Douluo Dragon King: Double Pupils, Destined for Greatness!

It's indeed poisonous, and I can't deny it. After all, I'm a new author, and there's something wrong with what I wrote earlier. It's extremely poisonous, and I don't know about it. But it's really outrageous to say that it's so bad. It's not like there aren't books that are more outrageous and poisonous than mine. Search for them and read them yourself. It's really boring, looking for a sense of presence.

When I read the introduction, I thought it was a good book. After reading it, I realized that there is a lot of room for improvement.

The author is no longer an ordinary poison. The reason why he didn't break through level 20 is because he didn't absorb the first soul. I don't know how the author said this. If he didn't absorb it, how did he break through the first soul ring? I just want to say one thing, have you ever watched Legend of the Dragon King? If you don't even know the most basic things, there's no need to tell you what to think about it later. 😅

Selfish, childish, only able to make jokes, the plot is inexplicable, I just hope there is a blacklist function, it disgusts me to death

Don't ask about the heroine question. Just Gu Yuena

It's a bit like a novice article, the kind of self-proclaimed article by the author. I feel it would be good to improve it.

Double pupils are the road to invincibility, many bones lead to many roads

The author's idea is actually quite good, but the plot is a bit too much, including the God-killing Spear and the Sky-Destroying Dragon. In fact, there is no need to make it so strong. The early stage strength is enough to suppress the same generation. It feels like the author likes to add some unnecessary plug-ins to the protagonist. A double-pupil martial spirit and a well-developed protagonist are enough to make a thin Dou San. It can also highlight the protagonist's talents. Moreover, the appearance of Butian Sect is very sudden and unnecessary. There are many Dou San forces, so choose one to join (it is recommended to join Noumenon Sect), develop your martial soul well, and the Double-Eyed Supreme can penetrate Douluo. Finally, I would like to give thumbs up to the new author.

Can I ask the single heroine Gu Yuena how to deal with Na'er and Gu Yue, so they are combined? Like Dai Yuhao, they hypnotized themselves and they were originally the same person? Or do you think that one heroine turned into three heroines are actually Gu Yuena, which can satisfy both harem readers and single heroine readers? I remember Zhang Wei himself said that Tang Wutong is not actually Tang Xiaoqi. In the abstract, Zhang Wei knows that this kind of independent personality is no longer a person. The final synthesis of Na'er and Gu Yue is a poisonous point in the original work. Only the early Dragon King People are still doing this. The current mainstream either lets Na'er be Gu Yuena from the beginning and never splits, or makes Na'er and Gu Yue independent. Then you have already boasted of being a single heroine, and you also brought Gu Yue out, how do you end it and forcibly combine it?

The author writes very well. Come on.