The True King of Martial Arts: Starting from Hunting the Sun and Patrolling the Sky

The eyes are too bright, the corners of the mouth are too upturned, and there are too many descriptions. 😰

So what does the title of the novel have to do with its content?

At the beginning, there is a wife with a butt and a breast. No wonder she rushes to the street.

Did you find that none of these authors have the concept of relatives and friends? ? The protagonist doesn't have any clansmen? Are others bullying the protagonist specifically? ?

Have you changed your name? I thought I hadn't seen it? I took a look at the catalog and I feel like I've seen some of them. What should I say? With more than ten years of experience in reading novels, I can't stand it. There are many problems. The biggest problem here is that you have high ambitions and low abilities, and you are not doing your job properly. I feel that I started talking about women when I didn't get up. I feel that what you wrote is nondescript. Isn't the point of martial arts training? You didn't highlight the key points, so you just ran to write about things. It's very messy, and the biggest failure is that women appear at the beginning. I feel that it would be more appropriate for this kind of thing to appear in the middle and later stages. I can't protect myself. Another one will be a hindrance. It will make people speechless and feel that there is no need to write it out. It is very painful to read. Anyway, this book can't be popular by changing the name. If there are problems in the content, it will not work. It is better to abandon it and rewrite it. I really can't read a few chapters for free. (Personal feeling, I am not forcing anyone to think so)