One Piece: the Bikini Castle Kingdom of the Grand Line

There are no bad points at the moment, but you, the author, are too short. There are 29 chapters and one chapter has 2,000 words.

By the way, let me say this, the sky is dead, the water country should be established, and you, a water person, can build a country.

Water writing, a batch of water. A battle lasts thirty or forty chapters. It opens with the Murloc King delivering food and being captured, leading Whitebeard and Garp to team up to fight a seafood version of the Sand Crocodile. In the middle, there are all kinds of mentally handicapped, self-promoting, pretentious and other operations. There is no enemy in itself, but they can only fight each other in various ways, written in writing!

This kind of writing by the author is really rubbish

One by one, they were like flying, killing with their front legs, and the reinforcements from behind arrived in no time.

There's something wrong with me. I don't know if I'm a bit of a virgin. Anyway, I'm a little bit offended by seeing this kind of indiscriminate killing. Also, you have invincible power and allow slavery to exist. I think it's a bit outrageous. Anyway, I can't stand it.

The main character is just like a 🐷. It doesn't matter what he is. Why write about him? Can't they just write about seafood?

Didn't you come here from some third-rate novel website? ?

The Mermaid Island was destroyed at the beginning. I was confused. Are the Neptunes dead? No reaction at all

Saying a few sentences will lead to a large circle of science knowledge, and saying a few words will lead to a long section of various psychological activities. It's like going home for a meal. There are only a few steps to get there.

One thing to say is that it is real water. Forget about water, there is not even a main storyline. I don't know what real water is. The whole story is just fighting, and I don't know what the use of the male protagonist is. I really can't stand it.

It's too watery. There is absolutely no content in one page. How can you ask people to order it? You really took advantage of your book friends. You can fill a chapter with all kinds of shocks. To be honest, your writing style and rhythm are not suitable for the starting point.

The author's writing is too long-winded and contains all kinds of water plots.

Isn't there this Majin Buu faction star?

As soon as I saw "a cat" in the introduction, I knew it wasn't written well!

Is the latest chapter a joke? In the world of One Piece, you don't tell your employees about the outside world? Why did you write that Brother Zhang admitted the wrong person? There has to be a limit to being stupid, right? Or do you think that your Ma Zai is invincible and will not die? Or is it okay to die?

Don't read it, I know what you want to see, but the author will insist on not writing what you want to see. It's better to skip the inexplicable dialogues and battles. Hey, it's a waste of time.

Like Ace, Whitebeard or Luffy, kill them when you need to, and don't let him go. It will be disgusting when the time comes. After all, these characters are now more disgusting than the last.

He actually writes about kings like me, but our approaches are completely different.

It's not Xi Yangyang or Big Big Wolf who dominates the grassland. I don't agree with that, so don't be silly.

Just mop it and you will be directly rewarded with a removed bookshelf.

Fortunately, I still support you by ordering the first order and entering the palace as soon as it is released. 😡

I'm annoyed when I see the second creation. If I think the original character is weak, I don't need to write it.