Traveling Through Conan Thirty Years Ago, Intercepting Concubine Hu Yingli

You should hurry up and put it on the shelves

The book is good, but the updates are a bit slow. I'll give you all the monthly tickets. Updates

What's going on? Why isn't it updated?

It would be better to have a single heroine. From your profile, you want to start a harem. If it were written close to the original work, would the female protagonists be able to accept a third party? Do you still want to cuckold the person in charge of the Suzuki Group? 9 I don't know how I died!

I'm already past Chapter 5 without writing about it, but I have to mention that the original owner is about to die and the main character is possessed by him, and his childhood sweetheart since kindergarten is wearing an uterus, right? It has to be disgusting😰😰

You refused to take first blood even though you had such a good opportunity when Belmode was crushed by the mud, saying that you wanted to give up the harem for a more perfect reason, and wanted to proceed step by step, but in my opinion, this is completely a eunuch article. The opportunity is there, and it's so reasonable, but you still refuse to take action. What a waste are you?

First of all, I set up a character who is not easily emotional at the beginning, and then became infected with nearly ten female characters in more than half a year. What was the purpose of this early character? Secondly, there are all kinds of inexplicable poisonous points, and there are many irrelevant and unsightly plots throughout the long story. It feels like the author is immersed in his own wonderful creativity and cannot extricate himself. Furthermore, the plot is very scattered, with a hammer in one place and a stick in the other. I want to write all the characters, but the lack of ability can't lay the foundation for the plot at all. The new characters cannot be integrated into the story, and the old characters are not connected well, so it seems scattered and delayed. The perception of the characters is also very poor. I want everything and get nothing. Another point is that the protagonist was just a detective with some experience in his previous life. In this life, he has no money, no background, no background, no superpowers. He is not even an adult yet, has no distinctive personality, and does not show much depth of wisdom. He is handsome, has some cooking skills, and has a body that is twice as resilient as ordinary people. Then add so many female characters to him, all kinds of family talents, martial arts, superpowers, fame, etc. Ordinary people cannot bear it, and the protagonist needs to grow up in every aspect.

So far, I have only completed Fei Yingli, and the rest are all ambiguous. New characters are constantly being added. I think I want to make a full-length novel, so there is nothing wrong with it. However, it is unreasonable to keep dragging out the ambiguous book without writing it. At this time, some sharp-headed people will ask, wouldn't the book be gone once SS wrote it? So with so many books, we have to collectively kill them all, right? To put it bluntly, even if he died suddenly, he wouldn't be able to deal with this one. If he just reduced his intensity, it would be over. Chasing books consumes passion, but what about this kind of useless chapter? I feel full just by looking at the chapter title. If I keep doing this, I can only say that I have no desire at all. I remember that my grades were barely okay before, but now look at what they're like

I have been reading the latest chapters. The progress of this main line is too slow. The current chapter is one hundred and seventy, and less than twenty days have passed in the novel. I have been writing meaningless stories in my comfort zone. Sooner or later, I will become an eunuch.

I thought it was interesting when I saw the introduction at the beginning. Now it's over 300 chapters and I haven't made any progress at all. I'm still in high school. When will I be able to write about the birth of the protagonists of Conan as shown in the introduction?

There is no golden finger, and the protagonist is very reckless. He still wants to open the Crystal Palace. What a sweet dream

Adults should not be able to stand it😰

I thought the progress was too slow before so I started to read books, but I didn't expect that it would be free for a limited time🤣

Eri Fei, Yukiko, Bellmode, Akai Marie, Kuroba Chikage, Hattori Shizuka, Suzuki Tomoko, Tetsu Michiko, Miyano Elena, Nakamori Hatiko, Megure Midoriya, Kujo Reiko, I can only think of so many in my wife's life, but the others are easy to say, Akai Marie can be said according to the timeline at the moment Since she is already married, the author had better make a patch so that the protagonist has already communicated with Akai Marie, destroying her original fate of getting married. Logically speaking, it can be done by dressing up more than 30 years in advance. Then there is Belmod, who should be still young at this moment, probably slightly younger than Elena Miyano. Furthermore, Qiuting Reiko is more than ten years younger than the protagonist, so she can also be included in the harem as an alternative 😁

A picture I like very much

The book has already finished. The protagonist, despite all his attempts to commit suicide, successfully confronts the organization, and is resented by the organization's boss, who plans to kill him after he returns to Japan. If it doesn't die in the future, it will look like the organization is too useless; if it dies, let alone it. When I read a book review before, one thing I said is right. The male protagonist is the big Kudo Shinichi. He can cause more trouble than Kudo Shinichi. I don't know how many times I have been in danger. There are people holding axes, knives, and guns on the opposite side. Where is the male protagonist? Unarmed! It's funny, Fei Yingli cried and threw herself on his chest: "Next time you can't do such a dangerous thing again." I have seen the above paragraph at least three times, and every time the male protagonist made a solemn promise, and what will happen next will be the same. And Conan has established a relationship with the FBI and Japanese police in a short period of time. Where is our male protagonist? Or a few small police officers in Tokyo. You dare to confront the organization with this status? It can only be said that the author really designed it carefully in order to find an excuse for the male protagonist to eliminate the organization.

An LV1-level author who writes Conan fan fiction that is surprisingly good. 🙂

There's not much to say. It was quite amazing at first, but now the more I read, the more I read it. I guess the author didn't graduate from high school until he wrote 1,000 chapters (of course, assuming he can write 1,000 chapters), and it's always been ambiguous, with no actual progress. (Hundreds of chapters and only one concubine Yingli)

If you write it as a never-ending unit drama, then there is really nothing wrong with it. The problem is. What you wrote is a novel, not a unit drama script. You can simply write some emotionally advancing plots. You said that the protagonist has such a good memory, you can just copy all the works from his previous life. Wouldn't that save a lot of time and not have to work part-time? That would leave a lot of time to describe other aspects. You have to discuss this restaurant all the time, and it's hard to waste words. Too many words and too few things. Too little progress can appear cumbersome.

①The beginning is actually quite good, but the more you write, the more complicated it becomes. You have to write a little bit of everything, resulting in no main line at all. I suspect that the author has no outline at all. He just wants to cover the characters in Kudo Shinichi's timeline. He wants to write a little bit about each one. Write whatever comes to mind? There is no priority. Who in Belmod can remember how many chapters have not appeared? And Tomoko Suzuki only had one accident, which was hilarious ②The protagonist doesn't have a golden finger, and he doesn't even have a technological inventor grandpa (doctor) like Conan. He does every incident by himself, without even equipment, so he dares to rush to the front line to act bravely and act chivalrously. Don't you think he can't die quickly enough? He dared to provoke the brewery, and rushed to the front when he saw the case in the middle period. He was no different from Kudo Shinichi. He often ignored the female friends around him because of the case (being late for the appointment, etc.) ③To be honest, the protagonist is very hypocritical. It is clearly set that he and Kujo Reiko are cousins, so the family background should not be bad. Both parents died and took care of Reiko's house. Do you have to move out and work on your own to make money? ? ? That was Japan in the 1970s and 1980s, a time when the economy was booming. No, you were a modern Chinese soul who traveled through time and grasped the direction of future development. As a result, you became an izakaya owner? Will it make the first pot of gold? ? ? Stock and real estate speculation (at that time, Japan's economy rose rapidly and started to bubble) + gold (the Bressenton system collapsed, and gold rose in the first wave). Use your parents' assets, borrow some from the Kujo family, and live a comfortable life, okay? ④ Talking about the emotional scenes, there is basically no progress. As of the latest chapter on March 25, 2026, I have only done it with Fei Eri, Yukiko and Belmod, and Kuroba Chikage have kissed, but there is no other progress. There were so many women in supporting roles that I contacted but didn't go any further. Why did you write so much about them? The protagonist has no golden fingers, his parents are dead, and he has no support, so why should he have a harem? The fact that Reiko Kujo can serve as a prosecutor in the Tokyo Public Prosecutor's Office shows that the Kujo family is deeply rooted in politics. Shizuka Ikeha is also the eldest lady in Osaka and Kyoto, not to mention Tomoko Suzuki, who is also married into a powerful family. How could she be willing to work with a husband at the same time? ? And Belmode You should determine the heroine in advance before writing, and then write it in a targeted way, instead of just a little bit of each one. According to the setting and behavior pattern of the protagonist, the most powerful one is Fei Eri + Yukiko + Orikasa Midori + Kujo Reiko (still the light controlled by Omei brother, no However, there is no chance, and the others have to be abandoned), these are the only four in the top of the sky. Fei Eri + Yukiko + Orikasa Midori are all ordinary class. If you start early, the chance is still great. Other big families really have no chance. If you choose one, you have to give up the other. The family background is too strong and the family will not allow it. If the heroine is determined, the plot should be conceived around them, rather than all women being involved in the writing. When you wrote thirty years ago, what we want to see is how the protagonist conquers these wives, instead of asking you to write the case. Can't you tell the difference? Although the world of Conan is said to have cases as its selling point, you are a fan, and most people want to watch the daily life, and occasionally add some cases to spice things up.

First, you must persevere. Don't give up midway, get stuck, or end up unfinished. It's normal to not update as expected, but don't give up. Second, don't be afraid of poor writing. Take it slow and work slowly. For writing fan fiction, as long as the cause and effect of the matter are clearly described, the person who writes it is not a professional writer after all. Real professional writers probably can't write fan fiction. Sometimes there are areas where they are not good at plot description, such as the fighting process and psychological activities. You can focus on it and think twice. You can also refer to the plot descriptions of some well-written similar novels to continuously enrich yourself. Third, some parts of the plot of the original story can be abbreviated, but cannot be omitted. For the original plot that is considered unimportant, it must be briefly described without omitting the past. What you want to write is a complete story, not a diary. At the very least, people who have never seen the original work can roughly understand what happened in the middle. Fourth, try to enrich the description of daily life, psychology, body movements, psychological expressions, the enemy and the enemy and other multi-angle story plots. The original story plot can also be appropriately modified or extended. But you must also be careful, because most readers of fan fiction sometimes don't go too far into the plot that the author has worked hard to create. When seeing such an unfamiliar chapter, most people will choose to skip it. It's okay to change the original plot, but it can't be done in one go. Fifth, except for the protagonist and supporting characters, the author's fictional characters should not exceed his or her control over the plot. If there are too many characters in a certain work that are not in the original story, it will be difficult for readers to accept it and they will not be able to figure out the relationship between the characters. It is recommended to think twice before acting. Necessary characters can be fictional, but try to control them within your own overall story concept. New fictional characters should have prototypes as much as possible so that readers can adapt to them as quickly as possible. Sixth, be able to withstand the abuse and stick to the principles. The psychological quality must be good. No matter how you write, you will be criticized, insulted, intimidated, ridiculed... The work is your own, and you must insist on your own creation. Let those who curse die. Seventh, try not to wear random clothes. In a work, try not to mix characters from other works, except for comic novels. You can also learn from the plots, skills, character prototypes, etc. Of other works. Eighth, the settings should be clear. For some unique settings, explain them in the story instead of writing them in related documents. Many readers don't look at the relevant settings. Ninth, YY is the kingly way, don't be afraid of criticism. Without YY, there would be no point in writing fan fiction. It is precisely because of YY that it attracts attention. Tenth, don't go back. Unless there is a flaw, don't go back and make changes. It is advisable to continue writing. Do not follow the advice of some readers and go back to change the plot. It is recommended that a slow start is the best pace. Don't be afraid of boring and low income. This will be of great benefit to your writing skills and future income. Eleventh, what you like is the most important thing. If you create or adapt stories and characters that you don't like, fan fiction will lose its vitality. Twelfth, don't be afraid to overturn the original settings and deliver packages. Many novels and animations constantly overturn their own settings, and a story without flaws is incomplete. Thirteenth, chapters should be clear, and avoid no titles or chapters. The number of words in the title should be between 4 and 15 words. If the chapter is not clear, many readers will forget where they last saw it after the author updates it. 14. The number of words in each chapter should be controlled at around 2,000-5,000 words. Too short or too long will affect the reading effect. 15. Try to explain the unfamiliar terms, geography, etc. That appear in the novel.

How did I see "Conan: Xiaolan turned into a primary school student and called me daddy" 🤔

More updates? I won't vote if I only have a monthly vote if it's not updated. It's all wasted.

It's well written. I've read a lot of Conan fandoms, and it's rare to see this kind of writing about the older generation.

The only fan fiction I've seen written about the older generation. If the author sticks to it, I will always support it. It's a pity that the eunuch is

Are you a eunuch? Not updated for a long time

There are a lot of little bits and pieces, but after thinking about it, it was written about Conan thirty years ago. I can't find anything like this on other platforms.

If you really don't have any inspiration to transition the plot, you can refer to Kindaichi's case. For example, Yukiko can use Hayami Reika's role, and Reiko is Ersan. For others, you can refer to the content of other novels, such as Demon Guard, Silver Eyes, Conan Reborn as a detective, etc. Then there is the so-called risking death and resurrecting. You don't need to think too much, just pay attention to the plot and rhythm of the story.