the advanced hunter sequence (late stage of the plot), I had to change from female to male. . . Who is the audience for this book? What I watched at the beginning was a male transforming into a female, and in the middle and later stages of the hunter sequence, the female transformed into a male (it was already amazing to start the ninth sequence in Chapter 70) I can only say that adding a little yellow waste makes it look black. . .

666, Let me just say, why haven't you signed a contract for 110,000 words? You just sent 110,000 words of love. You won't send out all the deposits, right? This will greatly affect those who pursue their studies, and it will be more difficult to sign a contract. It will also be difficult to recommend you later.

The pace of this novel is very slow, even slower than the first volume of Lord of Mysteries. The writing is good. You can give it a try. It is very enjoyable to read The author can also mention the pace and not deliberately describe various details.

Although part of the plot is indeed not particularly reasonable, for me, the flaws are not concealed (the following are almost all my favorite points, haha, they are what made me happy during the reading process. I have posted them everywhere 😂 I mainly hope that the author can see them and finish them according to the original settings🙏🏻) First of all, it is very consistent with the original work, and the writing style is also somewhat similar. Some people say it is "copying the original work", but I really like this kind of original work and personal connection. A mixed style of writing; I don't think it's a big problem if the world view is written again. After all, most people can't remember all the settings of the mystery, and it's not a direct copy and paste of the original work Secondly, I also like this strange setting. I really think it's interesting for a man to dress as a woman and then change into a man. From the content of the article, it seems that Xiao Gu and Xiao Ke will not be together (after all, they are both straight men, which fits the original setting). Never There are direct descriptions of Xiao Ke and Xiao Gu having a very direct and generalized love. I feel more inclined to the shyness and awkwardness brought about by the identity of a man and a woman, which is similar to the relationship between men and women, but the essence is the same as Xiao Gu thinks - a pure revolutionary friendship, a deeper dependence than generalized love, that is, soul mates I like this kind of sincere interdependence (probably because I like it) Like platonic love), it is more interesting than the secular love on the street, so I hope the author can maintain the original setting: after all, Xiao Gu and Xiao Ke were originally straight men. It would be weird to turn back into men and then return to secular love. It is even weirder for Xiao Gu to remain a girl and then fall in love with Xiao Ke, and it is also inconsistent with the setting. They were both men for 22 years. How could they be willing to be women just because they lived as girls for one or two years? It's very strange. I hope the author will not be affected by other influences, keep the original "Fire Setting", don't change the sequence, and don't come up with anything beyond the original setting (for example, Xiao Gu still can't change back to a man in sequence 4, it's just a setting to save the girl). After changing back to a man, he can get along with Xiao Ke more naturally, and continue to deepen the revolutionary friendship and become two male protagonists. (However, at first I saw that others misunderstood that the two were a real couple. It's very interesting hahaha, I hope there are more plots like this 🥰 Especially during Hermann's time, the scandal of the cold-faced adventurer is definitely very interesting hahaha) Then, I personally feel that the pace is just right, because I am a careful reader, so I couldn't read the original work for too long, and I would feel like I was forced to accept too much knowledge and couldn't wrap my head around it () I also took notes along the way, otherwise I would forget them quickly. But this book allows me to take my time and read it casually, and I feel quite comfortable Finally, I hope the author will not cheat 😭 I really like this book 😭 Some people say that the plot of the original book has not changed too much, but I think for a time traveler who does not know the plot of the original book, Xiao Gu has tried his best. Important historical nodes are difficult to change, not to mention that he does not know the inside story at all. This development is very consistent with the setting. And I like the changes he brought even more: Xiaoke is no longer lonely, the characters I love are no longer gone, and the changes in the East District also make me feel that the dark background of the mysterious world has a little more beauty and light. I even hope that this is the development of the original work. The original work is very exciting, but when I put it into context, the darkness and distortion really made me feel sad and scared. But this book gave me a little hope and comfort and made me feel beautiful. I am very grateful to the author for keeping my eyes open. Li Xin🙏🙏🙏 (Especially for people like me who are crazy believers in Xiaoke➕without CP, seeing that Xiaoke is no longer lonely and has someone to accompany him is really happy and touching. This kind of bond is really more interesting and reasonable than love😭so I really beg the author to keep the original setting and finish the story😭🙏🙏🙏)

When you see the protagonist accepting a mission for the top 20 list and forcing the protagonist to come into contact with Klein, you won't write another plot? I am a person with a living expenses of 1,500, and I have worked very hard for these 20 lists. Moreover, I wrote about saving money in the previous article. I wrote that I am very economical and am saving money. This means that you have a sum of money that you haven't even clear your memory of in your own territory, so you go to other places. Fang, what is it for? You said you have the memory of this book, in order to save Old Neil. I can understand it. I thought it was a good novel, but I didn't expect that it turned out to be a big drug before I even read it. In order to meet Klein and forcibly detoxify me, I even connected the table. It takes a lot of effort to investigate a highly spiritual fortune teller. Normal people shouldn't just buy potions, drink them, and then learn occultism. Then digest the potions according to the acting method you saw in your previous notes, and then continue to study cheats and develop extraordinary gatherings. Alas, it can only be said that an author cannot write works beyond his knowledge. I want to laugh when I think of a rich person who has lost money that he may not care about for such a sum of money, but can hire rich people to do things. What a plot.

There is a narrative rhythm problem at the beginning of this book, with many meaningless details... But after 100 chapters, it has gradually gotten better. The pace may be slower than many refreshing articles, but as a reader who doesn't like refreshing stories, it is very good. In addition to the pace, another point that has been criticized by readers is how much the early pocket money of 1,500 pounds was. Do dangerous missions with a ten pound discount... If this is really Adam's arrangement, I feel that Adam is worse than a third-rate writer... Finally, as for the scene where the Fool kneels for the first time, I think it does not conform to the refreshing writing style. It is true that many readers cannot accept that the protagonist they substitute is not as good as Klein... But logically there is no problem with the protagonist being a Cthulhu lover. Overall, I think Chapter 100 is considered a masterpiece among the mysterious fandoms. The style is quite consistent with the original work. From this point of view, Su Huan is actually too fast-paced and does not feel relaxed. I offer 9 monthly passes and hope that the author will continue to work hard.

This is unreasonable... I went to Tingen City to investigate an extraordinary person for 20 pounds. At this time, the protagonist is just an ordinary person! Isn't this courting death?