I Can Go Back to the Xianwu Era

Everything else is good, but I am really annoyed by this protagonist. Almost every chapter requires a lot of ideological education, and a large amount of space is spent describing how the protagonist is dissatisfied with the wealthy family, how he hates the oppression of the other party, how he is indignant, and he is doing things like a fucking harem! Half of a chapter is devoted to the protagonist's inner drama, with lots and lots of emotional descriptions. If you have to write about emotions, you can't just write about emotions! You have to write down what you are going to do! Torturing a few children from aristocratic families is called venting? What you want to break is class! In the end, the protagonist is like a child, almost rolling on the ground. He spends a large chapter describing and portraying the arrogance and ugliness of the supporting character, and then spends a large chapter describing how the protagonist tortures and vents his anger. What is all this? I'm here to watch the plot, not to educate you on ideology, and I'm not here to see you vent your emotions! The plot is very slow and is full of emotions and preaching. Even if you want to break it, you still have to have a concept, right? Just thinking about breaking? How to break? What happens after the break? What's your plan? How to build it? If there is no plan and no new rules, then you just want to become a new cannibal and a new family, so go ahead and become one. You keep mentioning over and over again how oppressive the family is and how resentful the protagonist is, but you just don't know what to do or what to do. So what is the difference between the protagonist and a clown? Originally, I really like this setting. The fairy-like atmosphere is also well created, and the supporting characters' IQs are well described. However, the protagonist is really disgusting, with little wisdom but no big plans. He has endless dissatisfaction and no depth of thought.

There's something wrong with you immortal! Also, is it too early to kill living beings to achieve enlightenment when you first come here? What is sinful is the technique of transforming other people's evil thoughts, so the ultimate immortal is a great demon 🙂

It's messy and unappealing. It's just trash for Goldfinger. The first chapter of Goldfinger is as fascinating as you can't write. The water method written has no language b,,. Trash can filled with water