My Castle and I Will Not Lose!

Look at the introduction, what a suture monster, I'll save it first

Introduction: I have so many stitches, but I feel like I can recognize them all, which is even more incredible

All I can say is that I can understand the introduction, and I can appreciate it as much as possible🤓☝, whatever, me too, then it's okay

It feels like the author used AI to create the content. You can often see missing words and strange sentences that don't connect to the text above.

Chapter 4 of "Temporary Return", stealing this. It's really disgusting to watch. Really poisonous. This article is all about the humanistic outlook of the Middle Ages, and the death penalty for theft (although the law is strict, it is generally recognized). This poor man attempted to steal, but he still had to be punished with a small punishment and a large warning (because this way he could give both kindness and power, and he could also be grateful). After all, this poor man was not punished for not doing anything wrong, but for attempting to commit a crime. In the end, the protagonist was innocent. What was given was that the protagonist was trying to win people's hearts? Although this can make some people feel the benevolence of the lord, it can also give most people the illusion that crimes can be forgiven. Because the lord is kind (people who are kind are bullied by others).

I followed this book when it first came out. At that time, I really thought the setting was super good, including the infrastructure of another world and the tavern in another world. At that time, I felt that as long as the author had an outline and wrote it well, it wouldn't be a big problem. After all, his territory could slowly develop, his troops could be upgraded, and he could even do wonders later on. The heroes summoned by the alien tavern could also be written to grow, and he could even play double-travel in the future. What I didn't expect was that the author could ruin it for himself. What failed was the simplest original plot. I understand that the author wanted to write about the prince's intrigues, but the more he wrote, the more he wrote. These things can be interspersed, but the author didn't expect that the author would force it on. It was to supplement the author's interpersonal relationships in the royal capital, and to write about the impotent prince's amazing wisdom (conspiracy). , The territory I was given to develop at the beginning, the infrastructure was upgraded and then it was gone. If it weren't for Hermione and Fiona, I would have run away long ago. I can only say that the author went against the original intention. The introduction of Cloud City and Sun Disk attracted readers who wanted to see territory construction, then Griffin and Dragon Kingdom attracted readers who wanted to see the upgrade of arms, and finally Heroes of Another World. , I really can't say enough in one word that there is so much to write about. The author himself insisted on writing about the conspiracy of the mentally retarded prince. It's not that he couldn't write it. It's because the author got excited about it and felt that he had written it very well. He spent a large part of it writing about the conspiracy, gods and other things. It's just messy. The author's writing skills are very good. If he hadn't written off topic this time, he wouldn't be like this now. . .

I thought the book was deleted by mistake. There are hundreds of books on the bookshelf. I don't remember the name at all.

The author really can't grasp the big scenes. The plot falls apart as soon as it reaches the big scenes. The narrative can only be described as a tragedy. It's obviously a chaos of multiple forces, and the final effect is like a kindergarten fight. The author should practice more in this aspect 🙂🙂🙂

The author's writing is too rough. Often the sentences before and after are missing subjects, and the scene descriptions are too jumpy. Sometimes the descriptions are completely confusing and give me a headache.

It's available, but there's a little explanation and the introduction is a bit confusing.

Recently, this plot has been far away from the original plot. I wander around outside all day long, my territory does not develop, and I do not fight any wars.

Why is the logic of many of the author's paragraphs so confusing? There is often no logical link between the previous paragraph and the next paragraph, and the author suddenly jumps to something else. I always feel like there are a lot of words missing between the two paragraphs.

Why did you change the name? The previous one was more recognizable and distinctive 🤔

The subject matter is good, but the writing style can't keep up. The early plot is almost like a running story, and it's very empty.

Although as old players and board game enthusiasts, we all know and have even played most of them, but as far as the introduction is concerned, there are too many stitches and I don't want to read them. The elements are too mixed. In the end, two or three elements will be the main ones, and the others will be marginalized, which will only make it more uncomfortable, because people who like them all will most likely have a hard time choosing. Whichever one you marginalize will make people unhappy. For people who only like one part, the other part will be a kind of overt or covert torture whether it is written or marginalized (if the main recommendation is the other part, it will be even more torture). Only pure strangers will not be affected, but pure strangers will not be attracted by these elements (

How did the author do it? I was exhausted from reading a novel.

Author, can't you even write an introduction? Keep this to yourself.

The last dozen or so chapters have been written in such a confusing way that it's too hard to read, especially since they are updated every day, which makes it even more uncomfortable. Now this god, now that demon, a lot of them appear together, and then a lot of settings are stuffed in.

Is there something wrong with my mounted-and-blade system? Is it that one?

The plot drags, and the narrative is confusing at many times, making it a bit difficult to watch, coupled with the occasional misspelled sentence. Overall it is really good. Otherwise, I won't be able to read it slowly.

I really can sew everything, why not sew some World of Warcraft and Dota

Yes, it would be difficult for the protagonist to kill the kind servants whose views are inconsistent with hers, but had she never thought that the evil servants could not be controlled at all? She dared to do it without even preparing the command spell, otherwise Heidi would still have to succumb even if she had two command spells for magic. I like Heidi very much, but I have to admit that Heidi is really difficult to serve. Unless Lan Dai completely conflicts with her principles, it is not non-negotiable, but Heidi is a tyrant, and she will not talk to you as long as it doesn't suit her. There are so many anti-heroes who are easy to communicate with, but she chose one who is so difficult to serve.

I think this long list of questions is divided into several events, which are roughly the brief contents written in the chapters. Is the author planning to be the first person to read the entire book without spending money by reading the questions?

The first two sentences of the introduction are a bit misleading. In fact, in the world view of DND, there is Heroes of Might and Magic 3, and the system of riding and slashing is used as a plug-in.

If you want to see something, you can write it here. I will read it when I have time~

The author's pacing is a bit messy, but it's still pretty interesting. Come on

Keep it up, now I'm starting to dance.

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I'll take a look at some more of your pictures.

Explosive and explosive