Conan: Choose One of Three Options at the Beginning, but the Sequence Potion

1: It is better to divide the male protagonist into three, each one has his own heroine or no heroine, such as the fortune teller and Miyano, the audience and the witch, and the thief has nothing😄 2: This situation in the comment area is most likely caused by someone who is jealous and targeted, and there has not been any poisonous trolling or rumors. I have only seen this kind of organizational power on Xiaohongsu. Otherwise, with so many starting points, how could you have met all the remaining people? 3: In fact, the traffic you are getting now is Conan and Mystery, but the readers who are left want to see Mystery's potion system causing trouble in other worlds. This aspect must not collapse, the combat power cannot be suppressed, and gin cannot suppress the magician. 4: I heard that the author has many saved manuscripts, why not send them to me and let me help you grasp them😄

The author doesn't care about the speed of the plot. Anyway, the timeline of the Conan world is rotten. What everyone is watching is the protagonist's plan to control people's destiny, promotion and daily life with Miyano. The current shortcoming is that the quantity is too small. Please ask the author to use Xuan Gong again and update it five times a day. Even a platinum author can't beat you 🤓

After reading it, it's ok. Daily writing, focusing on the daily case of sugar-weak Conan. The poisonous points such as clones are not obvious in the comment section. To be precise, the clone setting is only highlighted when in the consciousness space. The settings of the three personalities are weakened during actual actions. Even if more is written, it is to indicate the follow-up actions. The thief is Kaito's plot, the fortune teller is Conan, and the audience is the extraordinary ability. It can be regarded as the setting where the author takes three serial potion services for the protagonist. The following is a message to the author I like the daily aspect, but the case aspect also has a sense of daily life, and it goes by at once. I hope to expand the plot of the case For example, intervening in the case to save the person who should be saved (Yueying Island) There is no need to save people (such as your banker case), you can enter the scene after the dead person to judge the case (refer to The Corpse Collectors) You can also write plots such as criminal planners, which is very convenient for the audience's ability (real people appear and the prisoner knows you will It is a standard criminal mastermind plot, or the real person does not appear and directs subconscious guidance) (In this regard, you can also read The Corpse Collectors. For the long version, refer to The Corpse Collectors 1790-1835, and the review of the short story The Corpse Collectors 2466 is also very cool and you can copy it) Otherwise, it will be copied in the future. It feels like the plot of the case will start to become more complex very quickly. When you encounter a case, people will arrive, cheat to get the answer, and prevent the case (this is the case for bankers and counterfeit money kidnapping cases) and start the process. If this is the case, it is better to weaken the plot and just give out sweets on a daily basis. We mainly come here to pursue the secret abilities and the daily routine of making sweets. The other thing is whether more people or the world should know about extraordinary abilities. It feels like the author is trying to make a big deal out of the Fire Thief ritual (that's Mr. A who asked Si Pu Qinglan to commit suicide live). If it's not written well, it's extremely toxic. Did nothing but expose myself. After that, it was difficult to write every day. My expectation for the author is to ensure that the Kaito plot (exhibition of extraordinary abilities) and the daily plot (giving candy) are guaranteed. Conan's plot (reasoning) can be based on the corpse collector. If this is not possible, reduce the plot of the case to avoid a lot of repetitive repetition.

After reading it, I feel that it is essentially a novel about love, with just a few layers of skin. But now the love story is basically coming to an end, so I started to talk about spiritual energy recovery and the like, but the connection felt very awkward. Just as I was getting a little passionate, it turned back to the love relationship between the male and female protagonists. First of all, the daily part about love is really well written. At least everyone likes the heroine, but the single heroine is destined to have a main plot, otherwise it will not be long at all. It cannot be filled with women like a harem, and there is no Shura field. Now we can consider ending it, so the spiritual recovery type main plot has come out, but it is hard to say. What I actually want to see is that after the extraordinary arrival of Conan, the heroes join together to compete in the Central Plains, intrigues and deceit, wars are raging, countless ambitious careerists pop up like weeds, the world is bustling and prosperous, and the protagonist sits firmly on the fishing platform, watching the fish in the water keep jumping and eager to transform into a dragon. Um, but I feel that as a god, the protagonist's personal moral level is a bit high. Maybe he can't tolerate these careerists with evil intentions and dirty methods. He diverts resources to the protagonist group and crushes him to death without giving him time to develop. Not to mention that there is a female protagonist with a higher moral level watching next to him. I don't dare to think about it. I can already see how powerless the villains can be. When countless villains died tragically, only one Du Miao was left. This Du Miao was ruthless, sharp and decisive, with the courage of a hero in troubled times. He seized a God-given opportunity with great scheming, and finally found that the opponent had a trap, and his own attacks could not even break through... I hope it was just me overthinking it.

The plot is developing too slowly now. There are two ways to speed up the progress 1. Use a large number of updates to crush the progress 2. Repeat the previous one

I have read the latest 56 chapters, which are issues that are of great concern to the comment area and the circle of friends. After reading them, I feel relieved, Wu Niu First of all, there are three personalities. After reading it for so long, I feel that the "Stealer" personality has Amon's sense of fun, and the "Audience" personality has Adam's calmness and then there is nothing outstanding "The Seer" is more like the main personality, which is the real protagonist in the author's works. When the three of them communicate privately, the difference is more obvious. When interacting with other characters externally, there is only a difference in ability and self-profession As for the heroine, the number of words is too few at present, but it feels okay, so there is no problem for the time being As for Goldfinger, the thief sequence is seven, the audience sequence is seven, and the diviner is eight. In terms of promotion, there are only rituals and no magic potions. I hope to see interesting things in the rituals, after all, "Conan" It is impossible to find the ingredients for potions in the world. It is just like drinking potions from sequence nine to sequence zero at once. The ritual is for unblocking. As for the problem of losing control, it was not there at first, and there is no need to worry about this setting The summary is that it is quite bland at the moment, with no highlights and no poisonous points. It is suitable for flowing water and passing the time with nothing to do This fandom is less poisonous and less OOC, which is very rare

Not overestimating one's ability, but writing about a schizophrenic protagonist

With 3 personalities, you give me a single heroine, but you give me pure love? The harem party is gone

Shennong is here calculating food and grass, which is more about daily life and more about fun. The protagonist is divided into three, which is handled fairly well, and the control of the original characters is also pretty good. It's just that the beginning was a bit slow. If it weren't for the labels of Mystery and Conan, I would have run away after reading the first two chapters. Xiao Ai started to feel better after she came out. As a fan, it's still more of a daily routine, isn't it just about watching the interactions with the original characters? Overall, it is considered food and fodder, for me. If you like something daily and a little fun, you can watch it. It's good if you don't completely assume the role of the protagonist. At the current starting point, the new books of Secret Fans and Conan Fans are considered good. They can be used as a meal replacement if you can't find good Secret Fans and Conan Fans. Of course, it is difficult to write for three protagonists. Especially in the latest chapter, the protagonist is divided into three with more differences (like completely becoming three protagonists). Although the fortune teller is still the main character now, there is no guarantee that the latter one will collapse if it is not handled well. I think there still needs to be a main perspective. (Personal opinion) The audience and the thief will eventually let the clown reach the palace of the fool. My impression is that the audience and the clown are alternative plug-ins for the fortune teller. After all, the fortune teller can defeat the fool, so naturally the penetration is deeper. If the heroine is Xiao Ai, as the relationship deepens, everyone will naturally enter into different situations, and then she will feel green. (This depends on the author's background) Everyday writing often has shortcomings, and it needs to be cultivated. Otherwise, if you don't read enough, the reading experience will be relatively poor, and you will always feel like you have just read a little and then lost it. The refreshing arrangement is okay, not completely watery. The promotion ceremony also brings a certain sense of expectation, as well as the collision of the mysterious path ability and Conan's world view. I am quite looking forward to the follow-up complex. The overall thinking is still online. It can be regarded as writing up to a certain number of words, without jumping around, and can produce high-quality badges. At the starting point, the mysterious and high-quality fanfics of Conan have not been published for a long time. If you are confused, you can take a look. I don't know if Conan and Mystery have lost their popularity, or if the good authors are writing original works. I haven't seen these two good writers for a long time recently. Do you have any recommendations? [The author hopes there will be no eunuchs! Let me tell you first, as long as it doesn't jump, I will order, but I will skip the order. It is easy to feel that you are losing money after ordering. In addition, there is really little money, so I cannot support all orders. As long as this level is maintained before being put on the shelves, it will be supported by the first order. I hope the author will be able to write it after the first order is more than 500 yuan. Your book should be non-stop and can be picked up later. (I have been reading books for so many years, and I think most of them are high-quality, except for a few that are broken or have a lot of work.) If you are interested in the subject matter, be patient and read five to ten chapters. It is really good for your appetite, and it is definitely food.

It's a bit abstract. It's only sequence seven after more than fifty chapters. I've never seen a mystery fan upgrade so fast. The writing is fine but the outline is problematic. The shallow water mystery in the world of Conan is not just a fish fry. I can't figure out what's going on with a flame-jumping Conan in my life

It's getting boring. Maybe the author didn't realize a problem, that is, there is a big difference between extraordinary people and humans, and this is more reflected in the spirit and spiritual body. Although mid- and low-sequences can still be killed by guns and cannons, their mental, spiritual, and ancestral curse resistance are far superior to humans. For example, it is basically impossible for mortals to escape from the hypnosis of psychiatrists. Long-term hypnosis can even make people violate their own principles, distort their minds, and even go against their instincts to die. In theory, you can set certain conditions like the Lost City of Beasts to allow the hypnotized person to "awaken" when needed, but this would be a cross-streaming flow. This is not unfeasible. Use the island of the soul to build a group dream, and use the ocean of group subconscious to connect other islands, or put a mental plague in Sequence Six to infect others. Use the "Seven People Theory" to put seeds into the entire world, just wait for time. Aren't there crimson stars and oceans at the same time? I don't believe it can't be done. However, what I said earlier is wrong. There is no resistance at all when being controlled to death, and the method is even more blunt than the original work. Therefore, the protagonist's hypnotic ability is significantly enhanced with the blessing of a person, so he can completely perform the operations I mentioned.

The front is fine, but the back is a mess when opening the virtual world.

The idea is very good, the mystery is plus Conan, but the plot feeling cannot keep up with the idea. Let's not talk about Shirley's organizational status and psychological OOC. Saving Miyano Akemi must be at least a small climax. No matter whether it is the audience, the thief or the fortune teller, a big drama can be constructed. It is a bit disappointing that it is over with these few sentences. There aren't many explosive points in the main plot of Conan. Except for the theatrical version, the next explosive point will have to wait until Pisk.

The first part is good, but the second part is about religious beliefs and superpower war. I can't stand it anymore, as if I suddenly skipped a book 😅

The ritual of cheating fate is very ordinary, you can obviously write that paragraph. Miyano Akemi died, and everyone thought he was dead. Gin thinks so, and so does Akai Shuichi. His sister thought so too, and even Detective Conan had seen the body. Even Japan closed his account, but he came back to life. 🤣If you insist on writing about yourself, you are deceiving yourself and deceiving fate. According to the writing method I mentioned, this paragraph can be written very long, and it can be very brain-burning. It feels very immersive and refreshing.

How should I put it, scrawled! You shouldn't write about the metaverse and the like, plus the reality and the extraordinary, they are all poisonous points. After listening to the suggestion, it is enough to end the story of the Metaverse with half a picture!

The first part of the story is good, mainly the dialogue and interaction with Shiho, and the love story is interesting. Occasionally, a few cases are added to embellish it. The oppression of the winery is almost eliminated. It is a relaxed love. Later, things started to go wrong from the Baker Street theatrical version. Many extraordinary abilities were introduced to the public at once. I skipped a few chapters and read it. I also made a virtual reality. I don't think that the extraordinary in the mysterious world is a good thing. Idealistically, it will become a big and empty thing like Datong society and the sea of stars. The protagonist's extraordinary promotion is too fast. Once you become invincible, you can start doing whatever you want.

It's okay to be extraordinary alone, but if everyone is extraordinary, Conan's world view will collapse. The author might as well continue writing according to Conan's plot, just change the killing method in the original plot to sequence skills, and slightly change the motivation.

It's a good-looking but a pity work. If you want to experience the love emotions in Conan, this work must be a good one, but in the middle and later stages, it has become the Conan version of the Lord of Mysteries. I cry, I haven't seen such an interesting mourning palace for a long time. It's such a pity 😭😭😭

After 140, there was no need to read anymore. He chased me until 4 o'clock in the morning and showed me a big one, and I was really convinced.

I recommend what I just wrote: Audiences of the Conan World 😁

I want to be a neighbor with the author, and let the author raise my seed like Lao Wang

Yukino wearing Shiho's skin is very good

It's a bit toxic in the middle but still pretty good-looking. It's a pity that it's unfinished. When I was still looking forward to the outcome of the extraordinary battle in the metaverse, it said it was going to be repaired, but there was no follow-up. When I thought that the extraordinary world was going to be integrated with reality, the result was still the same as usual. There were only cases where some more props would be added, but the conclusion remained the same. It's a pity that this is a good subject.

Not much, I hope the author will work hard.

The three personalities sharing the heroine is indeed a poisonous point, but if you hypnotize yourself to regard the three personalities as the three sides of one personality (that is, your behavior and abilities will change intermittently), the emotional line is actually pretty good. It's just that the switch between the mystery side and daily life always feels very abrupt. After seeing Gin decide to betray the secret world after being exposed to it, interest suddenly arose. As a result, it soon switched to daily life. The protagonist and Shiho went shopping, which was a bit uncomfortable.

This book is quite good, and I feel like I can keep writing it. I read a Naruto fanfic, and when I did sit-ups repeatedly, I felt like it was cut off again, but not completely cut off. It was that feeling of wanting to run away at any time. Even if it was well written, the plot suddenly fell apart. Just to give an analogy, the normal story is 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 and ends with flowers, but his is 1 2 3 4 5 6 8 9 9.5 1 2 3 5 6 7 9 1 2 3 8 9 1 2 3 4 5 6 9 1 2 3... It goes on in an endless cycle, infinitely close to the end, but there is always a new chapter. I forgot the name of this book. I only remember that the protagonist of this book is the eldest son of Ingyro. Although the above numerical metaphor is not appropriate, the difference is not too big. It means that if you write a good book, it will suddenly speed up the pace. Normally, speeding up the pace is to adjust the drama, and it will pass more naturally. He is different. He just gives you the kind of book that can't be written, so he just writes two or three chapters and gives a hasty ending. Take this book as an example, you can directly pick up the previous plot later.

Later, the combat power was crushed, the upgrade was too fast, and the quality was online before the metaverse, but the global extraordinary plot collapsed later.