BUG Ninja Sakura

I started to lose my grip in the first chapter. What a superficial application, it's not because the author looks down on random thoughts. The original content of Naruto has long said that the nature and form changes of chakra are advanced applications. You wouldn't think that it is just changing a shape. Why is Wood Release capable of absorbing chakra? Why is Earth Release, which obviously controls earth, able to control gravity? Why is it that everyone uses Molten Release? Old Purple and Black Earth are different. It's not because of the difference in the use of chakra. The setting of Naruto is not completely true, but who can write a book that can be perfect without any bugs? God's perspective is all over the world at the beginning. I don't believe your book has no bugs.

What I don't understand the most is this. If the male is changed to a female, then she is actually the female protagonist, and then she posts a male video and so many people watch it. How did you get in? I'm not good at all

What the hell, the Infinite Tsukuyomi has illuminated the entire earth, and you can't see the moon even if you've been here for a long time? I've downloaded the re-editing app, and I really like watching it change, but I can't live long with the introduction...

Shen Nong, the previous chapter was pretty normal, but in chapters 31-32, the characters and everything were completely gone. I couldn't watch it at all. It just ran.

You are so poisonous that you don't want us to comment.

The plot is deliberately arranged and mixed with Danzo, which is really boring. It is not an Uchiha, and it feels like it is just made up by civilians and does not ferment new content.

Why are there suddenly so many Sakura as the protagonist? Here is one, there was also Ninja Sakura on the previous list, and there is also Numerical Sakura in the new book. These are all recommended by the Internet, does it have any popularity? Strange.

In Chapter 31, the poison begins, and everyone turns into a fool when he touches Danzo.

There is no time for the development of the protagonist. The enemy quickly becomes a strong one. The protagonist is tortured and cheated. The reason for surviving is unreasonable. He relies on the author to save his life.

Chapters 50-60 are all water. These ten chapters have completely wiped out all the good impressions I had on the previous 50 chapters. Look again, it's still water and people will dodge

In the first few chapters, the illiterate shows off his IQ

It should be included in the book of women's videos, as a reminder to latecomers.

Why do you have to mess with Danzo? Your reason for hooking up is just like a retarded person, even if you have a slight IQ, you can't be fooled. Is Orochimaru's information really useful? Danzo has been involved with Orochimaru for a long time, and even if you, a civilian, are a genius, can you really make Danzo care? Didn't you read the original story that all his men are family ninjas? Taking a step back, you and Naruto are teammates. Will the Third Generation just let Danzo reach out for Naruto's bond? You have shown so many techniques for three generations, is it impossible for Danzo to understand? And do you really think that Kakashi is an elite jounin? ,, Danzo cares about reaching out casually? There is no logic, it makes me want to vomit.

If you go too far, the private buildings will collapse quickly like a mountain.

What I wrote before is pretty good, but Danzo's part is too poisonous. I've seen a lot of people adding roots, but you've dealt with a lot of poison points. Let's take a look at it first.

After reading a few chapters, the author only created pure expressions of ninjutsu, just like the substitute jutsu in the fandom, which was touted as the prototype of time and space ninjutsu. Essentially, the principle of the double technique is a magic trick. It needs to be prepared in advance. The target being attacked turns into a wooden stake not because it "turns into" a wooden stake after the hit, but because the double itself is a wooden stake from the beginning. Including the author's complaints about chakra, what does it mean not to pay attention to the temperature of the flame, and how to control the airflow and still play cutting? Has the author ever paid attention to what chakra is? To put it nicely, it is called "wind attribute chakra". It is actually "the change of the wind attribute of chakra" and the change of the nature of wind is "cutting" rather than "controlling air flow". The change of nature of fire escape is "high temperature" instead of simple flame The chakra in Naruto is neither internal force nor spiritual power. It does not have so many magical functions. The magic is hard. Chakra can be regarded as "fuel" and "catalyst" at most. The water made with chakra is not real water, but the chakra changes in properties and "grows" exactly like water. After the ninjutsu is released, it will disappear automatically if it is not maintained, including the earth and stone transformed by chakra. If it is not maintained, it will directly disintegrate out of thin air, but the chakra becomes very hard and has the same properties as stone. For example, in the rooftop decisive battle between the third generation and the second generation, the water, mud and water used by those ninjutsu are gone after the release. Another example is that the earth escape used by Onoki and his team to fly in the air disappeared directly after being released in the air. Of course, ninjutsu not only changes in nature but also in form. Those water escape and earth escape released by natural water and earth are naturally real water and earth, and the terrain changed by earth escape will not disappear.

After the exam, I generally have several plans. 1. Root, engage in internal struggle and replace Danzo's position. Then make the transformation. 2. Basically, but sending out missions and wandering around the ninja world, almost all of them can only be original plots. 3. After stabbing Danzo in the back, he returned to the protagonist group. Intervene in the growth path of the protagonists. 4. Follow Tsunade. The general content has actually been decided, it just involves a camp issue.

Let me give you an idea. Since the author definitely intends to make Sakura the leader of ANBU, and Tsunade becomes Hokage. The two have no apparent relationship and their power is not stable enough. Then Sakura can still take Tsunade as her disciple.

Is it a mess? Why push the unfinished products, while the Qidian push mechanism is for charity?

Look at why so many people criticize you. You are not an expert on water, you are just an author. Many of the truths you say are vague. You don't need a system to understand it on your own. Go ahead and dream. You are just water attribute chakra, not a devil fruit you eat. Wanting to make water hot or cold is not something you, an author, can explain clearly in a few words. Just copy and analyze it with a system! I have been moaning for several chapters, can I lie to myself?

In this first chapter, there is a sense of immediacy as we enter the journey of cultivating immortality and ascending to the dimension.

I'm really speechless, the suspense is occupied by Shen Sutong, and the second dimension is occupied by Naruto.

Wrong place, you should go 🦔

It feels a bit pretentious, why do you envy Nazuo's friendship?

Since the author is writing a fanfic, he must want to reap the benefits of the original work. Why did he downgrade the original author and setting to the level of a primary school student in the first chapter? Even if you really think so, there is no need to write the first chapter. Are you screening readers and screening out those who like Naruto?

After reading a few chapters, the main character is too self-righteous.

Has the author ever thought about whether the sequel to Naruto will end after it is completed? Have you ever thought about God blessing other worlds, such as the single universe represented by the God of Datong Wood? Other planets with different universes, such as Dragon Ball. Dragon Veins traveling to the past represents the analysis of time and the possibility of time.

Why