The Sanctification of the Flesh Begins with the Refugees

I've read the first two chapters and I think it's okay.

It is the first time for a newcomer to write a book. Flaws are inevitable and it cannot be perfect. If you think you have any questions, feel free to ask them. The author accepts criticism and works hard to correct it. I just ask everyone to be merciful (whisper)

I can't bear it. I don't know if the newcomers can bear it.

It doesn't look good. In a decadent dynasty, just two generals are saints.

As a senior bookworm, the first three openings are not bad, and the red ideas are not bad, which should be the focus in troubled times.

What are they written? Those without names are all trash. If you can't kill the 9th grade, it's like killing a chicken. If you kill the 8th grade, if you kill the 9th grade, it's like killing a chicken. Don't you want to read it after you finish writing it?

Wait for the ending, then subscribe to the ending to see What age are you in? Still trying to show off your desires before suppressing them The protagonist killed so many people

This is just a little discussion, the author is pretty good at deleting posts.

Pure newbie, are you interested in playing and developing xdm😋

"Fantasy Variety Martial Arts: I am a cultivator of immortality, but I am a servant of others"

They are all cheating. Can you be consistent?

It's really no good, you can't write this kind of book like this! You don't have to rely on recklessness to succeed, and it's not interesting either, because of your expanded thinking! Why don't you use the wisdom left by your ancestors? Thirty-six Strategies, etc., Conspiracies, tricks, etc., Various legions and various military souls are a good book, instead of blindly relying on personal strength and relying on individuals to fight a fart battle,