Versatile Mage: Become Invincible by Raising Monsters

I can write a book, but I don't know enough about the original work. I didn't check enough information so I started writing it. There are a lot of big and small problems. Animal taming is not allowed to be sold without a qualification certificate. A bird egg with the blood of a warrior in the original book can cost hundreds of millions. Your one-eyed demon wolf tamer who can advance to the warrior general has a minimum base of 20 million.

The introduction is also outrageous. How valuable is the demon empire? All mankind can win against one demon empire, but it is a miserable victory. There are at least five or six emperors in an empire, not to mention the number of emperors. As for the monarch level, they can't even be counted. Then the introduction introduces an emperor to deter all demon empires. It's fun. Two demon empires together can wipe out the human race.

I don't understand the fact that trained animals can compete in national competitions. If the British Duke Irene is really like this, who can defeat the monarch's dragon? Don't say that he didn't train it by himself. If it bites him to death, there's nothing you can do about it.

What kind of bloody plot was disgusting in the first chapter, and people laughed at it, and then you pretended to be cool and slapped you in the face, right?

There are really a lot of problems, no wonder no one is looking at them

1. The world of full-time mage. The Great Servant One-Eyed Demonic Wolf costs 5 million and has the potential to become a warrior. According to the evaluation in the book, the essence of the Servant-level Demonic Wolf is worth this price. It is definitely beyond this price, much beyond it. 2. Warrior-level cubs don't have millions at all. For example, the mini-boss in the Pearl Academy copy has 60 million warrior-level seeds. Although this is a plant type, the level of an ordinary warrior must be tens of millions higher. After all, the first point of fighting spirit to advance to the warrior level is beyond the limit.

Author, you said that you don't want small ones like your heroine Lingling, and 80% don't want big ones like Leng Qing, and the cp is not removed. There are many big problems but small problems. You can either dismantle the cp and take all the cps like the best thunder, or create a single female protagonist or no female protagonist like the full-time summoner.

The heroine wants, Astraea and Jiang Shaoxu, Mu Nujiao

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I can't type punctuation marks, and there are typos all over the place. The plot is only better than what I wrote with Ai, but the writing style is not as good as Ai.

Come on, I personally think this book is pretty good at this point.

It's not good enough. The author should try harder.

Come on, author, your book is beautiful

The coolness is okay, but the writing is really a mess, and the emotional scenes are even more messy.