Go Back to 2000 and Rewrite the Script of Life

I came from the little secretary. I have read 170 chapters of this book so far. I have subscribed to all of them. Please rate it. I feel that the first 90 chapters are really well written. The writing is smooth and the beginning is not too bad. I really can't read it at the moment. One is the problem of Xiao Yao. I don't know why it feels like giving away a girl to forcefully open a harem. I think the image of the protagonist in the early stage is very good. It seems that when I meet this girl, I will go crazy. The second question is that the content in your school feels like it is all about attracting girls. The image creation in the early stage was too good. Starting a harem all of a sudden is a bit unacceptable for a harem party. Start high and go low In general, it is quite satisfactory. There is no amazing feeling like the little secretary. The heroine's character creation is also not very satisfactory. There is too little emotional communication with the protagonist. It is the same as the beginning. She is like a bought daughter-in-law. The subsequent chapters are not like those written by the author himself. Maybe it is because I spent money to read the book. I am not satisfied. If there is a chance, I hope the author can reopen the little secretary's book and start from Jiang Ning's appearance. Although there is an ending. But it's still not perfect. From there, I can write at least 500 chapters and expand. Come on.

The opening scene was struck by lightning. After being reborn, he directly used all the savings his parents had saved as betrothal gifts to marry someone else. If the family had a lot of savings, it wouldn't be so ridiculous to give out part of it.

The part about scaring the pigs to be killed was really awkward. . Let's put it this way, if these pig butchers were scared away like this, they were not worthy of doing such a big pig killing business in that era.

I just saw the second picture. I was smoking in front of a ten-year-old girl. I am only seventeen. Is it necessary to smoke this cigarette?

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The first few pages at the beginning are quite enjoyable and interesting to read, but why is the protagonist reborn, only seventeen years old, and still smoking, and he seems to be a heavy smoker? I was thinking that there is no need to smoke to describe maturity, right? This is really a bit discouraging... After reading a few chapters, smoking will slip away again (don't talk about smoking in real life, in online novels, seven out of ten people regard it as a small poison)

Screening readers in the first chapter is also awesome...

This book has a strange smell. The main character obviously seems to be a devoted lover, but from beginning to end, this book reveals the smell of a harem, a harem, and a mother-in-law.

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Counting romantic figures, but also looking at the present. A beautiful young woman, a beautiful mature woman, a favorite among married women, a Jian'an style, a legacy of Wei and Wu, and a carefree life in the world.

Chapter 1: This 50,000 yuan gift in 2000 is so outrageous that a 17-year-old kid can use it casually to make more money.

To be honest, it's quite perverted. Playing around at every turn.

I don't like classmate Xiao's negative description. If you love Bai Lu so much, why do you want to flirt with classmate Xiao? There can be multiple heroines, and I hope each heroine has her own personality and characteristics. To put it bluntly, everyone is a capable person, not a vase. Otherwise, just write about studs, don't talk about relationships, just sleep with beautiful women and throw money at them.

Single and more than nothing? Say something if you know, why is Shennong summoning Shennong?

This class of book friends is not a good thing. They rate the mother-in-law so highly.

The content is quite good and the writing is fluent. Unfortunately, the author is too addicted to smoking, so the protagonist smokes in the third chapter, which is difficult to read.

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At the beginning, all the savings were really a little bit bad. It would be good to change it to part or my father's private money. How come the director has tens of thousands of dollars?

No kidding, buddy, I really like your book. I'll order all of it once it's released.

"Withdrawing all the savings without hesitation" Did you earn even 1 penny in this? 😰😰 If it was earned and saved by your parents, why did you withdraw it without consent? How to convince your parents😰😰 Just because you are a reborn person, you don't consider your parents' feelings😰😰

It was very toxic at the beginning, not mentioning the family money, and then selling the daughter, clearly saying that she had resentment towards her parents-in-law, and then just saying that she got along well with her, and the heroine was almost sold, but she acted like nothing happened. . . Genius Book Welcome everyone to watch

It's a waste of all my votes😤😤😤

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Is the author Yu Chang's trumpet? This writing style is so similar

It's a pity, except for the recent ones, they are all very well written.

It looks very comfortable, and gives me the same feeling as when I was in love with my girlfriend 🤓

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Was the author really confused when he wrote this Xiaoyao? This woman was very rational in her previous life, but the protagonist completely changed once she was reborn! Although the author gives an explanation! But it's not convincing! The author wants to fill the protagonist's harem with people but is afraid of bad characters! Just do it! But as long as you have a harem, who cares how you fit into it! The author is very pretentious!

Author, you can just transfer the outline of Tomato's book "Double Life" and enrich the details (focus on adding some daily parts, remove the stock trading plot, change some poisonous points, and remove the role and plot of a woman disguised as a man), and you can still achieve results.