Pokémon: My Guide to Raising a Pokémon

Emmm, it's great. It's not like it was written by a newcomer. There are also problems. The emotional scenes are too abrupt and stiff. There is no need to create a separate character just to write about emotions (unless you think about how to enrich it later, have your own dreams, have your own career, and work hard for it. ), Of course, it is better for novices to change it (my personal opinion is to change it a little bit, and change it to something like gratitude? Or because saving the dream monster caused him or her to pay attention to the protagonist? It is a bit strange to suddenly drop a female protagonist). I always thought it was an unimportant role in the front. Also, the teamwork routine of the college entrance examination is a little bit old. I hope it can be passed quickly (personal profile), and I hope the author will decide the focus earlier. I personally think it is best to write about the relationship between the elf and the protagonist and the training of the elf in the gym battle (if there is an outline, treat it as if I didn't mention it)

It feels like there are so few people. The writing is obviously very good.

The writing is very good. Who is the author?

I feel like the writing is okay, just a bit too bland, but that's also a characteristic

I gave you two monthly votes

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Are there levels?

The Kyuubi family has a lot of strange skills, and they can also learn seals. It's so awesome that even 🐭🐭 can be targeted. The Kyuubi's egg moves include sweeping and slapping.