You Don't Do Anything Related to Idols!

1. First of all, the author's writing style is average, there is no sense of immersion, and the protagonist basically has no charisma. 2. The setting of the story is very cliché, and no new tricks are written. The villain is basically a character created ten years ago. For people living in modern society, he is basically not like a normal person. The character can have flaws, but it must be logical. The villain has a relationship and does not have to use his brain when being surpassed by the protagonist. The protagonist has an accident and ridicules, and finds that the protagonist is good again and is anxious to find a relationship. Why did he go there so early? The creation of the first villain is extremely old-fashioned and failed. 3. I don't know much about the entertainment industry, so I write a little bit of it for granted.

The protagonists in many novels have such awesome cheats, but they want to go to the entertainment industry to become actors and singers. Wouldn't it be great to be a capital boss?

The songs chosen by this author are really weird. Except for Billie Jean by MJ, I have never heard of any other songs, and they are very ugly 😅

I came here after reading the introduction. I hope there are more plots for various professions. The draft is boring. In addition, save a child whose parents are rich and powerful. . . It's better to have a tragic situation: a single-parent family, so the child has no one to take care of it or has a serious disease, etc., And then the plot can smoothly go to the live broadcast to help the family. There is a lot to write about

I didn't watch it later, but I was speechless when I saw this live broadcast of climbing walls and delivering express delivery. This is a dangerous action or it is not sure whether it will violate the law. Basically, the platform will not broadcast it to you live. The platform should also be held responsible if something goes wrong. The source of the live broadcast will be directly pinched by you. Isn't it true that there is no review mechanism for the live broadcast? 😅

The English songs chosen by the anti-girl groups are the most unsound among many English songs. I haven't listened to English songs in a few years. How come my aesthetics has become like this? Have you never heard of any major bands?

It's 57 chapters and it's not finished yet. The songs played are also very loud. It's hard to choose Michael Jackson's song, but it's not a hot one. You use so many vocabulary to describe your song selection and scene in the novel, but you don't think about it. It's awkward for readers to search it and read it? Just imagine that the 40-meter sword will let you run 39 meters! ! ! Only clouds and seas are okay, but if you can't hear any good songs or lyrics or melodies, how are you doing? Otherwise, you can go to Baidu to search the hot song list, add some keywords, such as old songs, such as the song rankings from a few years ago, and what kind of variety show will you participate in? Participate and participate endlessly, and work as a nanny for others? You have no idea and you don't know how to Baidu? Little Red Book?

You are already a master in dancing and singing at the beginning, so why talk about a career that has nothing to do with being an idol?

The author is also awesome. This introduction is so written that people have no desire to read it.

This book has more than half a million words. Because it was my first time to write a book, I made a lot of mentally retarded mistakes. I won't explain the minor issues here, and will revise them directly in the article. There is a big problem here, which I can't see clearly from my own perspective. I would like to collect the opinions of readers: Based on a lot of data and feedback from readers, the author realized that there was a problem with the rhythm of my book. Especially the content of the first volume. But it's not easy for me to change the first volume. I have considered it before, but if I want to adjust it, at least more than 20 chapters will have to be deleted, which is very troublesome. I can only learn lessons from the second volume. In the second volume, I thought about advancing in multiple ways based on the actual situation. Shorten the content of each line so that readers will not find it boring. But later I found that there was a problem with my writing ability. For example, the early stages of the climax are longer and the climax is more concentrated. There is no other way, so I can only try to take it apart and insert it in the middle. I discovered it while scanning books and studying. The more popular books are basically written in a single line, with a few branch lines interspersed in the middle. The advantage of this is that the reader's attention is focused. Just focus on one plot. You won't be able to remember where the other thread ends while reading. And after the plot is over, the beginning and the climax are very smooth. So I was thinking whether I should change the multi-line parallel progress into one line in the future. Or is there a better way?

The author's subject matter is okay, but the direction of the outline is not pleasing. The protagonist's way of becoming famous is not innovative. He actually took the road of talent show, which was a complete failure. Judging from the title of your book, everyone came to see how you live, okay. Your writing is mediocre, and without good features, how can you attract people? There are so many popular entertainment articles, why do you stand out? I read the book based on the title of the book, but it turns out there aren't many chapters. I went to the talent show and I got tired of reading this. I suggest the author cut it out and read the book. It's the same subject matter, it can be a live broadcast, it can be a lucky audience at a singer's concert, or it can be a celebrity who is a street star. It's better to connect the story of the book with life, which is more suitable than now.

After reading three chapters, I felt very jumpy. After the black punch, I was pulled down to save people in the park. Moreover, all the skills the system issued were Masters, but I didn't see anything like a Master. Also, I didn't know the identity of the person I was saving, so I gave the gun to someone else. I was very unwary and was chased and slashed. (Maybe it's my personal problem)

The plot is overall pretty good, with a few flaws, but you can watch it

A strong flavor of ancient Internet literature

The relationship between the protagonist and the original person is not explained clearly.

I haven't read it yet, but it's difficult to write about this kind of subject matter. The protagonist needs to be omnipotent, but it can't be too overdone, because there have been too many entertainment projects with omnipotent protagonists in the past. But my personal opinion is this. The main point of this subject is to help the protagonist pretend to be awesome in the interaction between fans and barrages. Write roughly the occupation outside the entertainment industry, don't be too detailed (when and what you did), of course it can be detailed, but you have to remember to skip the timeline, and then write about what achievements and how to improve, and then be praised by fans If you find that you have appeared in front of the public eye again, write more carefully (but don't be obsessed with the entertainment industry, so the book will be able to do it, after all, the complete theme is "entertainment", "life" and "career outside the circle"), such as a variety show or a new song, which corresponds to the life of the previous career outside the circle, and then the fans will go crazy to reveal the achievements of the protagonist, and you will have the feeling of pretending to be cool. Then randomly intersperse daily life, the interaction between the protagonist and other celebrities, the interaction between Weibo fans, the psychological state of the enemy villain (this is optional), the emotional line (this is optional, it depends on your writing style and personal preferences), and the interaction with the lower class around you, such as what kind of people you meet (if there is, it is best to be touching, not the kind that inexplicably feels pity for a child. Then blah blah, write about an adult, and focus on how touching it is!). This way you won't get tired of it

Maybe the author is a true fan of rap, but please try to write as little as possible. You won't be able to appreciate it at all, it will feel like noise. I can't even appreciate the raps of Jay Chou, Phoenix legend and Wang Leehom, let alone those little fresh ones.

I flipped through the comments and saw that the author's reply was so serious. No matter what, I had to read the text because of this attitude.

After reading the first half, there are a lot of emotional descriptions, and I think they are all interesting. I still plan to have a single female protagonist, so I'm going yo-yo. At least personally, I feel that reading the novel is a pleasure. If you just pick one you like, there is no need to embarrass yourself.

The fan team spirit interaction is very interesting (⊙o⊙) Please take care of me and write more

As the title says, 🙂 succeeded in "ascension" in this novel (actually I am a book reader and ordered this book after reading it in the serial bookshelf)

The introduction of your title is about the protagonist having various part-time jobs and not doing his real job. It attracts readers who want to see this kind of content, such as me. As a result, there are many chapters of a talent show and variety show! Training is still closed, and there is absolutely no room for neglecting one's job. What about the entire reality show? If the protagonist of this novel was serious about singing and dancing, the protagonist would be doing his job properly, and the novel would be off track. I want to see the protagonist not doing serious work, but as an idol fighting, raising pigs, extreme challenges, and various part-time jobs. Is there any guiding light that can tell me which chapter to jump to?

It reminds me of a hip-pulling variety show I read before. The concept at the beginning is very good, it is a boxing club, and only the last person standing is qualified to sing. When I read it, I thought it was such a crazy novel. If you want to do this, I have to read it. It turned out to be more and more 💩

It's a mess, with no sense of substitution. Choosing a song to commit suicide, it's up to you whether you want to watch it or not

The protagonist written in this introduction is involved in so many cross-industry industries. Does the author really have the ability to write content on those subjects well? A lot of people who write about directors, actors, singers, etc. Don't even know the basics. I've seen a lot of people who write about directors. They write out the script, and then write the storyboards and draw them. Once the writing is done, they leave it to their subordinates to do the work. After a while, the director of the lead role will directly join the set and start working. Do you really think that the work of a director is that simple? Then after filming, I didn't have to worry about anything, I just left it to my subordinates to do the work. When the finished film came out, wow... It completely reached the level of the original work! ! Do you believe that if you give the material to 10 editors, they can edit 10 movies? This novel covers so many industries, can the author really grasp them?

The biggest problem with this book is that it is too big and the idol ceiling is too low. If it doesn't change, the protagonist should be positioned as the king of live streaming, or a superstar. Everyone's positioning of idols is basically fixed. They are handsome, can act cool, can sing and dance, but don't fall in love. If you write about other skills, there will be no real sense, and if you don't write about the plot, it will look thin. Other powerful skills are just superfluous to the profession of idol. You can sing, sing, and write just two albums, and then you can hold concerts. You can win praises at any time. These shows beg you to be a judge. You can be a director or a director, so why not become a director or a superstar? You know so many popular movies and TV series, and you can find people to invest money in just two low-cost ones. You won't make much money by participating in the show, and the copyright will be divided among others. The more abilities you have, the farther away you are from your idol. To give a few examples, Liu Bo, Han Han, Guo Youcai, Wu Jing, Mu Sen, Guo Degang, just pick one, can you imagine that he is an idol, can you have a sense of substitution?

Where is the character card of middle school girl Lin Nuoxi?

The cheat is too strong. There is no sense of substitution. I can't stand it. Try it yourself. If you have such a strong cheat, why would you be a singer or actor? Of course, there are those who are born to sing and laugh.

My first love is gone, I feel depressed and I am not in the mood to sing happy songs, so you sing "Sunny Day" ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? Is there something wrong with your grasp of the style of the song Sunny Day? Even if you sing a nocturne, you are not so peaceful

Mushroom