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It is a good idea of ​​imaginary history and imitates the history of the Northern Song Dynasty. Many descriptions also have a hint of Ming. The problem is that there is a lot of nonsense, the words are not refined enough, the pace is a bit slow, and the updates are a bit inactive. Specifically, there is no protagonist in the first three golden chapters. Secondly, it describes too many settings and plots that have nothing to do with the protagonist. It fails to grasp this degree. The protagonist has a low sense of presence. Coupled with the slow pace, the reading experience is not very good. The third day is still a little short of one chapter. I hope the author will get better and better as he writes more. Many of his articles start low and go high, and they are expected to become historical masterpieces. Please give it a try.

The author underestimated the influence of Jue Temple on the ancients! When the emperor is still alive and he has the power, his first choice is definitely the successor temple. How could he appoint his younger brother as the crown prince? The probability of choosing a stepson in a clan is definitely higher than choosing a younger brother. Don't talk about distant blood connections, they are all the blood of Taizu. Adoption is greater than the distance of blood! Choosing a younger brother means you are making yourself look amazing. This is very funny, you know? There is also the eldest son inheritance system, which is of great significance as the fundamental inheritance of ancient clans! The inheritance rights of concubines are lower than those of legitimate stepsons. What is blood relationship?

The writing is good and the plot is a little bit poisonous. It just feels a bit literary. Maybe I've watched too many female videos and it's a bit grindy. He didn't mention what should be mentioned in one stroke. He insists on talking about the warmth of family. I came in because of this title. This title is not suitable for what you wrote. It's a bit boring. I'll withdraw it.

You are not suitable for male videos, let alone historical literature

You must have watched too many sissy dramas. In ancient times, there was no such title as the head of the family. Outsiders would call the head of the family the official title if he had an official position. If he did not have the official title, he would call him brother or brother. Those with a lower status would be called master, and those in the family would call him master. If he is the head of a clan, he is rarely called the clan leader. Don't be embarrassed all the time.

The appearance of the protagonist in his previous life, Zhang Wei, the most classy man

The writing is interesting and interesting, but the long dialogues make me a little dizzy.

The writing is good, but why should I write from a female perspective? It's all about backyard gossip.

Disadvantages 1. The plot is too similar, the characters are set up, and the plot direction is too similar 2. The protagonist's appearance rate is too low, and there are too many supporting roles, which makes the reading uninvolved 3. The plot progress is messy and slow. After reading twenty chapters, I can't figure out what the protagonist is going to do. I only see a bunch of supporting characters coming in and out. The protagonist has nothing to do, and the main line is blurred.

I hope it's not the kind of novel with tragic endings for family characters... So far, it's quite interesting. The characters have their own characteristics and are not just skimmed over like paper figures.

Slow-paced is still quite rare in today's fast-paced Internet articles. I hope you can finish it. Expect.

If you can't write about politics, then write about teaching and educating people. After all, the title of your book is Taishi, and Taishi is the head of the three princes. You must be able to assist the country in governing the country, and teach and educate people. Before that, you have to study for the imperial examination, instead of writing a bunch of messy emotional dramas. Children of two or three years old talk and act like people in their decades. Since you want to write a historical article, you should learn more about historical common sense. What is written in your article If the main character's grandmother dies, his sister Xue Youqing will want Ding You. It makes people look speechless here. His sister is only a girl. She is not an official, so why worry about Ding?

It's too procrastinating and boring. The biggest fear when writing a history book is to write some inexplicable branch plots. If you don't write down the main plot first, it will be boring to read as soon as you think about it. Look more at the plot trends of other high-quality historical novels, and don't imitate female videos.

No eunuch! I have not entered the palace, so I will take two days off. I will update normally after two days! ! ! Please readers, please don't cancel your favorites. The data loss in the background is terrible 😭😭😭😭 It's really not that I have entered the palace, but I have had too many things to do at the end of the term recently, so I took two days off 😭😭😭😭

The title of the book read "Master Tai", so I came in to read it and found out it was "Master Tai!"

It's too delicate, too complicated, there are so many characters at the beginning, and the writing style is mediocre. If the male protagonist is replaced by the female protagonist and written in a female channel, the results should be much better, what do you think?

The industrial revolution, muskets, and armored ships, you will understand when you see these elements. It is a disgusting and enjoyable article.

The author's writing style is good, and the details are so detailed that it feels like watching a TV series. However, from the perspective of the novel, it seems a bit too pretentious and petty, which is in line with female videos. The author is probably good at writing palace dramas.

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