1890: I Became a Literary Giant in Great Britain

The writing of this book is like a personal rambling, as if the author directly copied the words imagined in his mind when writing the novel without any revision, just like a game demo. Good writing is called stream of consciousness, but bad writing is called poor writing.

The protagonist helps historical figures write books, which is better than copying books directly. Those who only know how to copy books and pretend to be cool are really boring to read too much. This book is quite good so far. I hope it won't collapse in the future.

When I write about the Queen of England being a bitch, I'm really afraid that the main character will be slaughtered.

The author has absolutely no understanding of the origins of Italian (Latin) families and gangs.

Is it my imagination? I always feel that the words and sentences in this book are very Japanese. Maybe the author is more suitable to write Japanese light novels than Wenzhao Gong.

As long as the card game is integrated with Yu-Gi-Oh, it will be finished. Point-driven and the terrifying effect chain of Yu-Gi-Oh cannot coexist. None of the card games that can survive on the market today will have the heaven-defying rules of Yu-Gi-Oh.

It feels like I want to come out again and again, the scenes jump so fast

The story is really interesting, but the writing really needs more practice.

How can I put it this way? It's a good book because of its creativity, but there are some problems with the writing style or the choice of words and sentences. I was tired of reading it.

I stayed up late to read the 74 chapters of the story so far, and it always gave me a strong sense of seeing the light novel. The frivolity rather than depth of various words and sentences greatly weakens the sense of immersion and immersion in this book, but it may be more immersive for most people (laughs). I have added it to the collection and look forward to the subsequent development of the story, but I still hope that the author can use better descriptions to give me a better feeling. Sometimes long paragraphs of dialogue may be more immersive, instead of the three-and-a-half-sentence dialogue now. The dialogue tone of the various characters is also very entertaining. It really has a strong flavor of Japanese light novels. 😥

Let me talk about a big problem first. Although the book is quite beautiful. But the dialogue was painful to watch. Sometimes the subject is omitted in large sections, and in many places I don't know why the author likes to use dashes instead of double quotes. Occasionally, once or twice, it is fine, but the replacement of blockbuster movies is completely inconsistent with the reading habits of current readers, and is very uncomfortable. Could the author pay attention to this issue?

The writing is quite good, but unfortunately, the novel's writing style drags the book down a bit.

The writing is good. It gives me the feeling of reading famous foreign novels before. The taste is very good. Please update it soon.

The reason is that there are too many characters and there are no illustrations, so everyone knows them by default. Then the dialogue format was so uncomfortable that I kept skipping a lot of it.

The writing is good, the plot and characters are all right, but the word count is too few, less than a million words.

Come on, it's fun 🤓

There are too few transitional statements, so it looks tired

I wish the author a platinum attainment

The setting is really good. After reading a lot of traditional manuscripts, I feel that the setting of this book is refreshing, unconventional, and reasonable. Especially interacting with writers and celebrities in history, it's great to change the past. The protagonist does not completely copy the book, but brings the future setting and writing style back to the past, which is fresh and fresh. I hope to write more collisions like this! I think the writing style is okay, and it's not impossible to read. Female readers have not encountered any poisonous points, so you can give it a try. But as a finance major, I feel that writing about the plots related to Jewish consortiums is too dramatic. Let's write more about literature and less about finance hahahaha

Will there be a "Yes, Prime Minister"? If it is, watch it. If not, forget it.

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