Ultimate: Girlfriend Tian Xin and Wang Dadong Broke Through the Defense!

Damn it, I haven't written many words about my girlfriend so far. They are all doing things as a nanny. You can just fucking change the title of the book to Be a Teacher in the End. I'm convinced, the title of the book is deceiving.

It was just watery before it was put on the shelves, but it has been like this for a long time. A whole chapter is introduced by a narration, and then the main character does nothing but just two chapters of yy. If it doesn't work, you can find someone to write it for you. I will vote for him.

Damn it, I haven't written many words about my girlfriend so far. They are all doing things as a nanny. You can just fucking change the title of the book to Be a Teacher in the End. I'm convinced, the title of the book is deceiving.

Wang Dadong's dragon-patterned sword is a spiritual weapon in the spirit world, including Lan Lingzhan. So, your magic weapon is a bit superfluous At the same time, there is another point. The weapon of Iron Time and Space's Spear Spirit King, Wufeng, is an ordinary revolver. It was just because it was contaminated by the Spear Spirit King's power index after following the Spear Spirit King, and killed too many monsters to give birth to a Spear Spirit. This was introduced by Brother Xiong, and Wufeng is a legend. Weapons are not artifacts You didn't write about the spirit world and the Demon World. At least I think these two places are very mysterious. The Demon Island and the Spirit World seem to have no connection with the twelve time and space. When the Flame Messenger came, there seemed to be no movement on the Demon Island and the Spirit World. Although it was not reflected in the movies and TV series, I think it would be strange if there was no movement at all on the Demon Island and the Spirit World due to the Flame Messenger's world-destroying action. It will not be erased by the Flamebringer, that is to say, only the twelve time-spaces will be the targets of the Flamebringer's erasure There are many things here that can be reasonably designed, but you have not carried out the second design You have not included these in the system of your work In addition, you said that ordinary people without supernatural powers cannot have combat power index. There is a contradiction when the supernatural physique is revealed, so you have to change this point Furthermore, the original work has two points that can corroborate each other, which can prove that the combat power index is not innate, and ordinary people can also cultivate the combat power index The first one, Lei Ting's grandfather, he invented a thing to eliminate the combat power index, but this is obviously something for people with supernatural powers. Why do ordinary people lose their lives because of this thing? This shows that the combat power index is the sublimation of something in ordinary people, or to put it more directly, the combat power index is the embodiment of spiritual energy. However, the spiritual energy of ordinary people cannot be unified, and the innate is not strong enough, so it cannot be embodied But the descendants of supernatural practitioners can awaken naturally. This is because of the inheritance of their previous generation. Inherited, the spiritual Qi of the descendants of the power walkers is naturally strong, and the powerful spiritual Qi will naturally be entangled to form a combat power index The second point, as mentioned before, is the seven dragons of the Force Tribunal. If they are not born with the physique of a power walker, can a meteorite give them a combat power index? Impossible, it can only be said that they were replenished with energy from the meteorite, thus forming a combat power index, and the attributes of the five people are completely different. This can also prove that their combat power index was not brought by the meteorite Because how could the same meteorite give six people six attributes? And there are two of them with their own talents, one right fist and one fine point. It can only be said that the two of them awakened their talents because of the energy of the meteorite that replenished their energy and spirit. The other three did not have this talent So I said that your explanation is too far-fetched and I gave it four stars just because there are too few ultimate fans. I can give it a three-point rating at most, but the three-point score is more than 90% of the works, and it can be seen that the author is a novice.

No more pursuit, no need to talk about hydrology, the system is actually intelligent, it slipped away

Are there any other books in the ultimate series that I can recommend?

It is not very recommended to write the system as an intelligent type that can talk, which affects the look and feel, is clumsy and annoying, and makes you look like a fool.

Come on, it's best if Tian Xin can practice. This will save you the need to pay attention all the time.

Bro, what's your update today?

I decided to try to believe in the strength of the fourth-level boss first.

It's so bad 😅

It's very beautiful, why hasn't it been updated?

Coca Cola, Melon Seeds and Sprite beer are sold in the front row. By the way, the protagonist of Amway's 140,000-word new book "The Tower of Finality" travels to the world of the Tower of Gods. But he is the only human being here, and the other people are actually just monsters in human skin.