Hancheng That Year

I hope that Bai Shi's new book will not be like the previous one from Hancheng. At the beginning, Teacher Lin and Yoona's life-and-death double journey feels like two people in two lives. The amazing opening, and then the continuous tug and ambiguous entanglement between two people with common secrets and bonds is also very brilliant. At this time, I believe that most people will not hate the single female protagonist setting. Taozi's car crash led to a new plot to make up for the regrets and disagreements in the previous life. As a neighbor 🏘, the little cook gradually wavered with constant companionship and contact. Even though it was a little regretful to add these two people here, it was still good. However, after a night abroad, Taeyeon accidentally entered the game and the taste changed. Even if it stopped here, it was a pair of two people in two lives. The main heroine Yoona, plus the other three (Taozi, Eunjing, 🐏), the changes in Yoona's body and memory caused by time travel are enough to support the plot. However, then Sika, Hyomin, and Crystal continued to enter the trap, and with the addition of a little secretary and a little dinosaur who were always on the side, the plot gradually developed towards a traditional multiple heroines or even a harem, without the amazing feeling at the beginning. The male protagonist of the new book does not necessarily have to be as warm and innocent as Lin Xi, but he does not have to be like Lin Chuyi and Teacher Lin in the Hancheng two-part series, especially Teacher Lin, who has a huge contrast between before and after.

This opening setting is a bit outrageous. Are you screening the audience?🙂

Eun Jung

This start is a bit dangerous 😰 It might turn out to be poisonous.

I just hope that the male protagonist in the new book will not turn into a Teddy like he did at the end of the previous book. The beginning of the previous book was really amazing and it was very attractive until the middle. However, it fell apart at the end and the male protagonist became a Teddy. Now I have no motivation to continue reading the previous book. I am just waiting for the finale. I really hope that the new book will not be like that.

Can't you reborn cleanly? You wouldn't have written it if you didn't make some strange settings.

There are not many idols who are still sticking to the second generation. Now many people are writing about the fourth and fifth generations.

You favored SNSD in the first two books, but this one prefers The Crown!

The setting at the beginning is too restrictive for readers. It is hard to imagine that 24 years later, there is still a setting like this at the beginning, because this setting makes me feel that the rest of the story smells like a substitute 🙂

Hancheng is a real eunuch, woc

I decided to pursue it because of Tara. There really aren't many books written about Tara now.

Personally I don't think it's as good as the first two books! Let's keep it for now and we'll take a look at it later. If it doesn't work, I'm sorry.

Suyuan must have a boyfriend. They were still talking to each other during the bullying. It seems like they started talking to each other before they debuted.

Hahaha! When I see that the protagonist is not named Lin, I know I'm going to pounce! 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

GET!

Come on, this book is really unappealing at the beginning, but I'm looking forward to the next one.

I feel like the timeline is a bit early, they haven't even debuted yet, the girl group is not old enough to be included, and their looks are not at their peak. I don't know if the timeline will be accelerated in the future. If the story line of the previous book was only 1 year with more than 600 chapters, then this one shouldn't have thousands of chapters🤔

This setting is not good, it feels like a substitute, and the starting point of life is too high.

I hope the author can grasp the rhythm of the previous book. I personally think that the previous book was ruined by too many plug-ins, which led to serious fragmentation. From there, I will continue to write in Hancheng, and I will give you a few suggestions. First, the protagonist's entry into domestic officialdom also gives the protagonist a direction, because the protagonist is indeed just lying flat, with basically zero career line. The main purpose of writing about domestic officialdom is to influence the emergence of the Korean restriction order, so that those female protagonists can get better follow-up development, and it is not recommended to enter Europe and the United States. Of course, the fundamental reason for the Korean restriction is still the United States, so it depends on how the author writes it. Second, clean up the Korean gangster officialdom. Not to mention it is too difficult, but it requires difficult goals to offset the previous cheats. At the same time, this is also the fundamental way to solve the regrets of those girls. Third, the protagonist is not short of money, identity, or love. In my opinion, this kind of people should do something that makes them feel valuable and meaningful, instead of hiding and playing games. It's up to the author to decide what to do. Fourth, I read a Korean entertainment book before. When I was drinking or traveling, I often played some mini-games. The author can also insert some mini-games into it. Fifth, you must have an understanding of the heroine's identity. Now it is obvious that she is Yoona's main palace, but the author always writes that Yoona actively wants the male protagonist to collect peaches. This is not logical. You need to make Yoona stand out from the crowd, and put the peach and Sika on a level, so that it can correspond to what you wrote before. Sixth, try to simplify the heroine as much as possible. Why do many books fall into an endless cycle of pushing people at the end? The key is that the identity of the protagonist has come up, and there is no need to slowly develop relationships with other heroines like before. But in Korean entertainment, I think most of the movies are still about cultivating relationships between the male protagonist and the female protagonist. Each female protagonist should have her own plot. Seven, don't cheat later. You are already dead when you are reborn. However, if you add cheats later, what do you want other reborn people to think? Eight, because it is a double-travel story, the author can actually write more about Yoona's perspective.

Damn it, Ah Ma, you're not afraid of the Changhe boss killing you.

Now that I have sent it, I will take it off the shelf and save it for later reading. I ended up seeing "The Eunuch" first. The last book is not over yet, so keep writing it.

I didn't notice and you wrote another one

Why don't you say anything about the new book you've opened? Are you afraid that others will know?

The protagonist is not named Lin? I feel like I'm going to pounce! 🤫🤫🤫