Biotech Company No. 42

Biotechnology, if we use a completely different path to squeeze the market and open up the market, we will be attacked by all prosthetic companies as soon as there are signs of it.

The biggest problem is that there are no characters in the dialogue, and there is no distinctiveness between the dialogues, so it is impossible to tell who said what at the first time. Secondly, many important matters are used directly without explanation. For example, the protagonist's experimental transformation process of using various organs to modify firearms makes people feel baffled and does not satisfy the readers' curiosity.

It reads very fragmented, very fragmented, and it doesn't highlight the biotech weapons. That's what I came for. Anyway, it seems so messy now, with things here and there, and they can't be connected. The main thing is to write about the various creations in the system. As for the climax, I just skipped it to the end to take a look. I'm not interested at all. I don't know what he wants to express. It's just chaos. The climax is just to express that the protagonist is very brainless and does all the stupid things. As a result, My own people died because of this. It's really boring. What age is it and you are writing this kind of thing? You are not that good at writing, so I can't stand it. My blood pressure is high when I read it. It's still like this later. So this book must not be read by many people. Please change it. At least it's not so messy. I didn't know that the character dialogue is so messy. The transitions are all sudden. It's so sudden that it can't be connected at all. I won't say it anymore. That's it. I'll see if the author changes it later. The above is my personal opinion.

While you are being investigated by the company, you suddenly take out this kind of biotechnology that has never appeared before. Isn't this courting death? It's okay to cover it up and use it. You can buy it.

For the author to see. Overall, it is good. The character creation is online, the structure of succession and transition is clear, and the settings are also ingenious. The plots follow one after another and can be said to be very exciting. But in fact, the main line is not clear yet. It should be because the plot has just begun to be laid and has not yet begun to unfold, but the main characters who have appeared so far have been fleshed out. Looking forward to the follow-up. |･ω･`)

I haven't seen it yet. It's so deserted.

Maybe I watched too much or something, but I found it boring and not interesting at all. Why don't I play the 2077 game or join a group? Why don't Biotech play Contempt?

Another author who challenges cyberpunk, I don't know how long it can last 🙂

It's pretty good, why doesn't anyone see it?😭

Is there any success in opening a super virtual game company in Night City?