There Is a House in Tokyo, and the Down-And-Out Heroine Comes to Visit.

After thinking about it, since someone asked, let me ask, how many people want to join the group? If there are 10 of them, I will drive them. If you don't have them, I won't be embarrassed

By the time I read it, I had written a total of more than 60 chapters, of which more than 30 chapters were about the hot spring tour that made me feel bored after reading less than ten chapters. The male protagonist's behavior pattern is that of a cook with a lust but no brother. Being led by a woman makes people feel no excitement at all, only depression. It really loses the essence of the Tokyo series.

But don't scold me too harshly. I am not a glass-hearted person. I will never hide under the quilt and secretly wipe my tears 🙂

That's probably it

Ye Zi really needs to catch up on reading. If he doesn't catch up on it, he will die. So don't read the book, or just pause on the last page for ten or twenty seconds and then scroll to the last page. Ball ball, ball ball, ball ball 😭😭😭😭.

I specifically looked for a book that had just been opened to invest, but I was annoyed when there was no follow-up investment. But when I saw the latest chapter, don't tell me, don't tell me, it's quite interesting. The writing, story line, characterization, and plot are all quite online. If I maintain this quality, I can write 300+ chapters, all of which are ordered. Can score 85+. Keep it up and update soon

There is a bit of a problem with the pacing. After writing it for more than 20 years, I have accumulated experience and can re-open the book.

The writing is good, but too little. I didn't even have enough time to invest after reading it.

Family members, if I didn't ask for leave, but no updates were shown, it was blocked by review, so if you don't see it, you can check it again tomorrow after the review is released. It has happened many times recently.

That is, it is not exciting enough, not sexy enough, calm and tasteless.

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