Hand in the Future Entrustment App and I Will Fly to the Motherland

When I read the book, I read about 145 chapters. How to put it... To use a video game analogy, "the values ​​​​expand too fast and the balance has collapsed." If it is always a warm and small commission, the identity of the protagonist does not change much in a short period of time, the self-perception is relatively stable, the knowledge and skills are learned, and the status is improved little by little, the readers will have a sense of substitution, and it can be written for a long time. Even if the local writing crashes, you can go abroad and let the crashed data return. Readers will feel that their regrets in reality have been made up for in the book, and they will pay for this sense of satisfaction. But at present, the monetary system has collapsed, identity recognition has also collapsed, and the world view is about to collapse. The underlying logic is crumbling, and nothing can be written despite stuffing it into it. There is a kind of "snowball is getting bigger and bigger, and it can no longer stop the car, nor can it control the surrounding areas." The feeling of "life and death"... It's like the boss taking people to a clothing store and asking them to "plug" the clothes off the wall, the emperor hoeing the ground with a golden hoe, "The Prince of Tennis" and aliens playing tennis. It is neither logical nor immersive, and it is no longer a "cool story". Don't try to write something that deviates too far from your own life and knowledge. If you must write, check the information before writing. Don't think about what comes out, and don't make too big a leap in thinking. Qidian does have a lot of leaps in thinking, and it seems that every book that comes out becomes a masterpiece, but they follow logic and the logic is self-consistent. The so-called "outrageous but reasonable" is the reason why they can constantly refresh the world view without causing it to collapse. Well, I personally feel that it is not easy to save. I have completed the 1500 chapters of other books in just 150 chapters. Isn't it really necessary to solve the commission of aliens and multi-dimensional creatures in the future? There is a feeling of systemic systemic immune disorder + multiple organ failure. Hmm... Like progeria? This is no longer a disease that can be solved by changing the heart, liver, spleen, lungs, and kidneys, or by ECMO or rehabilitation exercises. What a pity~

Although I like the author's book and the setting is good, the recent events are really too idealistic. Although it can be said that if you can't do things in reality, can't you do it in a book? But not all readers can clearly understand human nature. What if they are really affected and become too naive? I don't mean to be alarmist, I just think you can write about beauty appropriately, but don't overdo it. Appropriate beautification and idealization is the pursuit of beautiful things, but excessive idealization will mislead some ideas. For example, the previous provision of pensions to all eligible elderly people is a matter of state function. Where do you put the country? If we can gather a few people to work together, it can be said that everyone is doing their best together, and individual strength will not be so prominent. But if it were to be done by a single person, what would be the difference from Shen Wansan who directly funded the construction of the Nanjing city wall for Zhu Yuanzhang? Isn't doing something beyond the scope of one's functions considered to be an act of overstepping one's authority? Also, let's talk about directly giving billions of diamonds to friends as gifts for their mothers. Although friendship cannot be measured by material value, the best way to communicate between friends is actually not to do this. As mentioned in the chapter, on the one hand, who gave this gift in the end? On the other hand, the other party has unilaterally accepted such a big gift. Should the other party consider how to repay it? If so, will he be able to repay the favor in equal terms? Will he feel any pressure if he can't repay the other party? Is it really normal if we don't return this unilaterally accepted friendship? This is not a gift, this is a test of humanity and friendship! At the same time, I hope that when the author writes about the heroine, even if she is rich now, she should also carefully consider the actual corresponding value of a large amount of money. I have been reading at the starting point because I feel that the author here has a brain and a relatively high writing level, and will not constantly write some overlord stories. Billions and tens of billions are not a big deal. Who knows that a certain army spent 30 billion to build a car, but what kind of car will it be? And don't count the elderly over 60 years old. There are more than 200 million elderly people over 70 years old in the country. Even if only one-tenth or even one percent of them are qualified as old people without support, do you know how big a number is 1,500 per person per month? 30 Billion or 3 billion. What about a year? 360 Billion or 36 billion. This is just the current group of old people. Although some of them will gradually die, there will be a steady stream of people getting older and joining in. The next few decades will be the peak of our aging, and the number of elderly people will increase. With the power of one country, it can only enable some elderly people who do not need pensions to receive a few hundred monthly subsidies, but it cannot fully cover everyone. No matter how rich the heroine is, is it reasonable for her to do something that exceeds the capabilities of national institutions? I don't want to write so much to say that the book is not good. I really like the setting of the book. I will sympathize with and cry when I read some parts. However, I don't want the author to write too idealistic, so that it is seriously inconsistent with reality. A slight lack of compliance can be said to be our expectations for beauty, but a serious lack of compliance will be misleading.

Very healing, dreamy storyline. At the turning point, I can change things that I once regretted and change my destiny for different people again and again. Quite patriotic. It's not time travel, it's not rebirth. 😤Come on, bangbangdi

The setting is quite good, and the writing in the early stage is really nice, although there are some small bugs that were not designed well. For example, can the million-dollar bonus from the police station in the early stage be collected on the same day? For example, isn't the protection of cultural relics on the high seas involved? I opened it directly. Is it protected by a pair of gloves? What's written at the back is so exciting that even a low-class guy like me wouldn't dare to think about it. It's so exciting. No matter how you write, being able to write is much better than many people. I wish the author will write more good-looking novels in the future.

The beginning is very good, but after reading it, I feel that loving the motherland is a very correct thing, but it is not good to describe some things too far away from the facts. There are many bad things abroad, but it is not to this extent. Real strength should recognize the good of others, but I have the strength to do better than you, otherwise it will appear to be a different kind of inferiority complex.

😥 It's getting more and more exaggerated... Although I like slap-in-the-face and cool articles, but... It can't be this illogical and cool.

Wow, wow, open a new book, collect it first 🙂

It looks good, has been collected~ Looking forward to the follow-up~

It looks great, good luck to the author! Collected😄

Nice book, good quality, good luck to the author

Super pretty, please give me more updates! ! !

The city of Shanghai sounds like Shanghai. In a first-tier city, it costs 8 million. It is nonsense to buy a large flat floor of more than 200 square meters or a house in a good school district. Even if you count places like Hangzhou and Xi'an on a first-tier basis, if you say 8 million to buy an ordinary community with just over 200 square meters, it is not in the city center. Now in third- and fourth-tier cities, it costs 10,000 square meters.

This is a novel after all, and it is even a world similar to an ideal state constructed by the author himself. Once you understand this, don't get too hung up on where it is inconsistent with reality. As long as the character setting and plot are generally reasonable, then watch it. It is true that the writing is weak in some places, but the author must also be given the opportunity to grow. If you are willing to read it, just read it as an idealization that everyone hopes for. If you feel that it is too divorced from reality and cannot be accepted, do not force it. It feels a bit like growing up with an author one by one. It can be felt that the structure of this book is a bit big, and the world and class involved are not enough for the author to control in some places. Come on!