Extreme Immortality: Start with the Krypton Life Upgrade Technique

This protagonist is quite arrogant. It's not like a dragon can't cross a river. When it comes to the protagonist, a loach in the second realm also thinks of himself as a dragon? Write logically. Brainless fool, if I were the villain, this protagonist wouldn't survive ten chapters.

After reading a few chapters, I couldn't tell who was the barbarian. They just gathered tens of thousands of people, broke through important border areas, and then set fire to massacre the city. He retreated bizarrely, but you simply surrendered? Just write it like this, you are just being barbaric, right?

Chapter 43: Why didn't the Wang family just crush the protagonist to death? After all, the protagonist is only in the second realm. Isn't this unreasonable?

No wonder he rushes to the street, the male protagonist is stupid

Recently I have seen some readers criticizing the plot. I am very sorry and apologize to all the readers who are following me. First of all, the most common thing is that the protagonist is "very useless" and it takes decades to practice a set of exercises. This was actually a foreshadowing that was originally planned, but because I didn't control it well, the writing effect was very poor. Sorry. The other one is about the plot. The protagonist is not straightforward and decisive enough, unlike the protagonist of Yakuza style. This is also my fault. It is my first time writing a Yakuza style and I have some inexperience. I apologize to the readers, I am very sorry! In the past two days, I have been testing the waters and pushing it. The previous plot was so bad that the performance of this book has completely collapsed. But I won't cut it off. I have thought about the outline of this book for a long time and I like it very much, but I am not sure about it. I have thought about the plot, but my writing is not strong enough to describe the plot in my mind. But I still want to insist on finishing it, so as to give a big explanation to myself and the readers who are following me. After all, although the number of words is not very large, I am grateful to all the readers who have been able to read it. I will also consider the following plots more carefully when writing them, and try to make them look better and avoid the same problems as before. Finally, in 2025, I wish all readers eternal life! (Compare your heart)

Are you so good at the first level of martial arts? Can I still write later? The first two games felt a bit weak.