
The Taoyuan Three Are Sworn Brothers, and I, Zhang Fei, Will Never Be My Younger Brother!
桃园三结义,俺张飞绝不当小弟!
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- Completed
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- 750k Words
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- Historical
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- Male
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- Qin-Han & Three Kingdoms
- Updated
- 1y ago
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- Qidian
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Will fight on the street, Liu Guan and Zhang Tao will become sworn brothers, and they will have a reputation of loyalty through the ages. If you write like this, there will be no audience at all. Several people in the Shu Han Dynasty, such as Guan, Zhang, Zhao, and Zhuge, have been remembered for their loyalty throughout the ages. You can't be your own boss if you write about this. People who write like this don't understand Chinese thinking at all.
Zhang Fei's appearance problem
If Zhang Fei's daughter can become the Queen of the Shu Han Dynasty, it proves that Zhang Fei has good genes. Zhang Fei's black face is just the description of Luo Guanzhong in the Romance of the Three Kingdoms.
The most touching thing about Liu, Guan, and Zhang is their brotherly love that sticks together through life and death. Just tear it down, okay?
Since you don't want to be a younger brother, why bother writing about Zhang Fei! The tyrant Yan Liang, Wen Chou, Ma Chao, Lu Bu... I really want to write about a lot of generals. A newcomer, screening readers at the beginning?
Something new
Who said Liu, Guan, and Zhang must be together? Doesn't Zhang Fei deserve to be the boss? Does writing a book have to be the same? I think this book is very well written, keep it up and I will give you the votes every day! Brothers, please give me a thumbs up!
You started screening readers, Shu fans and Cao fans, and ran away overnight.
If you want to write a novel well, you must follow the basic logic of the times! Even if you put aside your prejudices, Zhang Fei is not qualified to participate in the struggle for hegemony in an official capacity. A county-level tycoon with a net worth of only tens of millions cannot buy a county governor's official position, and may not even be qualified to buy it! It is very difficult to meet Shi Changshi to buy an official position. Liu Bei's ability to mix up is inseparable from his identity and network. His teacher Lu Zhi, his classmate Gongsun Zan, and the descendants of Zhongshan Prince Jing are not strong enough, but at least if he has made meritorious service, someone will help him. Does Zhang Fei have such a relationship? Even if he performs meritorious service, he will only become a stepping stone for others. As long as Liu Bei can gain some momentum in the early stage and become familiar with the emperor, his identity as a descendant of the Han Dynasty will naturally gain the favor of the royal family and obtain official status. This is the basis of everything! Obviously Zhang Fei does not have this condition, and the author's entry point was wrong from the beginning.
Come on, I still like to read this kind of subject matter. I always have to come up with new ideas. I will give you the recommended tickets this month and the monthly tickets next month.
It's a good start, but the value for money is too high, and there is no land yet, just cement and red bricks.
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Since Zhang Fei is the protagonist, it cannot be written as a novel. How can a black-faced leopard with ringed eyes recruit famous ministers and generals?