Hogwarts: Starting with the Creation of Wizarding Practices

It can be said to be the best Hogwarts theme I have seen this year.

The subject matter has great potential, but unfortunately the writing has a little room for improvement, and the time jumps are a bit too random. I feel like I might consider practicing writing. It would be nice to restart this book after I finish practicing.

Wizards and cultivators can be said to be the most powerful and broad manifestations. They have magic and spiritual power and can directly skip the problem of materials. It can be said that the more knowledge, the stronger the strength! After dividing the advanced training system and constructing many multi-academy learning systems that have been eliminated at all levels, if the wizard system forms a civilization, relying on hundreds of years of theoretical technology and those legendary wizards (scientists) standing at the top of the pyramid can directly push it to the level of third and fourth level civilization in the shortest time. The higher the theoretical technology is, the stronger the wizard civilization will be.

Except for the writing style, everything else is very good.

I just saw a little girl die after eating magic food. I feel like the weird radiation wizard setting is put on the Harry Potter wizard. The magic will never disappear and will cause the death of Muggles. Aren't those who marry wizard wives like the Chosen Melon wrapped in magic every day? He would be risking his life by fighting for his son's mouth. Those places where Muggle shielding spells were cast would have people and animals exterminated.

But the content is neither materialistic nor romantic. So it doesn't attract me very much

It takes twenty-one days to brew Polyjuice Potion, and it takes twenty-one days of correct and repeated practice to form a habit This is the Twenty-One Day Rule A Muggle traveled thousands of miles to Hog Woz, find a girl, then ask her to help you brew Polyjuice Potion, and ask to accompany you during the process Oh my god, I only know that you are chasing to become a wizard, otherwise I would think you are confessing.

Although Harry Potter is a children's book, it is not a problem if it is too childish.

I've finished reading it. The idea is really good. It looks good. It's a pity that the writing is in vain.

The subject matter is good, but the writing is so poor that I have no desire to read on. Especially the three golden chapters, there are no plot points that catch the readers' attention, and it can even be said to be weak.

The ideas are good, but many of the plots are not rigorous and a bit intellectually depressing.

It feels like the little villain Tang San in Douluo fandom

After watching it for a long time, it turned out to be a magical version of the loser who was upgraded and suppressed and was slapped in the face.

The character portrayal is crooked, the plot is mediocre, and the setting is just okay.

The part about the fire dragon is impossible to watch at all, it's all about lust. The fire dragon has been raised several levels, from a captive material to an individual with an independent and dignified status.

The writing style is not very rigorous, and there is no wizard style. Many places feel that the logic is not fluent.

The subject matter is new and the format is smaller. It can write about human beings entering the age of magic.

After reading this, I feel that the main character's weak heart has turned into a golden finger, and he is miserable. He feels that he has no future. It is more suitable for the style of 20 years ago.

People keep saying that the author's writing is not good, but I think the story is quite interesting and his writing skills are adequate for online articles. Hope more

It's very awkward. When the characters transition and talk to each other, I feel like I'm watching a pirated version. It's extremely incoherent.

The wands in Harry Potter don't feel cool enough to me. They can't be made into long-handled wands. The devil can chant a spell on the surface and then suddenly apparate over and hit him. Or put the wand into a sword and cut it at close range and long distance, charge on the surface and then suddenly cast a spell for a sneak attack. Or, you can mold a finger bone or arm bone into a wand, which is similar to installing a wand in the body.

The creativity is good and there are some exciting moments, but the writing is very poor and there are too many secondary creations.

Find a Harry Potter fan novel that I have read before. I forgot the title. The content is that the protagonist travels through the world of Harry Potter and becomes a member of the British royal family and becomes a classmate of Harry Potter.

Why not write one where the protagonist creates a planet on an alien planet where wizards live?

Alas, after raising it for a few days, it was gone.