Under One Person: I, Qingcheng Zhao Yuzhen

I was disappointed before it was put on the shelves. I thought it would be better after it was put on the shelves. Now I read it and found that the chapter I thought was the climax is only one-tenth of the main plot. The rest is all meaningless dialogue. I suggest book friends not to waste time here.

I read a fanfic, and as soon as I see the protagonist wants to get through Xia He, he immediately withdraws. It's quite boring. Xia He has a handsome guy like Zhang Lingyu waiting for him, so he is using the protagonist, a piece of trash with a sperm brain. There are very few people who fall in love under one person. A group of fan authors have to mix things like love and lust into it.

A gatekeeper, just ask you to go out to work?

I don't think it's better to have a single female protagonist or no female protagonist. This is Zhao Yuzhen from Qingcheng Mountain. Just read and write.

Looking at the introduction, what is there to laugh about? People who don't have the ambition to reach heaven will almost die.

Does marrying Xia He count as invading public resources?

It has become more watery since it was put on the shelves and can be deleted.

Just read the introduction and you will know the level of this book...

A loser and then Long Aotian, a Jack Su male protagonist is very embarrassed and disconnected. He gets carried away and always looks for the word "bitch". . . . . Alas, it's boring, I gave up.

The author should either not accept Xia He, or if he accepts Xia He, don't be afraid to change the plot and let Zhang Lingyu use the five yang thunders. This is too abstract to accept Xia He and let Zhang Lingyu use the five yin thunders.

It doesn't really matter what the heroine is. But from before it was put on the shelves to after it was put on the shelves, it was a big deal. After it was put on the shelves, it was just about going up the mountain, getting to know each other, putting on clothes, and then using a sword formation to kill ten guys. Moreover, pretending can also make others pretend to be fake. (Although it was pretended by the Heavenly Master, the simulation of crushing a generation before was equivalent to writing in vain) In summary, this guy has already landed on the ground. Not as good as the beginning.

Xia He

What the hell, is there something wrong with this book? It keeps automatically turning on the subscription inexplicably?

If you haven't eaten it before, you can try it to taste the saltiness. The author just water it. The Seventh Army has been flooded and it's still watery.

The author deliberately watered the word count, the author deliberately watered the word count, the author deliberately watered the word count

There is too much nonsense, a lot of self-motivated and emotional narration.

No update or reply for two days, what's wrong? Could it be that it was cut?

It looks more and more like the one I read before that simulated Shi Jian in his previous life. Under the same person, Fate, East China Sea Slaying God, but that one also had the Super Seminary...

In fact, this book can still be written, and there are many ways. I just sit here and don't want to write.

It was watered down after it was put on the shelves, so I said goodbye. .

Looking at the introduction, I thought I was shopping at Tomato

It was so well written, why did it end so poorly? It's hard to find one that suits your needs. Or is it a new book?

I made a mistake. I thought Zhao Huaizhen was here. If it was Zhao Huaizhen, I would definitely come in and take a look.

The writing is miscellaneous, just cut off the line about returning to the Republic of China, make the sentences more concise, and change the character to be more likable.

Since there is Uncle Jiu in this world, can I get points by contacting Uncle Jiu?

There was too much nonsense, and even after charging money, I was persuaded to quit.

What a bullshit. It is said that people who write well can tell at a glance that they have not eaten any good meat.

What I write now is okay, but I'll update it soon