People in the Entertainment Industry, What the Hell Is the Awakening Game System?

The protagonist is quite contradictory. You said his motivation is to upgrade. He doesn't want to learn anything, but still wants to complete the task. Moreover, he doesn't remember any of the numerous entertainment products in the dungeon world. You can say that he just puts on a show, and he is keen on participating in activities, so he is quite disconnected To put it bluntly, there is no endogenous motivation for the character's actions, let alone the relationship between the original world and the copy. It feels like it will not take too long to write.

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The dungeon plot is much more interesting, but the real-world plot is more boring. It's just a real-life variety show replaced with some original characters. The original characters have no sense of substitution and are a bit stereotyped. I skipped it and it didn't affect the reading experience. It's really a bit bad.

The first chapter was poisoned to death, how can you really show no logic at all? The protagonist has no knowledge of music theory, no singing talent, and everything is mixed at the beginning. It's really a contradiction for the sake of contradiction. If you start in the entertainment industry or a variety show, you have to rely on music and variety shows. If you are serious about entertainment, you only need to write music and variety shows. Nine out of ten will be eunuchs, and the remaining one or two percent will be tepid and lukewarm.

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Looking at other comments, some people said there are too many copies. Some people want to see a copy and dislike it. I just want to see a copy. These copies are all copies written by no one in the film industry and are very good-looking. Especially the copy of the mv is simply groundbreaking and unique. Film and television copies are either martial arts or fantasy. Coming to the city is like money flowing, Ode to Joy, Little Joy and the like. . This book is a very good copy. It would be better if you focus on the copy

The author has confused the main plot. The title of the book is about the entertainment industry, but most of the content is copywriting, and the main plot of the entertainment industry has not been advanced much.

When the popular singer acted like a monster for the first time, I wanted to leave because I had already anticipated the author's writing style, but for the sake of the fresh setting of the entertainment + game copy, I still wanted to read on. The more I watched it, the more uncomfortable it became. It was more uncomfortable than I expected. First, this way of writing is stupid. It's like watching the person opposite you dig a big hole and throwing knives, glass shards, and arrowheads into the pit. You don't do anything, you don't stop him, you don't step back, you don't hide behind him. You just watch him finish the work with a curious face, and then wait for him to say to you: "Please jump in." Second, this plot is very stupidly written. According to your way of writing a conspiracy theory plot, it is almost impossible to write it in a way that makes readers happy. The villain only needs to move his fingers and lips, and the protagonist will face the overwhelming malice. Then the protagonist will fall into the trap of self-evidence. He will jump up and down and do a lot of work. In the end, the villain will "explode", "close the Weibo comment area", and end up being a "coot". Do you think this is very satisfying? Thirdly, this kind of plot makes the protagonist stupid. The main plot of the protagonist requires the protagonist to take off with the help of the program, so logically speaking (I should not need to analyze this logic), the protagonist and this traffic have formed a competitive situation, and smart people must know how to beware of competitors. The protagonist you wrote knows how to observe the movements of competitors, which is good, but after observing, what next? I feel worried, nervous, and have bad premonitions every day, but I do nothing and just talk. Fourth, this is an extension of the third point. The protagonist's subjective initiative is too poor, or in other words, your writing does not reflect the protagonist's subjective initiative. This is a taboo in novels. A protagonist who is always passive and confrontational will hardly win the favor of readers.

It's not very well received. The original world itself is not favored in entertainment. The novel also spends a lot of time writing a copy of the world. The progress of the main plot is quite slow. It's not very well received. I wish the author well.

I also jumped directly to the copy. I can only say that I will chase it first. If it is not clear whether the main copy or the main entertainment circle is released after it is released, I will have to abandon the book. I'm not saying it's bad, I can only say it's a matter of personal preference. I'm not here to watch movies and TV dramas in the urban category.

There are too many copies, and the hierarchy is a bad review. In the dungeon, it is best to improve the protagonist's singing ability, acting ability and songs after passing it. The level is really a big failure. After all, if the level is improved, at most it can only improve the talent, and the talent can be improved through dungeons. It's not that there are too many copies, but that the copies are too long, which leads to unclear main and branch lines. The best thing is to have three to five chapters to describe the situation of the copy a little bit, and then start the main real world.

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It looks good, both in the main world and in dungeons. It's the first time I've seen this kind of theme.

It's a bit confusing. I can't understand what the protagonist is doing or what he thinks. He just encounters things, experiences them, and then passes them by without thinking about anything. There is no main line

It looks okay. In fact, it is better to treat urban film and television unlimited writing than pure entertainment.

This dungeon is really exciting. I was quite immersed in watching it, but the good guy suddenly switched to a dungeon and kicked you out.

The story in the dungeon is too long and too detailed, and it overwhelms the focus. I can only skip reading.

The writing is really messy and there is no main line at all The reality and the copy are intermittent This book is useless

I just read it randomly. Does the author know what masking means? One singer and one assistant are enough. Put on a hood and use whatever partner you want to force a relationship between a man and a woman.

I don't know why I always like the author's writing, but the settings don't seem to be perfect. Do you have any similar recommendations? Is there any new book by the author? 🙂

It's very interesting. When will you write a new book?

After reading this book, I think it's okay When will you release a new book?

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The copy is really too long. If not interested in a copy. You can skip 60% of the plot directly

Chapter 66, half of which is in the dungeon, read the first dungeon from beginning to end, and skip all the rest.

Either change the writing method, or change the classification or title of the book,

Personally, I quite like the copy, and the writing is pretty good.